While out practicing, Scootaloo misses a jump, and Rainbow is curious to know why. Scootaloo admits that she's distracted by something a classmate has said, and now she's wondering.
What is beauty, anyway?
Just a little Scootafluff one-shot written for (and winner of!) Weekly Contest 26.
I wouldn't bother answering. Because that would fall within the purview of your conundrums of philosophy.
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...you're not wrong.
I realize that it's hard to find a good synonym for "leaves", but you may want to think about somehow rewording this anyway. Seeing the word "leaves" three times in such a short span disrupts the word flow just a little.
I like what I'm reading, though.
...and now that I've read the ending, I have to say I'm a fan of the story.
BRB, gonna add this to some groups so other people can read it.
Go get 'em, Scoots! Knock 'em dead!
Oh, what a Twist!
I thought it was apple bloom who won Love the "Twist" ending. Nice little story.
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There really isn't… That did feel clunky. I'll see what I can do to it after work.
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Thanks! I'm terrible at groups.
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Thanks! I figured that would bother Diamond the most.
Go Scoots!
Clever ending! Very nice story!
Did you see Spike? He was a cool MC.
He just did it for Rarity , We all know that.
He's such a helpful gentle drake
He sure ith!
Anything to help, Rarity
Awe Kiss her already!
Cute little story. . .
I really enjoyed this piece. Great job!
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Thanks!
I love this line. It add to a story when the slang and colloquialisms are representative of the world. And it's sooooo right for pegasus to ask that, instead of " What's wrong?"
On the whole, I love this story. MORE VIEWS ARE NEEDED!
This is even better! I love the ending. So Twist straightened her mane, huh? Diamond Tiara should have seen that coming. Add in a cute lisp and sweet personality...yup. Twist takes the prize.
....I want peppermint now. Or a candy cane...
I was not expecting to enjoy this and yet I did. Good job.
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Short but sweet. Glad I read it. And Twist winning was a laugh!
ooh good start to zee story