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SleeplessBrony


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In before knighty comments on this story.

This chapter is incredibly funny. <3

... and yeah, AJ really does need to get laid. XD

The most unsettling thing about this is that their dialogue is flawlessly in-character.

Ahahahaha! The description already got my interest. Time for some gossip material, Tia.
:trollestia: <(This will be good!)
(Yup! Me and Pinkie got this covered, right Pinkie Pie?)> :rainbowwild:
:pinkiehappy: <(Totally totally totally!!!!)
(.......)> :eeyup:

Cocks ahoy. Dear god I've found my new catchphrase.

......damn.
....damn.
I dunno what it is, but, for whatever reason, I've been avoiding yours and RS's clopfics like a disease lately, and I can't figure out why I have. Let me tell you, I shouldn't have been - this brought a pleasant smile back on my face.

-not a word about that to anypony, ya hear me, Sleepless?- xP
Ciao for now...

This was amaaaaazing. As usual. THAT'S how you do a threesome~

Hahahaha, Big Mac's thoughts when this all started playing out:
"The fun has been doubled" :trollestia: :eeyup:

This may be one of the funniest fics I've ever read.

I honestly don't know if I've ever seen dialogue this PERFECT before. Sleeplessbrony, you never cease to amaze me! :yay:

This? This right here? This is what every other clopfic in existance WISHES it could be. :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

This work was nothing less than clopperific. On the Cloppington Scale, it rated over nine thousaaaand. My hooves are sore just thinking about it.

This is clam dandying joy, no two ways about it. Three ways about it, but no two ways.

You have won the clopternet.

even tho this is a clop.....this was fucking hilarious.....:rainbowlaugh:

Buwhahaha. "cocks" used in a polite non sexual manner in a clop fic, well something close to one.

Love it by the way. Strange cross between comedy and smut.

You know, I started this fic with intention to clop. BUT DAYMN SIR. This is probably the best clopfic I've ever read, both in charecterization and sexyfun, and let me tell you, I've literally read tens of thousands - not just for personal fun, but I've worked as an intern editor for a company that did porn scrips and erotic fiction.

YOU. ROCK.

Omg like every 10 words there is something to do with sex lOl

knighty
Site Owner

That was....ahem.....yes.

*cough*

A really great read as usual. Pinkie and Dash make the best nymphomaniacs

i feel gay now

i wonder why

maybe it's because i keep on readin all those gay sex pony shit

sigh

nice thing to read with gangsta rap on, even tho i skipped like 33% of it

Oh sexual comedy. Is there anything you can't improve?

this is interesting, while most explicit shipfics would make me gag, this one made me LOL so hard, i almost pissed myself, and i don't know why. but that is seriously funny right there, especially pinkie in the last chapter :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Tickets to the Apples and Apple acsessories show?

I SEW WHAT YOU DID THERE :flutterrage:

Actually, It's a convention, not a show. :trollestia:

61760 (Potato Joe)
What place was that and are they hiring?

62173 Glouchester and Main, Ltd. of New York. They were an intern option for my degree and they seemed INTERESTING, to say the least. Don't know if they are hiring - that was 1.5 years ago.

Woah.
I did not expect to enjoy this fic this much.
It was... kind of hilarious, actually.

But excuse me while I go be ashamed of myself for being turned on by this.
Or read the rest of your fics you have made. Not sure yet. "Shame" and "dick" are still duking it out in my head.

Also, you are quite creative. xD

You gotta share... you gotta care... :twilightoops:

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lol I fail at putting pictures in comments:twilightangry2:

61889 You sir,

Are the meter by which I judge my clopfic.

It goes on a scale of Azekahh to knightly

with ProjectFailSing being the middle

Plot down, now for the clop.

This is the funniest thing EVER!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

Funniest thing I have ever read. Period.

Pfft... *laughs for 5 minutes straight* oh WOW... now comes the hard part: deciding to read the clopfic part of it or not...

So, is this still in the same universe as Romance Reports?

61446
Yes obliv it is! Thanks for that....

63100
Lol sorry ponyman. As far as I'm concerned this and backroom are both equally awesome.

WHA!? What shameful SHAMEFUL Smut :raritydespair:
(*tracks*) :raritystarry:
Really, why would you do something like this to ponies. :twilightangry2:
(*Favorites*):twilightblush:
You make Applejack sad. :ajsleepy:
(And make Bigmac, Rainbow, and Pinkie VERY happy) :eeyup::rainbowwild::pinkiehappy:|
You should be ashamed!:flutterrage:
(Keep it up,your audience demands more.):trollestia:

DAMN YOU i woke up my mum from laughing

Comment posted by hio590 deleted Dec 12th, 2012

So when does Pinkie Pie die? If this is in continuity, you made her and that school teacher dead. And every character a slut.

So, the element of loyalty just want to fuck and run? What is this crap?

I hate how you made every pony a slut.

Oh my god, I don't think I've read anything this goddamn funny in months. The fact that it's all in character makes so much more hilarious. XD

61320 I agree with you. After the contract these were my thoughts "man what a awesome episo-" then thats when I remembered that this was a fanfic and not an episode.

61347 Ditto but I'll use when I am wing-manning

To the writer: I am gonna bucking watch you man. Made my night fun with this single chapter and theres still another one *Fluttershy yay* Thank you for a good read. :pinkiehappy:

-66

I love how Pinkie is a talker. That made this whole story hilarious for me. I have to admit I love your work on these kinds of things.

THE SIGNS!!! (still laughing) ooooooooh the signs. Very funny so far lets see where it goes.

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