'Sup? The name's Shortcake, and I'm a silly bastard who loves pretty ponies. I'm sort of maybe an artist, and I'm a very novice author. Don't expect too much from me o3o
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Spike has fallen into a hopeless routine of rejection, given he has yet to grasp the concept of his feelings being unreciprocated by the woman of his dreams. Little does he know, his hopeless love is hurting somebody very close to him, somebody who's feelings have yet to come to light.
A two part, human, Spike x Scootaloo shipping fic.
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Oooh. This is really good...
Quite enjoyable. But please don't leave me and others hanging!
4274362 By the name of Celestia, people actually enjoy this fic O.O
4274378 Also, I don't plan to leave y'all hangin! You guys seem to like this, so I'd have little reason to
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Likewise.
Very good! Glad you posted the 2nd chapter quickly!
pretty good
A nice and simple story. Good work dude.
4275215 Hey, fancy seeing you here, and thanks x3
I'm still a total noob at writing, I'm more of a gamer than anything ^^
This was a great story for getting a feel for ones style. I think you might have a talent for writing battles. I would love to see you do another story (about Spike of course in my opinion lol) With more battles and maybe more of a build up to the pairing or even seeing after they get together would be nice. So overall good job, I can't wait to see more of your work. You have me in your corner if you even need it.
4275271 I do enjoy some good bloodshed. Also, I know the only way to get better is to continually practice, which is what I plan to do :3
I've always found writing to be fun, and I'd love nothing more than to become a better author. In short, be expecting more short stories as my practice, and junk.
4275390 K can't wait. if I can make a plea try doing some non standard shippings for Spike. It will make your stories stand out even more from the others as well as give you more space to play around with some characters that don't fully flushed out backstories and personalities. (not to mention it would be nice to have some new works for the Spike Rare Shipping group lol)
4275435 Hells yeah, rare ships are awesome. I mean, I've only seen one Spike x Flitter fic, ever, and I've only come across a few other ships with Spike, and a background character, so I'll does a did dun did it! (I don't think that last part was even English x3)
Thanks for the feels, please send more
this was a lot less cheesy and fluffy than I thought it would be, but it was so sweet XD.
I like the idea you had for the intensity of the situation. It makes it a bit easier to get past the shortness and directness of this story. It gives it the feeling of the characters being real people (ponies) who are perfectly capable of making decisions without needing to make lists.
Which in Twi's case would be the opposite, should you decide to ship her in the future.
So please, if you consider yourself a n00b, then keep the n00b ideas coming
I liked the story, but not so much the fact that Spike was the only one to go out and try and save Scootaloo. I would think Twilight and Rainbow would offer to go with Spike instead of just give him a sword.
It needs a bit of tweaking here and there, and the pacing's a bit off at times.
Still, shit was pretty cash.
4278442 Like I've said, I'm still new to the whole writing scene, so I've had... problems.
Very nice short story. I quite enjoyed it. It really had everything I could have asked for: Romance, Action, Suspense, Feeling, and a Happy Ending! Excellent job and keep up the good work! :D
Very nice fic you got here, and that means a lot coming from me since I despise humanized ponies and/or humans in general in mlp stories.
4280619 Oh stahp it, you're makin me blush ^///^
4281745 Thx sexy face, it does mean a lot to me :3
As a matter of fact, I'd like to thank everybody here --downvotes included-- for taking a look at my story. It kinda gives me confidence to keep writing, and improving C:
I normally steer WAY clear of humanized stuff outside of one story. Scootaloo stuff though seems to be a weakness of mine. This was a rather cute story. You need a sequel though. Anything shipped with Scoots is way too adorable to leave as a one-off.
It was a little fast but I do rather like your characterization. And that ending was brilliant
this was cool, i'd ask for more but i'm not entirely sure what more you could put in here!
HHHHHHHHNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG!
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is best ship!
*WARNING*DEATH BY DAWW HAS OCCURED.NOTIFY THE AUTHORITIES.*
Found a typo,
You forgot the "o" in "to".
Other than that, this was a great story! I really enjoyed it!
pretty good work mate.
have you considered a sequel because I can edit for you.
rating 8/10
few errors here and there but good overall and very cute.
Prize
Panzer 5 "Panther" tank and a cake.
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enjoy
4523350 Thanks dude, and I'm sure you're just being generous with that rating. As far as a sequel goes, I'll be sure to let ya know because I am lacking an editor.
4527685 I ain't being generous with the rating mate.
It's probably because the writer is trying to imply that spike actually does love scoots
I have no idea
Do you mind if I add it to my Scootapike group I started
4770548 You don't have to ask for permission o3o
(If you wanna add it, then go ahead)
Can u please make a 3rd chapter about what happens in the future
Cute and adorable