Jack Frost

Jack's caught in the cold after his lodge burned down. He's rapidly losing body heat, but luckily he's found... two pairs of socks? With his salvation in ~~hoof~~ hand, will he survive or pay the ultimate price?

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Conflicting views

Conflicting views #1 · Dec 14th, 2016 · 12 · ·

Hopefully he’d still have his fingers after all this.

Famous last words

Graglithan The Greater

Graglithan The Greater #2 · Dec 14th, 2016 · · ·

Nice and strong first chapter, so this is getting a favorite.

ferret

ferret #3 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

Cute!

0 #4 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

Oh this is completed, huh.
The change of tone was a bit jarring, in my opinion, for a short story.

NicLove

NicLove #5 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

Before I read, what is the Dark tag for ?

ValenceBond

ValenceBond #6 · Dec 15th, 2016 · · ·

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The threat of frostbite and death by exposure is brought up. I figured that was enough to warrant a dark tag, just to be safe.

Headlock1_0

Headlock1_0 #7 · Dec 15th, 2016 · 4 · ·

I know this is supposed to be open-ended, but it feels a little too open ended to me. I enjoyed it, but I think it needs a little more to it.

Dravkwn

Dravkwn #8 · Dec 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

This needs about 100 chapters worth of sequel.

Purple Lightning

Purple Lightning #9 · Dec 16th, 2016 · · ·

This was actually quite splendid. I don't know if the couple of claims that this is only the first chapter and it will be continued are true, but I certainly hope so, as this was a great setup.

jack_fraust

jack_fraust #10 · Dec 16th, 2016 · · ·

<--Spoiler alert?

Mortefleur

Mortefleur #11 · Dec 18th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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Please sir (/madam,) may we have some more?

Tentreto

Tentreto #12 · May 5th, 2017 · · ·

I definitely enjoyed this, and I will echo previous sentiments that this felt a little too open ended, and feels it needs at least another chapter, though 100 might be pushing it.

JazzyWaffles