• Member Since 1st Apr, 2019
  • offline last seen May 16th, 2019

The_Clopper


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9600452
N I'm only here for story description.

I like your idea. But try to slow the pace down a little. And I noticed a few mistakes. Dont get me wrong, I like the story. But i would recommend getting an editor.

9600452
I'm only here for the horse jesus what's wrong with your face?! :fluttershbad:

9600633
That's where I got it, but I can't link it because it's NSFW and most people when they first go there won't know how to switch from the "Default" filter to either the "Everything" filter or the "18+ Rule 34" filter.

Comment posted by Angel_Wings deleted May 3rd, 2019

9603381
This author seems to just write troll fics.
He's another Twistedcupcake

9605475
B***h, this isn't a trollfic! It's a clopfic!

"I love you guys so much…" Then the bee took its stinger out, leaving a red welt where it had previously been, and the whole swarm started stinging her plot and marehood randomly. She started rubbing her clit. So one decided to bite her pony pussy. This made her moan in ecstasy. So the others started alternating between stinging and biting.

Bees can't bite, they don't have jaws. Bees drink nectar so they just use their long tongue. Also I don't know if Fluttershy would like using bees since they die after they sting. Right now she is killing hundreds of bees for her own gratification and that seems OOC for her. Wasps however don't die when they sting and since they eat insects they do have strong jaws. The bees though could be licking up her mare juices.
(If you want to get really technical wasps don't have jaws either, they have mandibles. Mandibles are two separate pincers moving and are not part of the mouth)

I feel like one of the kids should be named Sky Breeze

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