Home Invasion: Private Party

by CardShark777

First published

The changeling that tickled Rarity is now on the hunt for more ticklish ponies.

After having put Rarity through ticklish hell, it's time to move on for the next target. Though things didn't go as planned...

Contains: Light Bondage and lots of tickle torture
Read at your own risk.

SURPRISE!

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Weeks had passed since the devious changeling broke into Rarity's boutique and tickle tortured her to bits. She had since informed all her friends and family about this cruel and unusual experience. They were all very concerned about these sudden news, all of them, except for one individual in particular...

One full month later, the changeling was up and about again with a new target in mind. He used his shape shifting to his full advantage, taking the form of a small dark coated filly to have a minimal detection risk while roaming around town, hidden in the shadows. After some searching, the disguised changeling finally reached his destination: Sugarcube Corner. This time around, the little changeling was after a pink individual....

Getting inside was a piece of cake, he could pick locks with his eyes closed at this point. After having successfully infiltrated the building, he turned back to his normal form to have access to all his equipment, which consisted of a long coil of rope and a white cloth. He was planning on kidnapping his target, as there were too many creatures present at the bakery. Though if he were to be spotted, he would just tie them down and tickle them until they pass out

Moving forward slowly, the changeling moved up the stairs, avoiding the creaking floorboards by hovering a few inches above the ground with his wings, he now stood in a short corridor with multiple doors to choose from. The first room he checked, was the room of the twins. His heart sank, trying his hardest to close the door as quietly as possible. Waking them up would ruin the plan. The next door appeared to be the Cake couple's bedroom as snoring from two different individuals could be heard, so he dodged that as well. The next door had a big enough keyhole to get a proper look into. Looking through, he grinned from ear to ear, seeing the pink earthpony Pinkamena Diane Pie, or Pinkie Pie as she was commonly referred to, lying all tucked in while peacefully sleeping. He was just about to enter, before hearing a sudden bang in the room at the end of the corridor. The changeling slightly jumped and turned around. He decided to shape shift into Pinkie, to get in a sneak attack on whoever had made that noise.

The disguised tickler made his way towards the room from which the recent loud noise came from, opening the door and peeking inside. It appeared to be a false alarm: It was only an open window that knocked a few hygiene products over from a strong breeze. He sighed and closed the window, turning back to his own form, before returning to Pinkie's room. Though upon looking through the keyhole, the pink party planner that was there only a few moments ago was gone...

"Hiya!"
A high pitched cheerful voice greeted the home invader right behind him, startling him so bad, he fell onto his back, looking up to see Pinkie Pie standing over him with a carefree smile.
"Who're you?"

He quickly collected himself and got back onto his hooves, unsure of what to do. Usually he gets the drop on others.
"Uh... I'm..."

Though before he could finish his sentence, she gasped, pouncing onto him, making the changeling slightly yelp.
"Are you that changeling that tickled Rarity?! And were you planning to do the same thing with meee?!"
She asked with a big smile.
"Oh yes, yes, yes! I love laughing, hehe. You can get started right away!"
She cheerfully announced, while hugging him very tightly.

He couldn't believe what he was hearing. Was this pony just gonna surrender to him? Or is this perhaps a trap? No matter the reason, the hug was robbing him of air.
"Too tight... Let go please...!"

"Oops."
He was released as she stood up again.
"Can we get started please?"

The hardcore cuddled changeling recovered his breath and slowly got up, adjust his hood.
"Ahem... Uh... You're just going to let me tickle you? Just like that? Even after hearing what I did with your friend, the white unicorn?"
He asked in disbelief.

"Well Duh, I'm the element of laughter, silly! I love being tickled."
Pinkie stated with a cute little smile.

Not having planned for this, he shrugged.
"Follow me."
The home invader lead her outside the building. After reaching the outside, he reached into his bag, pulling out the cloth.

"Oh, are ya gonna tickle me right here?"
She asked, one of her ears leaning to the left.

"Uh, no. I'll need to blindfold you. We'll be going to my hideout. Can't let you see the way, I'm afraid."
He said, applying it around her eyes, taking her left front hoof and beginning to lead her somewhere out of town.

"Okey donkey loki."
She agreed without resistance.
"Woo hoo! Let's go!"
The pink party planner exclaimed.

"Shh! Not so loud please. Gonna have a hard time explaining this, if we're caught."
With those words, his next "victim" was lead outta town to his hideout.

It was a moderately long walk into an unknown direction, before they finally arrived at what appeared to be the point of interest. The trip took slightly longer, as she would start randomly bouncing, making leading her a bit difficult.
"Stop."
The changeling said. The shifting of leaves could be heard, before a metallic lock was seemingly being unlocked, followed by a sharp creek of a rusty metal door opening.
"Watch your step. It's a small staircase."
He said, carefully leading her down somewhere, closing everything behind them.

"Are we there yet?"
The pink earthpony asked.

"Yes we are."
He replied, removing her blindfold.

"Oooh~"
Pinkie saw a small room with three restrainment devices and many potential tickle tools. There was a padded chair with straps and stocks, as well as a table with solid cuffs. Left and right of the room were many tables, with suit cases, toolboxes and little bags. One toolbox was open, containing a few pinwheels, little short bouquets of feathers and a feather duster. The floor was coated with a soft black carpet, while the walls were coated with clean wooden boards. There were no windows only a light bulb in the ceiling.

Her reaction was met with a soft chuckle.
"Please have a seat mademoiselle Pie."

"You can call me Pinkie Pie if you want."
She took a seat.
"By the way, what's your name?"

"Uh..."
He was a bit unsure on how to reply.
"Card Shark."
The changeling replied, strapping her front hooves to the arm rests.

"Nice to meet you, Mister Card! So how are you gonna tickle me? I'm super ticklish on my belly, my sides, my hoofsies... Pretty much everywhere!"
She beamed.

"Slow down dear, we haven't even started yet..."
Card said while setting Pinkie's hind hooves into the stocks, locking them afterwards. He wasn't really good at handling such willing ticklees.

"Sure, sure, take your time. Not like I'm goin' anywhere right~?"
She chuckled.

"I don't know. After the way you snuck up on me like that, I'd be willing to believe you could get out of this. But until then, I have you all to myself."
He grinned, walking around the bound and helpless earthpony. Card got behind her and softly rubbed her sides from behind.

Pinkie immediately began giggling, despite the sensation being quite weak, which Mister Shark noted with a huge smirk.

"I clearly underestimated your sensitivity, cutie."
The changeling teased, going to caress Pinkie's pink tummy, which resulted in even more super cute giggle snorts. Lastly, he went over to Pinkie's trapped hooves. Without hesitation, Card touched them, admiring how soft they were, before poking them repeatedly with the tips of his own hooves.

Pinkie softly yelped between giggles from each poke, making her tickler grin widely.

"It's amazing how ticklish your hooves are. Aren't you earthponies always walking on these 24/7? Kinda cute."
Card Shark smiled.
"Well, it seems you're more than perfect for this treatment."
Card stopped and walked over to the toolbox that was left open.
"Saw you eyeing this. Guess it's time to show you what these things can do."

Pinkie Pie didn't say anything, just wiggling around in her bindings from all the excitement.

Card levitated three fluffy pinwheels out from the box, running two of them up and down both of Pinkie's sides with glee, watching as his willing captive jumped in her seat, shaking around like a jelly pudding during an earthquake.

"Yehehehes! Mohohohohore!"
Pinkie requested with clear delight.

"As you wish."
The third pinwheel found its' way onto Pinkie's belly, rolling it around in fast circles, making her squeal with joy.

The changeling smiled happily at these results. Despite being more on the evil side when it comes to torturing his captured victims with tickles, it was nice seeing somepony enjoy it so much. Though he was more delighted by her ticklishness. So much so that couldn't help himself to turn into a random pegasus and brushing his wings against the lower part of Pinkie's belly, making the super sensitive earthpony burst out laughing, naturally loving every second of it.
"Tickle, tickle, little Pinkie~"

"EHEHEHEEP! IHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHIT TIHIHIHIHIHIHIHICKLEHES!"
The party pony exclaimed.

"Oh does it? Had no idea."
He grinned. The changeling kept the pinwheels working, while levitating the feather duster over and swishing it across Pinkie's defenseless hooves.

She kicked into a new level of laughter, wildly thrashing around against the straps, watching the feather duster tickling her sensitive little hooves.
"OHOHOHOHOHOHO MIHIHIHIHIY!"

"Such a ticklish little pony I have here."
The disguised changeling teased, turning back to his normal form and brought out the bouquet of feathers, which found their way tickle torturing the pink pony's hooves alongside the feather duster, making her release burst of screaming laughter in response. Having already gotten her this far, Card blew a big raspberry directly onto her exposed belly. Tears were running down the helpless ticklee's cheeks, feeling the soft vibrating sensation on her ticklish belly made her go absolutely crazy. After ending the raspberry, he tended to her ticklish hooves again.

"Let's try this."
He turned into a big dark blue dragon, with a pointy tail. The disguised changeling raked his devilish claws down Pinkie's helpless hooves, while his tail sneakily scratched one of her hoofpits.

Pinkie's voice slightly cracked from reaching an unthinkably high tone of laughter that could not possibly get any louder. It was simply not possible. That didn't stop her struggles and thrashing, which tremendously increased.

"PPPFFWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!"

"Coochie coochie, coo~ Does this tickle, hm?"
Card grinned, levitating the feather duster to brush her tummy, while feathers were separated, two tickling Pinkie's sensitive belly, four swishing against her sides and another two going in to tickle the earthpony's hoofpits, all the while Card still went to town on mercilessly scratching the pink pair of wiggling hooves.

There was a very clear difference in the level of laughter, despite it being already very loud, it appeared to be more frequent and less breathing breaks in between, which he noted with a smirk.
"Pinkie has super ticklish hoofsies, doesn't she? Yes she does~"
She was teased, while her poor hooves were ruthlessly tickled.

Pinkie's mane begann ruffling up from all the swift movement. Though it didn't stop her tickler to apply a bit of baby oil on her ticklish hooves, properly rubbing it in, before restarting his tickly work and digging his claws into Pinkie's sensitive hoofsies, causing an even more hysterical reaction as before. The little pony screamed on the top of her lungs in between her already super loud laughter from this. Though even a pony such as herself has her limits. And it was very much visible that she was starting to get tired.

Seeing this, Card finished tickle torturing her hooves with his sharp claws and went away to go get some water. While he was away, the feathers tickling her hoofpits, moved down to her hooves, tickling around the middle part, as the pink pony tiredly laughed her heart out.

He returned with a bucket of water with a scrub brush.
"Time to clean these cuties."
The changeling dunked the brush into the water and began thoroughly scrubbing Pinkie's hooves to get the oil off, but of course mostly to tickle the daylights out of her. And as can be seen by her reaction, it very much does both very well. The latter especially.

"AHAHAHAHA! OHOHOHOHOHOHOKAY, OHOHOHOHOHOHOKAY, THAHAHAHAT'S EHEHEHENOHOHOUGH FOHOHOR NOHOHOHOHOHOW!"
Pinkie begged, being pretty tuckered out. Though she couldn't deny that she absolutely loved such ruthless tickly treatment.

Card was thinking... He was asked to stop and was going to, but the brush tickling kinda fired up his spirit again from her adorable reaction, being motivated for more. But it looked like she wasn't going to last much longer.

What to do?

(Please choose your outcome in the chapter selection.)

Ending A: Let Her Go

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Card's ruthless treatment soon came to a stop after having cleaned off the oil. The pinwheels, feather duster and feathers all levitated back on their place, as the pink pony was left to recover in her restrainment. The disguised changeling turned back to his normal form.
"You okay?"
He asked, unlocking the stocks and releasing the straps.

After being released, the changeling was immediately met with a cuddly hug.
"Thank you so much for this. This was tons of fun! Can we do this again someday?"

Card was a bit taken back by being shown such affection and unsurely hugged her back.
"You... Wanna do this again?"

"Uhu! Totally! I loved this~"
Pinkie smiled.

"Uh, well... I mean, I guess so."
The changeling awkwardly smiled.

"Yay! Thank you so much!"
She bounced up once, but nearly fell over, still being super tired.
"Ehehe... Uh, I've had enough for today though. Can you take me back home, please?"

"Yes Ma'am."
Card nodded before putting the blindfold back around her head.

The pink cutie was lead back home, being granted the ability to see again after they arrived at the bakery.

"So, uh... I don't normally do this, saying goodbye to my ticklees. So... Uh... Good night, I guess."
The changeling said.

"Good night, Sharkie. Be seeing you again soon."
Pinkie gave her tickler one more soft hug, before going inside.

Card stood there for some seconds before going back to his hideout.
"I should consider going after more tickle lovers."
He said, walking to his hideout to plan his next move.

Ending B: No Mercy

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The disguised changeling grew and evil smile.
"No. Don't think it is."

"WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAT?!"
The tired mare exclaimed in disbelief.

"You heard me sweetheart. I decide when it's over. And you, deary, aren't going anywhere."
He grinned, ruthlessly brushing Pinkie's helpless hoofsies, making her scream more in between fits of uncontrollable laughter.
"NOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! PLEHEHEHEHEASE! IHIHIHIHIHIHIHIHI'VE HAHAHAHAD EHEHEHENOHOHOUGH!"
Pinkie begged him, kicking around in her restrainment like crazy.

"Good."
Is all he said, before opening one of the bags, which contained little forks, which scratched her tummy, as well as multiple toothbrushes, that roughly scrubbed her sides, hoofpits and anything that wasn't being tickled by the feather duster and pinwheels, robbing her of the ability to talk.
"Nowhere to go. Your ticklish body is doomed to eternal tickles. The element of laughter will represent her element in an appropriate fashion."
He teased, while mercilessly tickle torturing her entire body. Poor Pinkie could do absolutely nothing while feeling her body and hooves be toyed with and tormented. Though this still wasn't it. Card let the brush tickle her hooves with his magic, while he got something from under the table. It was an automated roller brush. He attached it to the stocks, so that the soles of her hooves were directly touching it after having removed the brush, before turning it on, making the fuzzy brush spin against Pinkie's ticklish hooves, sending her into crazy condition of no longer knowing what was real and what was not.

Since the hooves were now tickled automatically, Card dug his claws into Pinkie's sides, which didn't really show any sort of difference anymore at this point.

All this ticklish force combined was way too much for the super sensitive earthpony. So after not even four minutes, she passed out.

Card stopped all tickling with a grin, feeling satisfied with his work. He unlocked the straps and stocks, taking the passed out party mare out of her seat and carried her back home. Upon arrival, Card set Pinkie back into her bed, tucked her in and left the house, feeling very happy from this beautifully devious session. He loves being an evil tickler. And for that reason, he goes back to his hideout and plans on who to torment next.