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Why does everyone link to the mobile version of my page? :rainbowlaugh:

Anyway, it was a great read and I definitely enjoyed it! Of course it'd be interesting to see this continuing in some way, Chrysalis and Nightmare Moon teaming up to conquer Equestria while having lesbian sex or something, I dunno. I like this shipping, so there's technically nothing that could go wrong.

AT LAST! It's out!

~Regidar

...I think I'm just gonna go drown myself. :ajsleepy:

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Wuv u too Atlas! :heart::rainbowkiss:

2881833 2881835 I think he's jelly that he didn't get the idea first.

Great one Bobby.
Had a good few laughs and the clop is quite good too.

Awesome:eeyup: Dare I say more please:rainbowwild:

I’d be appreciative if you didn’t beseech my name in such an uncouth manner, Chrysalis

As parasprite pointed out, it's "besmirch" not "beseech". Beseech is more like asking something.

Which is at fast at the moment.

Feel you missed or added some words here.

first giving her a rimjob with its tip while it poked her buggerhole every now and a then to get her used to the feel.

That "a" should not be there.

the tentacle reassumed its entry into her vaginal depths with almost a gusto

This part sounds oddly worded.

Chrysalis groaned in delight by the more vigorous pumping action her tentacles were taking with the more room she provided them.

That part doesn't sound quite right, I think "extra space" would fit better.

The tip tried to wiggle its way past her lips, but Nightmare held her mouth closely shut.

Tightly works better I think.

distance between both their length being a thin wall of flesh separating her vagina from her asshole.

"Lengths"

Haha. Though I am slightly disturbed by the fact that in a round-a-bout way, Luna got her brains fucked out as well.

Bobby y r u so good at things

2882073 Cute pic, but why is that dude's arm green? :rainbowhuh:

I don't normally like tentacle porn, but when I do it's about ponies that want to take over a country.

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I didn't realize they were floating in the air above Equistria....huh, odd. (sorry, couldn't help it.:fluttershysad:)

Hot, not much else to say.

Luz

I had that cover art as a avatar for a long time.

She'd do well in Japan.

Hopefully the fallen princess can handle a few slimy tentacles for Equestrian domination. Or be dominated herself.

laughed at that one

I love how since we can't have NSFW story covers we just put a black bar over anything :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by CommanderCupcake deleted Jul 16th, 2013

horsewords are fun:rainbowkiss:

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>~regidar
>you're not regi anymore
#MASSCONFUSION

Tentacles... NOPE!

This fic. I like it. MORE! *smashes non-existant mug on the floor*

You son of a b****! I already settle on a story of yours to read and you already write another awesome story!?!

I'm still waiting for my mate to respond to see if he'll react with me. Damn you make stories on the spot, don't you?

Can we be friends? (Please)? TEACH ME YOUR WAYS!

THE GOOD STORY WRITING WAYS, NOT THE PONIES FUCKING ANYTHING WITH A PULSE WAYS!

What she must do, in fact, is take over all of Equestria

Hey, RainbowBob, Something Eight and I have just riffed this story on PonyRiffs! For those of you who don't know, a "riff" is sort of like what they do on MST3K. Basically, we just took this story and inserted our witty lines of dialogue in between the lines of the story.

You can check out the riff here.

Hmmm... I will partake in such readings, but in a classy manner. Onward for a boner, my friends.:moustache:

That was the most kinkiest shit I have ever read... Yet, why do I like it so much?

:unsuresweetie::facehoof: That was terrible. p :pinkiesick:

Cloptastic

DAMN THAT WAS SO HOT!

Moony is so cute and Chrysalis never cease to amaze.:trollestia:

2882669 RUST!!!!!!... I forgot what I was gonna type. anyways, hi

I like the art style. Who's the artist?

Of course what more can a person expect from a Rainbowbob story. It was okay and I don't really know what more to say. All I thought about was this seems way to much like you where in japan at the time, two you are still Shipping it like FedEx, and finally I'ma need two guns for this shiz.

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I think his name is Zan. He is somewhat popular in the R34 Pahael site

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Eeeenope, no result. I don't think his name is Zan :P

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...Try Celestia, and then Animated in the search. It should show two pictures or her holding... that... and i think it says animated by s_yoob or whatever his name is...

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Thanks! Although the art style wasn't like I was expecting... Well, beggars can't be choosers.

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Wonder what 'that' is. Lol

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God dammit I never thought you would reply to that

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Yeah, like the last guy who said it, his name is Zev

ok, i read all these comments and not one have noticed an anatomical error in the story. namely the part where u mention the 'clit' being penetrated...THIS CANNOT HAPPEN!!! the clit, or clitoris. is a highly sensitive nub of nerve endings positioned forward of the vaginal opening. it is not the opening itself. when transposed onto a male form, the clitoris develops more fully and is called a penis. now, if u meant to say 'cunt' that does describe the vaginal opening or the vagina as a whole...depending on the context...

The first load shot into her clit like a cannon

1. anatomical failure.
2. you use the word cunt quite alot, there's more than one word for it, use some variety.

I have the most normal boner from reading this.
Now I feel as though I must write something cloppy...

Well this is odd, One moment I'm trying to write a decient story, browsing around for ideas, then suddenly I'm reading this. Next, I realized I have only fapped four times, which is odd, because to do this story justice I believe that in the range of six is needed. I need more coffee, well back to wholesome things.

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