Harmony. Friendship. Those things have helped defeat great enemies. They defeated Lord Tirek. They cleansed Nightmare Moon. They imprisoned Discord.
Yet, what about other monsters? The ones who face the not-quite-as-big baddies?
Hoof Stomper, code name: Earth Quake. Earth pony. She's a mare who will crack the Earth as she breaks your bones.
Camp Fire, code name: Flame Thrower. Unicorn. She'll blast you with the heat of a thousand suns.
Creeping Mist, code name: Water Fall. Unicorn. His waters will wash away your tears, along with the rest of you.
Gentle Breeze, code name: Raging Storm. Pegasus. She will blow you away, literally and figuratively.
Soft Shine, code name: Shining Light. Pegasus. His light shall blind or heal, whatever it takes to get the job done. Even if it means summoning the spirits of those forgotten.
Night Sky, code name: Shadowy Darkness. Earth pony. He will blind you or make you fall to slumber, whatever is necessary to keep his friends safe. Even summon demons of the past.
They are an elite group of ponies, hired by Princess Luna to protect ponies under the veil of night.
Here are just some of their adventures. Not all are adventures in fighting, though.
In one sentence you used witch instead of which. If you want I could direct you to an editor group to help with your story. No payment require.
This chapter looks fine but needs some work like flushing out Night's personality more. Same with the others. I feel this chapter needs to show some of the characters personality and a little back story before they all meet.
This is a tiny nitpick, but should the ponies be ask to join the new team after Luna explain her reason for calling everypony to the meeting? I feel these two things would make the chapter flow better.
All of this are suggestions.
6705469 I'm pretty much a 12 year old kid. I write this all on my own. I will fix that mistake, though I will think about getting an editor.
They are getting some more development next chapter.
Luna is actually going to ask at breakfast. She just decided that since it was late at night, these ponies should get some rest.
And, this is something I probably wouldn't mention in the story, but Night is slightly bipolar. He can go from sad and relieved to angry and predatory in a few seconds. The reason I say "slight" is because he never goes to full extremes. Let me know if I do any thing like this wrong.
6705540 okay.