There is a giant hole in the wall of Twilight's castle. Most of her front door is gone. And Rainbow Dash had better have a good explanation for this.
Top ten finalist for the "Look, I can explain" writeoff.
Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
There is a giant hole in the wall of Twilight's castle. Most of her front door is gone. And Rainbow Dash had better have a good explanation for this.
Top ten finalist for the "Look, I can explain" writeoff.
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I really enjoyed this! I could really see Dash as a "secret agent" with BonBon/Sweetie Drops as her "mentor". Even more hilarity could ensue when a jealous Lyra misunderstands why BonBon is spending so much time with Dash.
Well, that was fairly amusing.![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
That was so much fun!
Not quite true. Remember that one time Ripley tried to stop Nostromo's self-destruct mechanism by activating the cooling units she had pulled out before? She would have done it, too, if it weren't for the fact that Mother turned out to be a major bitch, not accepting a two seconds slip-up.
6933009 Yeah, you always want to have some way to deactivate a self-destruct, just in case some crazy guy manages to turn it on.
Like me!
*presses the big red Blow Up The Earth button again!* HEE HEE HEE!!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
AHahaha! Nice! That was a fun one, short and sweet with a good dose of slapstick and action. Also, I really like that someone grabbed onto the Special Agent Sweetie Drops canon; I don't know why people complain about that so much, it's kind of awesome and was a clever way for the writers to resolve her canon name of Sweetie Drops with her fanon name of Bon Bon. (Yes, it was totally canon before, I have the guidebook for seasons 1-3). Nice job, thanks for the fun read!
Its like the damn men in black but a little less and a little more badass all at once
I need to see you write the Daring Do/Sweetie Drops team mission prequel fic now.
Sequel pls?
It'd be nice to have an adventure series with rainbow that's not too long or short like this.
I like it.
It needs a sequel though. A long one.
That was a ton of fun and I definitely want to see more of this oddball partnership now.
You can't win, Bon Bon.
But if Rainbow "Danger" Dash becomes a zombie pony, would she technically really be dead? I mean, she is still walking around alive. (Sort of.)
And what happened to Professor Distressor? Did he woke up before the explosion and take revenge, or did he die and became a (sentient) zombie pony himself? Or something else? Or am I somehow overthinking?
Good story!
Is this merely supposed to be an One-Shot or will there be an sequel?
6942343![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
You can never kill a good bad guy. They just keep coming back.
This one is just a one-shot, and I haven't even thought of a sequel; but seeing how many people wouldn't mind one I might have to give it some thought.
If no sequel comes out, I'm legitimately going to die.
Awesome story! Loved it!
![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
🎵all in all you’re just a-nother brick in the wall🎵