A Dashing Transformation

by Discord The Narrator

First published

The race at Manteo is about to end, and the winner will be the most unexpected one.

The roller skating race at Manteo has been one of the fastest races. Now, it's about to end, and a few runners are getting towards the finishing lane.

But only one of them is going to get past the lane... surrounded by colors.


And there you have it: the story which concludes this small universe dedicated to JimmyHook19. Let me know what you think in the comments.:ajsmug:

As always, hope you like it!

A Dashing Transformation

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Manteo, North Carolina. Men, women and children were getting together at one side of the town for watching the next event: a roller skating race. A few young people were beside the starting lane, waiting for the race to start as they made some movements on their roller skates. Among those runners, there was Jimmy, feeling a bit nervous, although he had practiced some days before.

The race organizers had already told them everything: the main objective was to take the route described on a map, until reaching the end. There wouldn't be any problems since some fences were placed on the different streets so the runners didn't go off limits.

As everyone stood in place, the announcer finally spoke.

"Attention, runners! You better get ready because the race is about to start! May the best one win!" he said over a microphone.

Jimmy exchanged defying glances with the other participants as he got himself prepared. Not feeling nervous anymore, he stared at the lane in front of his feet.

"On your marks!"

The runners got one leg behind them to get some starting impulse.

"Get set!"

Every single sound around Jimmy seemed to fade away as he focused, a grin showing on his face.

"Bring it on..." he said to himself.

"GO!"


Somewhere else, a group of girls were having a conversation, until one of them put a hand on her head.

"What happens, Sunset?" Fluttershy asked.

"I sensed something... I think I may know where our friend is," Sunset answered.

"And where would that be, darling?" Rarity asked.

The answer came in the form of some guys and girls rolling down the street. One of them got their attention, and Sunset pointed at him.

"There. Now, who wants to watch the race?" Sunset said with a smile.

"I have some popcorn!" Pinkie exclaimed, shaking a few boxes of popcorn.

As they moved away, Applejack stared at the sky.

"I think I heard some thunder..."


Jimmy failed to notice one detail: the closer he was getting to the finishing lane, the darker the sky seemed to turn, because some clouds were moving together, their gray scale going a bit darker each second.

"We may be under the weather right now, ladies and gentlemen, but I can tell you it only makes this event even more interesting! I don't think our runners want to give up yet!" the announcer said over his microphone as he watched the race with a few cameras installed through the route. The rest of the audience watched it through a bigger screen.

However, he talked a bit soon because, as the race kept going, he noticed a lightning bolt making contact with the floor in one of the cameras, making one runner fall down. The audience lamented that while the announcer spoke again.

"Oof... Now, that was really unfortunate. The medics are going to attend her as soon as they can. In the meantime, the rest of the runners are getting close to the end!"

The other runners were rolling as fast as they could while avoiding some other lightning bolts which were touching the floor and forced a few other runners to abandon. For them, that had transformed into the most dangerous race ever.

When they made the last turn, they finally saw it: the finishing lane, at the other end of the street, waiting for them. So they kept running while avoiding the storm.

Unfortunately, one lightning bolt descended from the sky and made contact with one of them. Even worse, that runner was Jimmy. Sunset and her friends had arrived there, and they gasped loudly after seeing what had happened.

The other participants stopped in their tracks to try and help Jimmy, although the storm wouldn't let them do anything. And it was getting even more powerful, so they moved away.

"This is insane, ladies and gentlemen! This is the very first time these kind of events take control of one race! That is, of course, if we ignore the last time, when a flood forced us to evacuate the stadium! Simply horrible!" the announcer exclaimed through the microphone, watching as some of the cameras got broken by the storm, "Hold on! What is happening now?"

Along with the audience and everyone else, the announcer were staring as Jimmy, affected by the lightning bolt, managed to get hold of himself, screaming before suddenly running away in a flash, surrounded by what looked like a rainbow, and crossing the finishing lane. The rest of the people cheered loudly.

"Aaaaaaand there we go! Fighting against the elements, Jimmy has managed to complete the race! We're proud to say it has b-" the announcer interrupted himself as he kept watching, and the others also got in silence, "Wow..."

Everyone were now staring at a cyan-colored girl with red eyes and rainbow-colored long hair with a red hairtie. She was wearing a red and blue dress with a few stripes of color at both sides, and a simbol of a cloud and a rainbow thunder on her chest. Her leggings were painted in a darker blue, and she also had one pair of small wings on each one of her shoes. But the most curious trait were a pair of bigger wings which had appeared on her back.

"Ok, what am I doing here? What's this place?" Rainbow Dash asked, looking around.

"Rainbow!!"

The speedster noticed her friends running towards her, enveloping her in a nice group hug.

"Ah! I'm also happy to see you, girls! Although maybe not as much as you!" she said, a bit constricted by them. They let go as the citizens of Manteo reunited together, the announcer coming beside the girls.

"Well, I admit this has been a strange chain of events. Either way, you have won the race, so the prize is yours!" he said, showing Rainbow a suitcase full of money.

"It wouldn't exactly be fair, you know? I have appeared right at the end of the race, so winning the prize wouldn't be a good thing for the others. But I think they would like to share it," Rainbow said, grinning.

The announcer and the runners simply smiled while Rainbow got back with her friends.

Finally, they were all together.

General Epilogue

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It was midnight at Canterlot City, and everyone had gone to sleep. Only some nocturnal animals made their presence here and there as their characteristic sounds could be heard.

The base of the missing statue in front of Canterlot High School opened its portal again, making way for seven girls to get back to their own world.

"Well, this has been a curious experience, don't you think?" Sunset asked her friends.

"It sure was! I only wish I could have seen that race from earlier. It looked great!" Rainbow answered.

"And I must admit it: ridin' that wild bull was a crazy thing!" Applejack added.

"I'm still thinking about those animals I met. All of them were so nice..." Fluttershy said.

"And the party I was making? That sure was a fun time! If only I stayed a few more minutes, it could have been even better!" Pinkie said, still thinking about that party.

"The most curious thing is that almost every one of us got the opportunity to enjoy our hobbies. Maybe we were all the same guy, or fragments of him, only waking up after finding something related to us," Twilight explained.

"That explains why I appeared after he started wearing one of my beautiful gloves," Rarity said, admiring the accessories covering her hands.

A thought came to Sunset's mind, "I have one question: what about that guy? He hasn't simply disappeared after our transformations, right?"

"I don't think so. As I said, it may be possible that we were just a few fragments of him, and now we're separated, so he'll be at his own home, or anywhere else," Twilight explained.

Rainbow yawned, "We can either keep talking about it or forget it. Whatever it is, I just wanna go home now and have a nice sleep."

"Me too. I'll see if my pets are good before giving them a good night," Fluttershy said.

"I could stay awake for making another party, but my energies seem to have abandoned me, so I'll eat one last cupcake before dropping on my bed!" Pinkie said, making her friends laugh.

"Well then, I guess this is a goodbye for now," Applejack said, "so have a good night, everyone!"

"Group hug!" Pinkie exclaimed.

And they had one last group hug before saying goodbye, each one of them going back to her own home for spending the rest of the night on a comfy bed.


The End