“Alicorn Instincts”

by Wheeler

First published

Twilight Sparkle gets knocked down a few pegs after her ascension.

Twilight's ascension has come with many perks: power, authority, money, and an almost unquenchable libido with a little something extra. Jack Carver, the lone human in Equestria, was accidentally teleported by none other than Twilight herself. Jack had a taken a liking to Equestria, and only two years after his appearance , he settled down with a mare and had become the best lawyer in the land. But when heat season comes around, what will Jack do when Twilight oversteps her authority and power?

[Very Dark]

Contains: Dismemberment, gore, blood, the murder of foals, and righteous revenge

Update 7/9/18: Changed name to “Alicorn Instincts”. Thought old name was a bit cringy.

Chapter 1

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Violet Rain let out an orgasmic cry as Princess Twilight Sparkle rammed her with unrelenting fervor.

"Uhnf! Fuck yes! Faster!" she yelled.

Among other things that Twilight had gained when she Ascended to Alicorn-hood; money, authority, power; she gained other, undeniably lewd traits. Before she became a princess, Twilight stood at 5 feet 3 inches with B-cup breasts and a petite body that didn't really stand out to anyone. Perfect for being a librarian that no one would give a second thought when passing by. Now, as she fucked Violet's brains out, she stood 7 feet, 4 inches with HH cup breasts that hung down to her stomach, thighs that didn't part until at least halfway down to her knees, a bubble butt to rival Celestia herself, and hips that would redefine the word "motherly hips". In other words, she was irresistible. A perfect hourglass shape. One other thing had appeared on her body, or rather, new appendage. A 13 inch soft, 23 inch hard penis, with a set of coconut sized balls, and the libido to match her size and virility.

Twilight continued to slam her cock into Violet's pussy, the velvety walls of her soaking marehood tightly wrapping around Twilight's throbbing member, forming a bulge in her stomach that nearly touched the bottom of Violet's breasts. Violet let out another moan as she orgasmed for the ump-teenth time upon Twilight's thick cock. Each time Twilight bottomed out in Violet, she felt her cock pulse and drool precum into the other mare's pussy, her ass and tits jiggling, her balls sloshing audibly with pent up seed, churning their load and begging to explode in this mare.

"Fuck!" shouted Twilight, "I'm gonna cum!"

Hearing this, Violet wrapped her legs around Twilight's waist; she wanted every drop of cum Twilight could provide her.

"Cum inside! I need this so bad!"

Twilight's cock began to swell inside Violet's pussy, her flared head blocking off the exit of her womb. Twilight's balls clenched, and her load began to pulse up her cock and into Violet's waiting pussy. Both mares moaned in bliss as rope after rope of Twilight's hot cum filled Violet's pussy, her womb being strectched out as pint after pint of Twilight's cum flooded her marehood. 30 seconds of orgasmic release later, Twilight's cock finally came to a stop and she pulled out.


Jack Carver was finishing up work at his law firm, Carver & Moon, as Crimson Moon stepped into his office. It was a Friday evening and the sun was low in the sky, shining through the slats in the blinds as they lay partially closed and leaving lines of sun across the wall to the right of Jack, despite how much he fiddled with them. Damn things never worked anyways. The heat was quite high in the room and Jack proceeded to remove his jacket and roll up the sleeves of his white dress shirt. He found his tie to be quite asphyxiating, so he loosened it to the point where the bottom of the tie hung just above his belt.

"Hey Jack!"

Crimson Moon was a stallion with crimson colored skin and silver hair, and a soothing baritone voice, perfect for arguing and negotiating.

"Hey, hey, how's it going Moon!"

Jack had pale skin and a combed, professional looking haircut; his black hair combed to the side and set with hair gel. He was also the only human ever recorded in Equestria. When he was teleported to the land by the then librarian Twilight; he was almost immediately taken to Princess Celestia and Luna. While he was understandably crushed when the Princess' told him that they had no idea what he was or where he came from, let alone sending him back home, he had set himself a positive outlook after taking a stroll through Ponyville. He quite liked it, minus the stares and frightened looks from most ponies, minus a mint colored pony who seemed to be following him no pollution, no crime, just a homely little village. He certainly didn't expect the sudden vacation to a land filled with talking anthropomorphic horses or "ponies" as they liked to be called.

"I've got a reporter who wanted to talk to you, they came all the way from Canterlot to ask you about the griffon case you just settled."

"Alright, send 'em in."

Jack leaned back in his chair behind his desk, closed the folder he was looking through, put his hands behind his head and took a deep breath as he waited for the reporter to walk through the door. The reporter walked in, a stallion with light blue skin and black hair, a notepad and pencil in his hand and a hat with a little tag that said "press".

"Mr. Carver! What a pleasure to meet you!" exclaimed the stallion. He held out his hand for Jack to shake.

"Pleasure's all mine Mr...?"

"Cobalt, sir."

"Pleasure to meet you Cobalt, and there's no need for formalities here. Just call me Jack."

"Alright, Jack."

"I've come from Canterlot to ask questions to write an article for The Canterlot Post about the recent case involving that griffon home invasion."

"Shoot."

"How did you get into law and order in the first place?"

Jack had always been quick with his mind and could find holes in people's stories and logic. When he entered High School he took part in mock trial and would have political discussions with his friends frequently. He would win almost every argument or discussion he took part in, and earned the nickname "The Carver" for cutting his way through people's alibis and defensive arguments. When he finished High School he enrolled at Harvard University to get a law degree as many of his teachers recommended him to take up a profession in law and order. College was very easy for him, when he learned something new he retained it for as long as he needed it, making studying a breeze and college just turned into expensive high school for him. He earned his undergrad in law as valedictorian and continued on to the law school at Harvard. The law school was more difficult, he had to complete it in three years and he couldn't move at his own pace. This didn't really matter to him however, as his pace was usually ahead of the class and he passed law school with flying colors.

"I guess I've been a lawyer at heart ever since I was a kid. Always loved getting into arguments." Cobalt quickly scribbled onto his notepad.

"Why did you choose to take up this case against the griffons, when there are incredible tensions between them and Equestria, and that you could be the potential target of murder?"

"From the beginning I knew that as soon as I took the case and I was representing Equestria against the griffons that tensions would skyrocket, but I'm confident in Princess Celestia's abilities as a politician to defuse the situation. The law knows no boundaries and I swore to defend anyone that I was assigned or chose."

Cobalt proceeded to ask some other questions about Jack, until the clock struck 5:30. The last train to Canterlot was at six and Cobalt needed to leave. 'God knows why the last train to the capital leaves at six' Jack thought.

"Alright Mr. Carver, this will make a really interesting story for the papers! Thanks!"

"My pleasure, Cobalt."

They shook hands again and Cobalt swiftly left the room, almost getting trucked by Crimson in the hallway. Crimson walked back into the room and leaned against the door frame.

"Jack, it's 5:30. You up to grab some drinks?"

"Nah, I gotta get home to the wife. Heat season just started and she'll be out for blood if I'm not home for the weekend. I'll go next weekend though."

Crimson shrugged. "I'll hold you to it Jack."

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Jack walked home with a brisk pace, this was his first time experiencing heat season ever since he married his wife, Violet Rain. When Twilight teleported Jack to Equestria he fell into a deep depression after he had seen everything in town and he'd run out of things to do. He started to think about how he would be an alien in this world forever and that he wouldn't find happiness in this place. He first met Violet in a bar, whilst he was downing some heavy whiskey and she was dishing it out.

"Watch how much you drink there, had a friend almost die from alcohol poisoning."

Jack scowled. "Well they weren't the only kind of their species in an alien world, now were they?" Violet shrugged and continued to serve the others that sat at the bar.

A few hours later he called Violet over for another shot. The next one would be his 8th of the night.

Violet sighed, leaned on the bar with her right elbow and cocked her eyebrow at Jack. "I think you've had enough to drink, honey. Tell you what. I'll get you some water and when I'm off my shift you can crash at my place. There's no way in Tartarus you're getting home without getting yourself killed."

Jack just finished his drink and stared at the bar in response.

Jack woke up the next morning with one of, if not, the worst headaches he's ever had. "Guess these ponies know how to make some shit," he muttered. He looked around and saw he was on a blue couch and had thrown the matching blanket off him sometime earlier in the night. His senses began to come back to him, and the first thing he noticed was that he reeked of whiskey and sorrow. The second was a mare with purple skin, dark blue hair and blue eyes. She was sweating, wearing a sports bra that held up her firm CC cup breasts and showed off her toned stomach, and running shorts.

"Well well, looks like the man of the hour woke up," she said. Jack wasn't sure if she said anything else, as his hearing was as if his head was being held underwater. The room was spinning very slightly, it seemed to Jack that he was still trashed a little. He slowly continued to look around the room, it seemed to be a living room. The TV was in front of him, with a kitchen behind and to the right of the TV. A hallway led to his left and he saw a couple doors, probably her room, bathroom, closets or some other shit like that, he thought. He slowly brought himself to sitting up on the couch while still trying to get his bearings on how to walk and not fall on his ass.

"Fucking Christ, my head," said Jack as he rubbed his eyes. "When did we come back?"

"'Bout 2:30 this morning. Nearing 11 right now."

Jack finally figured out how to stand up, albeit with a little hobble as he almost fell back onto the couch.

"Sorry about last night. I've just been taking news that I won't be going home anytime soon a little hard, I guess," Jack stated as he continued to struggle to maintain his balance. He held out his hand.

"The name's Jack Carver."

Violet took his hand and gave it a little shake, chuckling as she saw how a little nudge of his hand almost sent him to the floor.

"Violet Rain. You sure you're okay? It doesn't seem like you should try and go home right now," she said with concern lacing her voice as she looked at he man in front of her.

Jack decided he was a bit more than a little drunk still. "I'll be fine. Thanks for putting me up. Maybe when I'm not piss drunk I'll return the favor to you somehow."

"Don't worry about it, it must be difficult being the only of your kind here."

Jack smiled a bit, "No need to tell me that twice."

He left her apartment very cautiously, trying his best not to knock any of the pictures off the wall to his right. When he finally closed the door behind him, he looked around and then down. He said one word, probably too loud.

"Fuck."


The stairs proved to be a difficult challenge for him.

'Who puts 8 flights of stairs here and no elevator?!' he thought as he very, very, carefully went down each step. It took him about 20 minutes to go down the stairs, but it saved him a trip to the ER with a broken arm while still drunk. He stumbled down the street, ducking off into an alley twice to puke and then continued on his journey. Since Ponyville was a small town, and he had memorized the layout and knew it like the back of his quite frankly blurry hand, he eventually made it to his house without much trouble. Although it was very awkward with all the stares he received from ponies as he "walked" down the street. Maybe trying to walk home wasn't the best idea. 'Fuck it,' he thought. His house was quite modest, the bottom floor being his kitchen and living room, and the second floor made up of two bedrooms and a bathroom. He flopped into bed and let out a large belch as he slowly blacked out again.

When Jack re-awoke the headache was still there, incessantly telling him, 'Hey, fucker! You drank too much!'. Though the hangover was proving to be a royal pain in the ass, he could at least control his body now. He got up off the bed and went into the shower. He stood as the hot water somewhat soothed his headache and as he tried to remember the name of the mare he met earlier in the day.

"What was her name?" He finished his shower and started toweling off. He walked into his bedroom and put on a t-shirt and some pants. Though he didn't notice while he was coming home, the sunny day had turned into one that telegraphed a large storm brewing. He looked out his window and saw some leaves and papers flying past, the wind was beginning to pick up. In his window he kept some flowers, though his favorite one was a violet that he picked out a week ago. The others were pretty, sure, but the violet one stood out to him. He heard some thunder outside and two and two clicked in his mind: Violet Rain.

'Ain't that fucking dandy' Jack thought.

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The rest of his day went by without anything exciting happening. The most he saw was the weather pony showing how much of a shitstorm Ponyville was in for with the coming storm. Jack went to bed later that night, still with a headache that made him beg for death.

The next morning was grey, a little darker than just a cloudy day, signifying that this storm would be indeed not forgotten for a while. The bottle of Scotch on his bed stand made his stomach churn. It'd be awhile before he could touch dark liquor again. Especially when most days he would come home and drink away his sorrows. He looked to the right of the Scotch and saw his alarm clock, 9:30 a.m.

'I think I'll try to go see Violet,' Jack thought as he got out of bed to take a shower.

Once Jack had completed his morning routine: shower, get dressed, eat; he looked over at the clock on his wall. The time was 10:40. Jack put down his spoon as he sat at his table next to the kitchen, recalling that Violet came back at near 11 yesterday morning to wake his ass up, and it looked like she had come back from a run. While Jack did run every once in a while, generally it was not wise to run when it's as dark as it is outside and the threat of rain ruining a good workout.

'Just gotta remember where she lived,' he thought as he put his cereal bowl in the sink and put on his shoes.

Jack had also remembered a tidbit of info from yesterday; there were 8 flights of stairs he had to try to not fall down. With this information in mind, he looked for the tallest apartment building he could. Lo and behold, he saw Violet walking through the door to get her mail. He was on the opposite side of the street from her building. He crossed the road and approached her.

"Hey, Violet. It's Jack."

She turned around with a bit of a startled expression and then quickly smiled. "Hey Jack," she said as she shook his hand. "How're you feeling today?

"Better, much better. And I've been thinking. I feel like I need to repay you for your hospitality for yesterday."

Violet brushed it off. "It's nothing, just one pony helping out a friend."

"I just have to return the favor. How about we go out to dinner tonight, on me?"

Violet blushed a little. "I don't know Jack, I mean, are you sure? You don't need to do this for me."

"I insist."

"Well, alright then," Violet said as she turned around and walked back into her building. "I'll meet you here at 6!" she said over her shoulder as she opened the door. Jack didn't feel the need to drink when he got home.


6 rolled around very fast for Jack. He decided to wear his usual suit when he worked at the office, just with a rose in the pocket he usually kept pens in. He arrived at the entrance to Violet's apartment building to see Violet standing in a lilac dress and her usually straight hair curled. She put on some red lipstick and dark purple eye shadow to make her eyes and face pop out. Jack was astonished.

"Wow, Violet. You look amazing."

Violet blushed and looked down bashfully. "Oh, stop. You don't mean that."

"Of course I do, Violet."

She just blushed harder and quickly changed the subject. "Where are we going to eat?"

"I thought we could go to the Gilded Horn, heard they had great spaghetti there."

"That sounds wonderful!"

As the two walked down the street, Jack couldn't help but notice how Violet's eyes shone in under the lights in town. Jack and Violet entered the Gilded Horn, and was met by a Prench unicorn.

"Good evening sir and madame. Do you have a reservation?"

"Table for two, 6:30," said Jack.

"Ah yes, Mr. Carver and Ms. Rain. Allow me to seat you."

The seats were dark mahogany with red velvet on the inside, it complimented the dark atmosphere of the restaurant very nicely. The table had a candle and two menus on it with some bread and ice water. The Prench host sat Jack and Violet at their seats.

"A waiter will be with you shortly to get your drinks."

Jack looked over the menu and saw many delectable things: fresh tossed salad, black bean burgers, and their famous spaghetti. He even saw meat on the menu for the griffon guests, and a couple years without it had stirred up some cravings for some beef for Jack.

Another Prench man walked over to the two. "What will madame have to drink?"

"I'll have a glass of Bubbly Rosé," said Violet.

"I'll have a glass of Cava."

"Very well, sir and madame. Your drinks will be served shortly." The waiter walked away.

"You know, Jack," Violet said, "You really didn't have to do this."

Jack just cocked his eyebrow. "Nonsense. Someone like you deserves a nice meal."

Violet smiled bashfully and blushed as she looked down at her menu. The waiter returned, with their wine in hand and a notepad in the other.

"Are sir and madame ready to order?" he asked.

"I'll have the spaghetti," Jack said.

"Ah! Excellent choice monsieur! The best spaghetti in Equestria!" He turned to Violet. "And for you madame?"

"I'll have the spaghetti, too."

"Excellent. Your food will be out shortly." The waiter walked away again.

As the two waited for their food, they idly chatted about each other's interests and hobbies. Jack learned that Violet loved reading during a thunderstorm and having intelligent conversations with her friends. Violet learned that Jack was also an avid reader and that he could beat almost anyone in an argument and see through people's lies. Jack and Violet almost didn't notice when the waiter had returned with their food because they became so engrossed with learning about each other. They both loved how their spaghetti tasted and finally understood why this restaurant was renowned for its spaghetti. Their wines were of the highest quality and made a wonderful pairing with their food. For desert, they both got some apple pie with a scoop of vanilla ice cream. After Jack paid the bill, which in his opinion, a slice of pie shouldn't have costed 9 bits, they both walked out, and thunder could be heard in the sky.

Jack and Violet slowly walked home, still talking about their interests and what they do for fun when rain started to fall. The rain soon picked up, becoming more fierce and the wind was making it rain almost sideways. Violet quickly pulled Jack by the hand underneath an awning that had a light shining over the door. Jack couldn't help but notice her eyes again and how they sparkled in the light.

"I had a wonderful time tonight, Jack. I really appreciate it."

Jack shrugged it off. "It was nothing."

Violet grabbed both of Jack's hands with hers. "No one's ever been this nice to me."

Jack shook his head. "That should be a crime for a mare like yourself to not be treated this way."

Violet blushed again. She then leaned up to Jack and kissed him softly on the cheek. "Thank you, Jack." This time it was Jack's turn to blush. Violet giggled as they left the safety of the awning and into the street. Jack went with Violet to her apartment building, the rain not bothering either of them. As she walked up the steps to the door, she looked back at him with her eyes yet again twinkling under the light, and winked at him.


After that night, Jack and Violet were madly in love. It took just six dates before they had sex. Their love making was wild and passionate; Jack's eight inch member plowing through Violet's pussy. Her entire body felt hot, and that heat came to a point, at her clit. Jack would take his fingers and stroke her love button, lightly squeezing it and making her toes curl with pleasure as she wrapped her legs around Jack's waist. Her pussy was clenching repeatedly on Jack's cock, her folds massaging his entire length as she neared her orgasm. Violet could feel Jack getting close too, his thrusts becoming erratic and with varying power that would always keep Violet on the cusp of her release. The tension in her pussy was melting into a ball of heat that further spurred Jack on.

"Violet!" exclaimed Jack, "I'm getting close!" He began to pull out.

Violet proceeded to lock her legs around his waist even tighter, her voice laced with a sultry undertone,

"Oh no you don't big boy, heat season isn't here yet so you're going to fill me up~"

Jack soon bottomed out in Violet and started groping her tits, tweaking her nipples and kneading her soft flesh. Violet cooed softly as she felt his warm seed flood her pussy as he played with her tits.

"Mmh, you're cumming so much~" she purred as the tension in her core snapped and her orgasm fell upon her. She gasped and her pussy clenched down on Jack's cock. Hard. This sudden stimulation forced Jack into a second orgasm, as he continued to empty inside her. 20 seconds had passed, and both of them had become spent for the night. Jack pulled out and laid next to Violet, hearing her coo softly as she felt his seed slosh around in her pussy. She snuggled up next to him, and locked licks with him, their tongues battling for dominance as her lush lips locked with his. She broke the kiss and looked at him.

"I love you jack."


Six months after that night, Jack had popped the question to Violet.

Jack got on one knee. "Violet Rain, you've made me one of the happiest men alive. Will you marry me?" He pulled out a box with a ring in it, a large violet stone in the middle.

Violet's eyes began to water. She stood him up and kissed him as she cried tears of joy. She broke the kiss and pulled him into a hug.

"Oh Jack! Of course I will!"

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Jack continued to walk with a fast pace; he knew how lustful Violet could get even when she wasn't in heat. He recalled a memory of coming home after a few weeks with a lack of sex. Her tackling him and nearly tearing his pants off wasn't something he was really willing to go through, at least with his expensive pants on. He entered his house and saw rose petals leading up to their bedroom. Jack walked up the stairs and saw Violet laying on the bed with half lidded eyes as she softly bit her lip.

"I've been waiting for you Jack," she cooed. "Now that you're home for the weekend, you aren't leaving this room until I'm satisfied~" she purred. Jack just gulped in response. He and Violet had been making plans for her to get pregnant for a while after their marriage, and they agreed upon this heat season. Little did Jack know that Violet was going to be pregnant. But there was a next to none chance of him being the father.

They made love several times that night, each time her lust for him growing as he emptied everything he had into her. But Violet couldn't get the image of Twilight's cock out of her mind, no matter how much she tried to focus on Jack. Its meaty length throbbing and drooling pre-cum for her to swallow. Her large balls, and how much cum they produced, how they would slap her ass with the force of someone's hand as Twilight stretched her pussy out. The very thought of Twilight's cock made Violet orgasm on Jack's, and with a final cry, he came inside her for the last time that evening.

The next day, while Violet was sleeping, Jack headed out of the house and into the town to pick up some food for later, as Violet would no doubt not let him leave bed after she woke up. He saw Twilight looking at some apples, her breasts barely being covered up by her shirt and the obvious outline of her cock on the outside of her jeans. Jack had befriended Twilight before she became a princess, so the sudden change didn't really bother him much other than the fact that he was staring at her tits most of the time because of her extra foot on him. Her new body wasn't to be taken for granted, however, as he heard from many of his female friends what a monster she was in bed, and that she has already impregnated at least 3 mares with her child.

"Hey Twilight!"

She turned around and looked down at Jack and smiled. "H-hey Jack! H-how's it going with Violet?" She seemed to be nervous, she wouldn't look him in the eye. Jack detected this very easily and cocked an eyebrow.

"Twilight? Are you okay?" Jack knew when people were lying, everyone had a tell. After knowing Twilight for two years, he quickly learned that whenever she decided to lie she would flick her tail back and forth exactly 5 times.

"I-I'm fine Jack!" Flick. "This heat season has been difficult for me."

"Ah. Well I heard that you impregnated 3 mares. I hope you're going to take care of your children."

Her nervous gaze worsened. "Y-yeah, everything's alright. I had all their consent." Flick. "It's only three so it should be fine." Flick.

Jack took on a comedic tone. "You didn't use a lust spell or anything?"

"N-nope, they just wanted me, I guess." Flick.

"Well, I'd better get going Twilight. Violet's probably waking up and wondering where I am." He turned around, but at the last second, he saw Twilight's tail flick for the fifth time. He began to become suspicious. Twilight saw him walking away and her nervous facade dropped. She smirked as she began to think of how she will fuck Violet again. She was going to thoroughly enjoy watching Jack's marriage fall apart.


Twilight's meetings with Violet became more frequent as her heat continued, she wasn't being satisfied by Jack at all anymore. All she could do was bow to Twilight and beg her for her cock.

"Please mistress! I need your cock! Only it can satisfy me!"

Twilight had her arms crossed in front of her tits and she cocked her eyebrow as she looked down at Violet's kneeling form.

"Very well. You may suck it."

Violet immediately began to lick and suck on Twilight's balls, and stroke her cock, slick from pre. Besides the cock and libido that Twilight gained, she also gained incredible fertility and virility. A single drop of her pre and anyone that touched it would be begging to suck her cock within a week. She already had 3 mares pregnant with her child, and with Violet being added to her harem, it was about to be 4.

Twilight moaned lightly as Violet began sucking Twilight's cock, she took 8 inches at once, forcing the tip into her throat. She traveled down Twilight's cock, her pussy becoming wetter and wetter as she forced herself onto Twilight's throbbing dick. Twilight began to knead her massive breasts as the pleasure took her. She pinched her nipples and let out a small moan as Violet kept going down her cock. Her breasts were brilliant, perky and pillowy, so large, perfect for when she wasn't with her harem and needed relief. But nothing, nothing compared to having Violet sucking her cock. Violet's nose eventually touched Twilight's stomach, and Twilight began to thrust her hips back and forth, using Violet's mouth and throat however she pleased.

"Mmh, yes~" moaned Twilight, "You feel so amazing around my cock. You make mistress feel so good."

Twilight's horn lit up as she stimulated Violet's pussy, rubbing her throbbing clit, as she didn't allow her pets to touch themselves before their mistress came. Twilight's thrusts became erratic and she bottomed out in Violet's mouth. 23 inches of throbbing horse cock swelled in Violet's throat and Twilight shot her load into Violet's waiting stomach. Twilight's cum was thick and hot, with a very heavy musk that permeated through the room as it rocketed into Violet's stomach in heavy spurts. Both mares moaned in pleasure and 30 seconds later, Twilight took her cock out of Violet's mouth.

"Can't have you wasting your meal, because after all my baby needs all the nourishment you can provide~"

One fact that Violet forgot about was that Jack had already preemptively installed a camera in the room where their child was going to sleep so he could check on it and watch it peacefully sleep. The room Twilight and Violet happened to be in, however, was their coming child's room. And Jack happened to be on his lunch break. Crimson was sitting in the room as well, finishing some paperwork and getting ready to get some lunch. Jack wanted to see if the camera was working properly and opened his laptop on his desk as he took a bite of his sandwich. As he watched Violet beg for Twilight's cock and Twilight confirming that Violet was pregnant with Twilight's child, he stopped chewing his sandwich, something in Jack's mind snapped. And that something was not very happy.

"You okay Jack?" questioned Crimson. "You look like you just saw someone get their head cut off."

Jack looked up at Crimson and gave him a blank expression. "Everything's fine, bud. Just saw our electric bill is all. Gonna have to tell Violet to stop leaving the TV on when we watch movies." Crimson was doubting Jack a little, but he trusted Jack and turned to leave the room.

"Alright then, Jack. I'll be back in a bit."

"Enjoy your lunch, Crimson." Jack looked back at his screen and his eye twitched a little. His wife was now laying on the bed in the room with Twilight next to her.

Hell was going to be paid.

He was giving a new name to "The Carver."

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Jack had always been a methodical man, planning and executing his ideas with near-prefect timing. He was very good at spotting patterns and discrepancies in people's stories. When you were getting prosecuted by Jack, their was no mercy for your soul. Jack also knew the law of Equestria like he knew the oath he took when becoming a lawyer on Earth and in Equestria. A plan began to slowly hatch in his mind on how he could ruin Twilight's life. After all, it was only fair that he returned the favor to her after witnessing her impregnate his wife. His lips curled into a wry smile, and he chuckled to himself.

"Well, well, Ms. Sparkle. Looks like you're on the stand now."


Twilight had begun to take pride in the fact that her goddess like qualities could turn even the most loyal mare or stallion into her play toy. By the time she found Violet she had already broken 3 marriages; Cup Cake, Windy Whistles, and Lyra Heartstrings. They were all carrying her child, and she was very close to adding the best lawyer in Equestria's wife, Violet Rain, to her harem. She sat on the throne in her castle as she began to plan on who she was going to target next. She idly began to stroke herself through her pants as she thought of her friends, Fluttershy and Rarity with their impossibly large breasts, bigger than her own. Pinkie's lush curves and ass, or Applejack's and Rainbow's toned bodies. She licked her lips in anticipation as she imagined every mare in Ponyville bowing to her in lust. These coming years would be fun.


Crimson came back to the office to see Jack's desk empty, aside from a note on top of some papers.

Here is the rest of the paperwork that needs to be filed today. After that, you can head home. Something important came up and I had to leave. I'll explain to you at a later date.

Jack

Crimson looked at the note and cocked his eyebrow. He knew Jack never liked to leave unfinished business to other ponies, not out of distrust or disrespect, but because he took every case to heart and gave it his all. This thought worried Crimson but he shoved the thought out of his mind at the prospect of going home early on a workday.


Like his cases of prosecution or defense, Jack took a lot of things to heart. He was a very passionate man if nothing else. And having Twilight fuck his wife was something he couldn't allow to happen to anypony else. Jack had to deal with many things in court on Earth, mainly petty crimes like robbery and home invasion, but every once in a while he'd come upon a serial killer or pedophile that tortured their victims in unthinkable ways. To gain some knowledge and background info on what a torture could do to a person, he had checked out several books on what torture did to people, both mentally and physically breaking someone's willpower and desire to continue on. He kept these books in mind as he traveled to the hardware store and gathered some supplies. Nothing that looked out of the ordinary; a saw, a hammer, a couple bottles of water, and a wash rag. Maybe he was just doing some renovations or repairs on his home. As Jack stood in line at the hardware store, his mind began to drift back towards the scene of his wife begging to be fucked by Twilight. Her blue eyes, shining under the light like they did when they first started dating, as she looked up at Twilight with lust plastered across her face. He snapped out of it when the cashier began to almost yell to get his attention.

"Sir? SIR?!" Jack quickly walked up to the register and apologized.

"Heh, sorry about that. Just thinking about some things." His right eye twitched again. He then paid for his tools and walked into another store down the street, called "Trixie's". He opened the door and walked inside, to see all sorts of sex costumes, dildos, and everything of the sort lining the walls and shelves of the dimly lit store. A blue woman walked over to Jack.

"Welcome to Trixie's! The best place to get things for your kinky nights with a lucky mare or stallion. What can Trixie get you?"

Jack looked over to her. "Do you have anything to suppress unicorn magic?"

"Of course Trixie does! How powerful is this unicorn?"

"Do you have anything that can suppress an alicorn?"

Trixie blushed and gave him a sultry smile. "It seems that the one of the princess' has a new lover. I have just the thing."
She walked into a back room and returned 30 seconds later with a golden ring. "This ring will stop any magic from coming out of a unicorn's or Alicorn's horn. I am willing to lend you this as a gift to Celestia or Luna, on the condition that you try to refrain from making them moan too loud. They love having their magic restricted and being bound." She winked at him. "Have a nice day."

Jack began to walk home from Trixie's as his mind began to wander again. To think, the mare he loved and devoted everything to, was kneeling in front of a princess when she so much as heard her voice. He spat on the ground. Whether or not he managed to stay with Violet, he quite frankly didn't care. All that mattered to him was that Twilight was stopped once and for all. He walked in the door to see his wife on the couch, watching some TV and a bowl of popcorn. 'Popcorn isn't very good for nourishing Twilight's child, is it?' he spitefully thought as he walked up the stairs. He was stopped when he heard his wife say his name.

"Wow Jack, you're home early. Are you feeling all right?" she asked, the same concerned expression he'd seen when he'd first met her on her face.

"Feeling a little sick is all. I think I just need some rest."

"Okay, just call me if you need anything."

Jack continued walking up the stairs. He went into his bedroom and took off his jacket and rolled up his sleeves. He took his tie off and rubbed his temples while closing his eyes. He took a deep breath and put the magic suppressor in his pocket. He laid the tools underneath his bed, along with some handcuffs he kept under his bed for when Violet was feeling kinky. 'Fuck her,' he thought. 'It's go time.'

"Hey Violet! Come take this pregnancy test! I made a bet with Crimson last week that you'd be pregnant by the end of the month and I was going to take you out to dinner with the money!" he yelled in a chipper voice, though his eyes steeled over when he mentioned going out to dinner. He heard her chuckling as she walked up the stairs and into the room.

"Alright, I'll be back in a few," she said as she walked into their bathroom. When she returned Jack was reading a book, and she looked at him excitedly. "Jack! We're pregnant!" He looked up from his book and feigned a cheerful expression.

"That's wonderful! I'll have to tell Crimson when I go back to work. You can go back downstairs now, that's all I needed." She walked out of the room smiling and went back to the couch. The last doubt in Jack's mind was cleared, she was pregnant. Now all he had to do was wait.

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10 months had passed since the day that Violet and Jack found out that she was pregnant. Twilight still visited Violet while Jack was at work, using the guest bedroom to fuck Violet, just not using her pussy, but her mouth and asshole. It was a pattern they formed while Jack was at work, at around 12:30 every day, when Jack went to work, minus Sundays, Violet and Twilight would walk into the bedroom and fuck. For 10 months. Without missing a single day. His eye and mouth twitched, his plan was going to be executed soon. Throughout the months, Jack learned the names of the other mares in Twilight's harem and where they lived. Windy Whistles lived in Cloudsdale, so Jack bought two black market teleportation scrolls and a cloudwalking potion. The rest were easy to get to and required minimal planning. After several hours of paperwork, the work day had come to a close. Jack began walking home, where Violet should be making dinner for he and a special guest they had coming.

Jack walked into his house to smell the wonderful aroma of stir fried vegetables and rice being cooked on the stove. A pot of tomato soup was quietly bubbling next to the pan. He walked up behind his wife and wrapped his arms around the bulge in her stomach, she was due in a few weeks. Violet softly cooed as she felt jack bite her neck and ear.

"Stooop, Jack," she said as she bit her lip, though out of nervousness for her "mistress" and husband to be in the same room together or out of actual arousal, Jack couldn't detect. He rather didn't care. A knock on the door signaled Twilight's arrival for dinner. He invited her over last week so she could give him some tips on parenting, as the three previous mares had all given birth. Jack opened the door to see twilight in some tight fitting jeans that clearly showed her package and ass off, with a white t-shirt that only covered up about half of her massive breasts. Not very much in the way of modesty, but Jack had to admit that it would be difficult to be modest when your proportions are that large.

"Ah! Twilight! Please, come in!" He stood out of the way as Twilight ducked her head into the doorway and walked into their living area and took a deep breath.

"Smells delicious, Jack." Jack walked past Twilight and went over to Violet, who was beginning to plate the food.

"Why don't you go sit down with Twilight at the table, while I bring out the food and drinks," he whispered to her. He turned around and began to put the food on the plates. Violet walked towards the table, but Twilight grabbed her and locked lips with her as Jack stood with their back to them. Twilight let out a sultry moan and broke the kiss. She winked at Violet and pulled out her chair for her. Jack had heard this happen, the moan twilight gave and the one Violet did as she was kissed in front of her own husband. Jack furrowed his brow and brought out some Rohypnol tablets. He crushed them up into a powder and mixed it in with Twilight's food. He probably gave her too much, but at this point, he didn't really care if she overdosed or not. He brought all the plates and bowls out and sat down.

"So glad we could have you here for company, Twilight," Jack said. "What with you being the princess of friendship I imagine it must be difficult to find time for this, so I thank you."

Violet turned to Twilight and blushed. "We appreciate it a lot that you came here misstr-Twilight." She looked down at her soup. Twilight was beginning to wonder if Jack caught that slip up at all, as he looked woefully unaware of the quite obvious mistake his wife made in addressing Twilight.

"My pleasure Violet. Same to you Jack. It's been awhile since I was last able to sit down with my friends and have a nice dinner."

Everyone started eating their soup, and they all seemed to be quite famished as they finished their first course in a matter of minutes. They all started eating their stir fry, though Twilight didn't seem to be getting affected by the roofies much. She was starting to yawn quite frequently and sincerely apologizing, stating that all of her duties as princess had left her quite tired. Jack had one chance left. When they all finished their stir fry, he got up and began to get their dessert. Jack wasted no time getting half the bottle of Rohypnol out and crushing them into Twilight's pie. He then put a scoop of ice cream on top and then served it to everyone.

"Tonight's dessert is apple pie with vanilla ice cream. Enjoy!" he sat down with a smile and began to dig in. He glanced at Twilight out of the corner of his eye as she ate and saw her movements begin to slow, her eyes becoming glazed over as the drugs began to take their affect. He looked up and gave Twilight a smug smile as she slowly started to realize that he knew the entire time.

"Something wrong, Twilight?"

"What the fuck did you d-" Twilight then fell out of her chair and onto the ground, finally having blacked out. Jack looked over to Violet, seeing her expression of utter fear come across her face as she realized that she made a grave mistake. She simply looked at Twilight's body on the ground, with her look of fear plastered on. Jack's voice snapped her out of her trance.

"You know, Violet," Jack said smugly, "You were the only thing in this world that made me truly happy. Sure, the law firm is great and all, but you were the icing on the cake for me. You were someone I could come home to, someone I could share my passion of books and conversations with. Someone I could serve for all eternity." His smug expression quickly darkened to a dangerous tone. "I knew you felt the same way, because you told me almost every night that I made you the happiest mare in Equestria." He leaned over the table, his chin sitting on his locked hands as his elbows sat on the table. "But I'm beginning to think that "Ms. Let's Fuck Everyone I Can" over there has changed that. Tell me, Violet. Do you still have the same love for me we shared a year ago? And don't try to lie. You know I will find out."

Violet guiltily looked over at Jack and swallowed as her eyes shone with tears.

"Y-yes, Jack." she stuttered. Jack looked down at the table. Her ear flicked slightly and she seemed to be looking behind him.

Then he closed his eyes and slowly rose from the table and slowly began walking towards her. "I do believe I told you that I know when you lie, Violet. I'll give you one more chance to answer truthfully." He leaned in on her right side and whispered in her ear, "Do you still have the same love for me we shared a year ago? Or is your mistress the one that has captured your heart?" Violet swallowed again and looked out of the corner of her eye towards him.

"I do, Jack." Her ear flicked again. Jack was furious. He abruptly stood up and grabbed her by the arm.

"YOU ARE LYING TO ME VIOLET! I TOLD YOU NOT TO LIE TO ME!" Jack started pulling her by the arm out of her chair and she gave a yelp of fear as she almost fell on the ground.

"Jack! I'm sorry! It's not my fault!" she began to sob.

"THEN WHO'S FAULT IS IT?! I DOUBT IT'S TWILIGHT'S FAULT THAT YOU COULDN'T JUST SAY," -he began to use a mocking high pitched voice- "Jack, I started fucking Twilight in my free time because why not. But I'll still live off your money with her child and pretend everything is fine." He switched back to his normal voice. "EVERYTHING IS NOT FINE VIOLET!" He finally reached the door with her fighting and struggling. He swung open the door violently and looked out into the setting sun. "NOW GET OUT! DON'T LET ME SEE YOU," he spat on the ground. "OR YOUR CHILD EVER AGAIN!" He slammed the door shut as Violet continued sobbing on their door step. 'She's only going to see her child once or twice too,' he thought as he turned around and started walking toward the unconscious Twilight. He held her hands and dragged her up the stairs to the guest bedroom.

"I hope you're ready to go down the river, Twilight."

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Twilight slowly opened her eyes as she came out of unconsciousness. She looked around the room she was in, and recognized it as the room she had been in with Violet over the past 10 months. While keeping a calm demeanor, she had became very nervous in her head. The door opened on her left and she saw Jack walk in.

"Well if it isn't the good 'ol princess of friendship. You always did complain about being tired all the time. Tell me, how was your rest?" He smiled smugly.

Twilight looked over at him in disgust. "It seems cuckboy has entered the room finally." She attempted to sit up, but her hands were bound above her head and her feet were bound apart, tied to a bed post with rope and wrapped in a quarter of a roll of duct tape. She tried to summon a spell to get her out of these binds, but the spell fizzled and nothing happened.

"I always thought you were smart, Twilight. You didn't notice the suppression ring on your horn? Tsk, Tsk, Tsk. A valient, if grave attempt to escape." Twilight's fear began to show on her face. Jack then took a rag out of his pocket and a bucket of water from outside the doorway. "Let's play a game, shall we? After all, foals love to play games. I'm going to ask you a question. If you lie to me, you'll get punished. If you tell the truth, you'll get a treat. Just like a dog." He leaned over her face and held the rag close. "Question one. Did you deserve to become an alicorn?" Twilight narrowed her eyes.

"Fuck you." Jack raised his eyebrows and feigned a look of thought. His eyes then looked into hers. "I think I'll pass, from what I heard you were a quick shooter anyways." He then laid the rag across her mouth and covered her eyes with his hand. "Hope you enjoy swimming." He began to dump the water on the rag over her mouth. The first feeling she got was shock, at the ice cold water being poured over her warm body. Not a second after that, was the feeling of being drowned. She struggled as hard as her seven foot body would allow her to, but she wouldn't budge. After 15 seconds, the water stopped, the rag was removed and the hand covering her eyes was lifted. Tears streamed down her face as she gasped for breath. "It seems you've been naughty. Disrespect me too many times, and, well," he looked down at her slyly, "you won't be much of a princess after that."

"I'll ask again; do you deserve to be an alicorn?" She promptly responded with another "Fuck you." Jack shrugged and covered her mouth and eyes again. This process was beginning to piss Jack off as he lifted his hand and the rag for the sixth time that night. "I'll give you one more chance, Twilight. Do you deserve to be an alicorn- no, do you deserve what you STOLE FROM ME?!" Twilight, despite being fearful and almost drowned six times, still hadn't caught on to Jack's plan. She smiled smugly and said a firm "Yes. I do." That set Jack off. He quickly walked out of the room and came back 10 seconds later with a hand saw. Twilight eyed the saw doubtfully. "You won't do shit." Jack's eye twitched. "Watch me." He climbed up onto the bed, leaning over her chest and holding her head down by pressing his hand onto her forehead. "I told you many times, Twilight. It was one simple question with a simple answer. But you decided to be a bitch and look where it landed you. I hope you didn't like your horn very much, Twilight." Twilight became genuinely scared for the first time since becoming a princess.

"Al-alright, Jack. I don't deserve my powers. All I did was be a good student and I got these without actually doing anything remarkable. But please don't remove my horn." Her eyes began to shine with tears of fear and dread, realizing that Jack was being serious about his punishment. Jack climbed off the bed and looked at her and smiled as he stroked his hand through her mane. "Now that wasn't so hard, now was it? I believe you've earned a treat." He began massaging her breasts and lightly pinching her nipples, and eyed her pants as her mare-splitter began to swell in her jeans. He quickly stopped and began to walk out of the room. "Night night, Twilight." He closed the door and the air conditioning in the room flipped on, leaving her shivering as her still soaking body attempted to warm itself up.

The next day (or so she assumed) started not a few hours after Jack left her. She was on her stomach, her breasts uncomfortably squashed against her chest as she lay on the bed. She looked over her back and saw the first thing that truly terrified her since she had been tied to the bed. Jack was sitting in a chair, backwards, leaning against the back rest and idly playing with a machete. He slowly looked up into her eyes and whistled.

“You seem a bit cold, Ms. Sparkle. I think your wings would make a great blanket.” He got out of the chair and kneeled over her back on the bed. He lightly dragged the blade up and down her back, almost like an old timey barber would. Twilight’s eyes were shining with tears.

“P-please don’t jack. I’m sorry. Please let me go and I’ll get all of this chaos undone. I promise! Just please don’t take my wings!” Jack slapped her ass. Hard.
Her plump ass jiggled back and forth, even through her jeans it noticeably swayed. ‘It’s a damn shame she’s such a bitch,’ thought Jack.

“Shut up.” Jack suddenly seized both wings with one hand at the base, and brought them together. He slowly started stroking her wings, up and down, very slowly. He then stopped at the top and readied the machete. It took one swing.

Twilight had been silently crying this entire time, but it abruptly stopped as her eyes shot open and she let out a horrifying shout of pain as her sobbing renewed and blood began to trickle down her back. Her eyes began to roll up into her head and she nearly puked before she blacked out.

Her treatment went on like this for days, as she became more and more fearful of what Jack would do if she didn't say the answer he wanted to hear. The one other time she disobeyed his orders, he began removing her toenails with some pliers, until through wailing speech, begged him to stop. She felt malnourished and weak, she almost never tried struggling against her bonds. The next time Twilight opened her eyes, the blinds on the window were closed, and she saw sound proofing foam on the walls in the room. Jack was sitting in the right corner reading a book next to a lamp. It was the only light source in the room. She whimpered slightly. Jack looked up from his book with a blank expression and bookmarked his page. He then stood up from the chair he was sitting in and picked an item up from the table the lamp was on. He began walking over to Twilight.

"You know Twilight, this has been fun and all, but I believe this is my stop on the train." He brought the saw out into the light. Both Twilight and Jack heard pounding on the door downstairs. It sounded like a sobbing mare.

"J-Jack! Please let me in! I'm so sorry for what I did! Please let me in! I still love you! Jack!” Jack then closed the door to the room.

"Heh, she's been like that since early this morning."

"Whatever you're doing, Jack, I beg of you, please don't. I can't take any more of this. I should have never taken Violet from you, I'm sorry, but please let me go! I'll never tell anyone about this I swear! I’ll do anything!" Tears began to roll down her face as Jack stepped closer and she began to severely regret her decisions over the past 10 months. "P-please Jack! I beg you!" Jack's eyes narrowed and he scowled. "Shut up." He climbed on top of the bed again and held her head down. "No! Please! Please don't!" Twilight began to become desperate. She struggled as hard as she could, but here binds were solid. "Too late for that, Ms. Sparkle." He moved the saw to her horn and began to move it back and forth. Pain shot down Twilight's horn, head, and body, it seemed like every nerve was being hit at the same time with pain. Twilight began to scream out in agony as her horn was forcibly removed from her head. Her vision began to darken as he made it halfway through her horn, and she finally passed out.

Twilight woke up in a daze as she noticed a considerable lack of weight on her head. She looked over to her right, her horn was sitting upright on the bed stand with a smiley face written on it in black pen. Doing some quick calculations, she figured out that if she escaped and got her horn reattached within 10 minutes, then she would suffer no damage and it would have it's full power. A thought of dread came upon her mind, though, as she realized that she had been unconscious for at least half an hour, judging by the fact that the blinds had been opened and the sun was shining through them. She began to slowly cry, realizing her mistake of taking Violet into her harem. She looked down at another pain source of her body, and saw something that was almost as bad as losing her horn. Her pants and underwear had been removed, showing off her long and thick cock. Or rather, the stump of what it used to be. Wrapped in a bloody bandage, was the remaining 2 inches of her package. She looked at the wall in front of her and saw her wings on a mahogany plaque and written underneath it in silver pen wrote,

”They’re better fans than they are blankets.”

She found she could sit up, and that the bonds on her hands had been loosened considerably. She looked down and saw another marking on her body, on her balls were Jack's initials branded in. J.C. She frantically looked around the room and saw the saw near her feet and quickly passed it up her body. She began to cut through the ropes holding her hands down, followed by her feet. She got out of the bed, weak from malnutrition and blood loss, and stumbled to the door. On it, was a note that simply said, You've lost both your horns.


Jack walked through town with a pep in his step, whistling a merry tune and his hands in his pockets. Night was setting upon Ponyville, the residents locking up and getting ready to go to bed. Jack, however, was not very tired, he was nigh excited at what his next step was. His life was already thoroughly ruined by the purple Alicorn, so he might as well make himself happy while he's at it. He skulked around town, watching as search parties of ponies began to walk towards his house. He stayed in the shadows and looked at the walls of various shops, showing wanted signs for his kidnapping of their beloved princess. He smirked as the night grew darker, his time had almost come.

He began to walk towards Sugercube Corner, having Cup Cake as his first target. She gave birth to Twilight's child a few weeks prior, so she was out of the hospital and at home, exhausted and content. Jack gritted his teeth at the mention of Twilight in his thoughts, and pressed on towards the cafe. Some renovators near the building had left their ladder out and Jack grabbed it. He reached the wall underneath Cup Cake's room, and put the ladder up to the correct height and began to climb it. He reached her window and looked in, she was sleeping peacefully in her bed as he child slept in a crib across the room. He saw no sign of her husband or their other foals. 'Guess he got custody of them,' Jack thought as he opened up her window. If anyone did this back in Boston then they might as well live in a cardboard box, because anyone with any unlocked anything will have it stolen. He silently climbed into her room and spotted the crib. He slowly walked over to Cup's bed and took a pillow opposite the side she was sleeping on and grasped it in his hands. He walked over to the crib and looked down to see Twilight's foal sleeping without a care in the world. He took a deep breath and placed the pillow over the foal's face and pushed down, as it abruptly woke up and tried to start screaming. It's flailing and muffled yells were beginning to die down and eventually stopped. He lifted the pillow off the foal's face and began to leave through the window. One down, three to go.

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Jack climbed back through the window and down the ladder from Sugarcube Corner. Once he reached the ground he picked up the ladder as silently as he could and put it back at the renovation site. He mentally crossed out Cup Cake's name. Lyra Heartstrings was next.


Celestia had just gotten to bed, it was becoming late into the night and that particular day of court had been exhausting. She had closed her eyes and began to fall asleep when a frantic guard burst through her doors.

"Princess! A letter of utmost importance from Twilight Sparkle! Something's happened to her!" He nigh shoved the letter in Celestia's face as she opened it and began reading. Her face became one of horror as she read the letter. She looked up at the guard.

"Tell her I'll be there shortly."

"What was the letter about, princess?"

"Someone kidnapped, tortured, and dismembered my former student." The guard became silent and looked at the ground.


Jack took the teleportation scrolls and the cloud walking potion out of his pocket and clutched them tightly. No. 'She's last.' He thought. He began with a brisk walk towards Lyra's house. He looked up at the night sky and saw the moon at it's peak. He had 6 hours to finish his job and hitch a ride out of Equestria. Once sunrise came, there would be nowhere for him to hide. He arrived at Lyra's house; a small one story home that looked to be comfortable, yet cheap. The only window was the one to her kitchen, and it was a bay window, so he had to either bust through the window or go through the front door. Jack seriously considered the window, but wanted to check the front door. To his surprise, the door handle turned and the door opened. For a few seconds he stared at the opened door in disbelief. He silently shook his head and quietly entered Lyra's house. Walking through the halls he saw pictures of Lyra and Bonbon nuzzling each other or them looking at each other with pure love in their eyes. Half of them however, had Bonbon scribbled out and a picture of Twilight placed over her. He narrowed his eyes at the pictures and scowled at them. He continued down the hall, checking each door. The last door on the right was Lyra's bedroom. He peeked in to see Lyra contently resting in her bed. There was one complication however. It seems that since Lyra had abandoned Bonbon and all she had left in this world -'Yeah right,'- thought jack, she was grasping her foal in her bed as she slept. Jack looked around the room and saw a small pillow, one that would go on a couch, just long and wide enough to pass for a foal. He crept to Lyra's bed. In one hand he had the small pillow and the other was ready to take the foal. Lyra stirred for a bit, Jack frozen with his eyes narrowed at her. 'Don't wake up Lyra. Don't make me hurt you. Don't wake up. This is for the better.' She fell back asleep and Jack let out a silent exhale. He grabbed the foal with his left hand, cupping his hand underneath its back and began to lift it up out of Lyra's grasp. Lyra whimpered a bit and Jack quickly replaced the pillow within her grasp. Lyra visibly relaxed from this and unconsciously rolled over, facing the other side of the bed with the pillow in her grip. The foal in Jack's hand had many characteristics like Twilight. Jack pondered for a moment why not only the foal had both wings and a horn, but also a vagina and penis as well. 'It appears you make Alicorns, Twilight.' He took the foal into Lyra's living room and laid it down on her couch, with his pillow in hand. He looked down at it sleeping on the couch. 'You didn't ask to be dragged into this world.' He put the pillow over the foals face and pressed down. The foal tried to scream and cry for its mother but it had no chance. The foal eventually stopped struggling and lay silent. He lifted the pillow up and left Lyra's house, her door closing with a silent click. Jack looked at his watch, 1 a.m, he was running out of time.


Celestia teleported to Jack's house almost 2 minutes after she was alerted to Twilight's situation. Twilight was laying on his couch, with a few medical ponies tending to her wounds. Twilight was in a fetal position, silently weeping. Celestia looked down at her former student with tears in her eyes.

"Twilight." She opened her eyes and looked up at Celestia. She shook off the medical ponies and threw herself around her former mentor in a tight hug as she began to sob onto her shoulder. "We'll find him, Twilight, and make sure he pays for what he's done."

"I begged him n-not t-to Celestia! H-how am I supposed to control myself?! I've only b-been an Alic-corn for a year!" Celestia looked down at Twilight with a look of sorrow. "Don't worry Twilight. We'll find him. Your foals are safe. We're sending our best to protect them from him." She let go of Twilight and put her back in the care of the medics. She teleported to Luna's room to see her sister sitting on the edge of her bed with a look of horror plastered on her face.

"Sister! What's wrong?!"

"Jack has killed two of Twilight's foals, Celestia. He's murdered two Alicorns without a second thought. Only a monster could do this."

"Can you find him?"

"No, magic doesn't work on him. He could be anywhere at this point."


Jack had left Lyra's house and began down the road. His hands were in his pockets as he saw pegasi flocking the sky, no doubt Luna's lunar guard trying to find him. He knew that he was missing something. He just had a nagging thought in the back of his head, 'You're forgetting something vital to Twilight's humiliation, Jack.' He passed a familiar building on his way down the road. He stopped and looked over at the building, the steps, where he first went out with Violet. His heart ached looking at the steps, and knew there was only one place where Violet could be. He began to walk down the road. 2:30 a.m. He reached the house he was looking for and approached the front door. He leaned close to it and heard sobbing through the other side. He gave it five firm knocks. Shuffling could be heard from the other side and it opened up to see Jack looking at Violet's best friend, Snowy Blossom. She looked back at Violet.

"Violet, Jack's here." Violet heard this and leaped up off Snowy's couch, nearly tackling him as she began to weep on his shoulder.

"Jack! I'm so sorry! P-please give me another chance! I n-need you Jack! I'm so sorry! I'll do an-anything to have you back! Please Jack!" she continued her quite frankly loud wailing in Jack's ear. In his mind, he had already given up on this mare. But he needed to get her out of sight.

"Hey, hey, it's alright Violet." He gave her a squeeze. "Everything's gonna be alright. I'm sorry for throwing you out of the house, I overreacted." He looked up at Snowy. "Is there anyplace we can have more privacy?" She nodded and pointed towards the room behind them. "Thanks. Violet, baby, let's go in the other room and talk, alright?" She sniffled and hugged him tighter while she nodded. He half picked her up and carried her into the room and sat her down on the bed. The held their embrace for about 10 minutes, every other minute Jack would look at his watch, watching his time tick down. Eventually she began to fall asleep in his arms, as he laid her down on the bed. He saw her pregnant stomach covering her face from his position at the foot of the bed. Violet was fast asleep, with the false thinking that she and Jack were going to fix this. But deep in her mind she ached for Twilight. She was simply addicted to her cum. And Jack knew this. He put his right hand into a fist, raising it over Violet's stomach. He took deep breathes, preparing himself to take Twilight's child from her. He found himself hesitating. He still loved her. And he knew it. It hurt him to hurt her like this. She claimed she loved him still, she begged him for a second chance. He knew she couldn't keep herself away from Twilight, regardless of whether or not she had the tools that captured Violet's heart. But what if she would turn away Twilight? No. She couldn't. This is over. A single tear ran down his face as he hit Violet's stomach as hard as he could. And again. And again. Violet had woken up after the first hit, and she was screaming and crying at Jack. What she screamed and cried, Jack couldn't hear. After the 5th hit, he got up and walked, nay, sprinted out of the house, pushing past Snowy Blossom as she rushed to Violet's side. Tears were streaming down his face as he ran to the woods a few miles away. He clutched the parchments and potion in his pockets.


"Tia!" Luna's lower lip began to quiver as she looked at her sister. "Jack has taken another. Twilight has no offspring left. The chance of her having any children is now zero. We learned that Jack had also destroyed her female reproductive capabilities while he was torturing her. I'm sorry."

Celestia sat on the edge of her sisters bed with her face in her hands. She began weeping. "What did Twilight do to deserve this?! She was still trying to control her Alicorn instincts! All he h-had to do was wait another couple m-months!"
She continued for another 5 minutes. She eventually stopped and stood up, still sniffling. With a bright flash of light she was gone.

Celestia appeared in front of Twilight, still laying on Jack's couch. She put a hand on Twilight's shoulder and gently squeezed it.

"Twilight, I'm sorry. All of your foals have been killed. What with the irreparable damage to your reproductive system, you'll never have children naturally." Tears silently rolled down Twilight's face.

"Which ones were they?" Twilight sat up, hope in her eyes, knees pressed against her face.

"We're close to finding Jack, Twilight. He's taken Cup Cake's, Lyra's, and Violet's foals from you. Twilight looked up with wide eyes to Celestia.

"Windy Whistles' foal is still alive?" Celestia looked confused, then she slowly started to open her mouth in realization.

"By the gods, you're right. We're going to dispatch everypony we can to save your foal."


Jack had now run to the middle of the woods, the moon low in the sky and the colors of sunrise on the opposite horizon. He looked at his watch. 5 a.m. Now or never. He pulled out the scrolls and the potion. He swiftly downed the potion and threw the bottle away. He took out the scroll to teleport him to Windy Whistles' house. He read the spell and with a flash of light he was teleported to Windy's house. He appeared at her doorstep, his feet sinking 3 inches into the ground. Her house wasn't very large, and there were no windows, just holes in the walls of cloud. He jumped through one of the windows, finding that it led to her bathroom. He took uneasy steps into the hallway, only too see Windy holding her foal and patting its back. She froze as she locked eyes with him. She began to turn, but before she could get away, he grabbed her arm and forced her to the ground. He pinned her arms down with his legs, kneeling over her chest. He grabbed the foal from her chest and looked at it. It was blue, just like Windy, but with Twilight's hair. This foal was also an Alicorn. He grabbed the last teleportation scroll out of his pocket and read the text. He disappeared with a flash. 5:30 a.m.

The Conclusion

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Jack held Windy's child close to his body. He appeared back in the woods, the infant starting to stir and cry. He held his hands over the foal's mouth and narrowed his eyes at it. You didn't ask for this. But Twilight had it coming, one way or another. He began to tighten his grip on the foal's mouth and placed one of his hands on its throat. Its face began to turn blue and it eventually stopped struggling. Jack silently chuckled to himself, imagining Twilight's pain and anguish. He got up, leaving the foal on the ground. He heard a flash behind him.

"Jack Carver! You are under arrest by the orders of princess Celestia and Luna themselves!" Jack kept his back turned and raised his hands up, still smirking and looking out of the corner of his eye. The police quickly took their chance and handcuffed him. He saw a flash before his eyes and appeared in the court of Princess Celestia and Luna. Luna and Celestia were both sitting on their respective thrones, with narrowed eyes and scowls on their faces. Jack didn't even flinch.

"Good morning Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. How has your morning been?" He kept an innocent expression on his face. "Now I know you might be mad about Twilight and-" Jack was (unnecessarily loudly in his opinion) interrupted by Luna.

"SHUT UP PEASANT. YOU ARE BELOW THE WORST OF CRIMINALS, KILLING AND TORTURING MEMBERS OF THE ROYAL FAMILY. YOU ARE LUCKY WE DO NOT KILL YOU WHERE YOU STAND."

"Are you done princess?" Luna's pupil's shrunk to pinpricks and her eyes narrowed to a near squint, letting out something akin to a snarl. "Ever the aggressive one you are. Celestia, could you restrain your sister, I don't think you want her foaming on the carpet. Really, You would've thought that 1,000 years on the moon would teach her to not try to bite your guests." He could almost feel the heat radiating off of Luna's body, and the holes she tried to drill into his head.

"That is enough, Jack. You are being charged with the murder of four foals and the torture and/or rape of a member of the royal family. This is crime of the highest levels. What do you plead?" Jack just cocked one eyebrow and shifted his mouth to the side. "What's your proof?" Celestia stopped in her tracks. "We have multiple eyewitnesses that have seen you enter the homes of the mothers of Twilight's children. We have fingerprint evidence of you on Windy Whistle's foal."

"Well that doesn't mean anything. I found that foal in the woods while I was on my morning walk. Somebody strangled it and I was just holding it. You know I'm friends with all those poor women -er- mares. Stopping by for a nice chat is against the law now? One can only wonder why the citizens of Equestria haven't revolted against such tyrants. I would also like to know where my trial i-"

"Your crime spree goes over the heads of even the highest judges in Equestria's court system, Mr. Carver."

"You mean alleged crime spree right?"

"ENOUGH OF THIS! SISTER, ALLOW ME TO KILL THIS DEGENERATE ALREADY!"

"It seems that Kujo hasn't been taken out for a walk yet. Your owner hasn't done it in what, 1,000 years I last checked? Princess Luna, if you wanted to go outside, all you had to do was ask." Luna gripped her throne so tightly that it began to crack between her fingers.

"That is enough, Jack."

"Before your attack dog kills me, I just wanted to express a well written thought to my local politician. I propose a ban of harems for the princesses, including of your former lap dog and student, Twilight Sparkle. It seems a bit unfair that to continue your line of succession, you need 3 or 4 mares to bear you children, when you could have any mare you wanted."

"That will never happen, Jack. Twilight was expressing her right as a princess to take in a harem, to breed them, and have them bear her foals. It has been done with us, and all previous Alicorns before her. It is simply her natural instinct, but with her recent transformation, she failed to notice your marriage to Violet, and that led to the unfortunate addition of her to her harem. It was her first heat season as an Alicorn, and given time she would've seen her wrongdoing, and done everything in her power to fix the situation. But instead, you killed-"

"Allegedly killed."

"Allegedly killed her offspring, destroyed her means of reproducing, through both her female and male anatomy, as well as clipping her wings and cutting off her horn, reducing her capabilities as a princess and functioning member of society."

"Are you implying that Earth ponies aren't capable of helping society, Celestia? You might be old fashioned, but the three tribes merged thousands of years ago. Forshame." Jack was beginning to test Celestia's patience.

"She will never be able to show her face in public again, Jack. She is confined to a hospital bed, being fed through a tube and given fluids through her bloodstream. She is barely clinging on to life." Jack just smiled.

"How does this lead back to me, princess? It just seems to me like you want me to be sad about this, but I'm not really feeling anything more than satisfaction. She stole my wife from me after all, and got her addicted to the taste and smell of her dick, through the means of throatfucking her and feeding my wife her seed, saying, and I quote, "Can't have you wasting your meal, because after all my baby needs all the nourishment you can provide~", therefore, I don't give a shit what happened to her. She could be the last mare on Earth, god forbid, and me the last male, and I would still laugh at her patheticness." Luna had had enough of Jack's taunting and evasions. She leapt out of her throne at an amazing speed, too fast for her sister to catch her, her wings spreading as the began to furiously pump, making her charge at Jack that much faster. Jack had been waiting for this. As soon as Luna neared Jack, he side stepped and stuck his left arm out, catching her neck and effectively clotheslining her. He quickly knelt down and took her into a headlock, slowly bringing her up with him as he stood up.

"My my, Luna! Such a ferocious attack! But it seems that you have been blinded by your rage, and your owner hasn't properly trained you. I can remedy that quite quickly," he whispered in her ear. He wrapped his right leg over hers and dropped to the ground, her dress parting as he took a utility knife out of his left pocket. Both her arms were trapped between her back and his legs. Dread began to form on Luna's face. Jack reached down to Luna's crotch, fondling one of her heavy testicles. He then released it, letting it rest on the floor as he flipped out the blade on his knife. His right eye twitched slightly as he began to chuckle.

Jack took the blade and proceeded to stab Luna in her testicles, four times each. Luna screamed in agony. "Shh shh shh...~" Jack cooed as he covered her mouth with his right hand, "It'll only sting for a bit." He quickly switched focuses and brought the blade into Luna's stomach, roughly where her uterus would be. By now, Luna had vomited onto his hand, and she was beginning to enter into shock, her body beginning to tremble and shake, her skin becoming light, her body becoming cold. Jack released his grip on Luna, her now limp body laying against his. He promptly stood up, Luna's head hitting the floor. He had accomplished his task within a minute. Celestia looked on in horror.

"It seems your dog has now been neutered your highness, give her some antibiotics, and she'll be wagging her tail again in a week at most. Now for payment-"

Celestia had about teleported in front of Jack's face. She brought one of her hands up to his throat, and lifted him into the air, his legs faintly kicking as he rose up.

"You...monster..." Jack smiled. "You are sabotaging Equestria's government, and as such, you will be treated as a traitor to this nation, and punished as one." Her grip tightened further. Jack's vision began to darken. His plan was almost complete. He took his left leg, brought it as far back as he could, and proceeded to vertically curbstomp Celestia. Each successive hit she loosened her grip on him some more, until she eventually let him go. He fell to the ground with a thud, furiously coughing.

"You guys...never thought someone would do that? That is... totally levels of pony foresight." Celestia was on her knees, gripping her crotch tightly. Jack got up and stumbled over to her, knife in hand. He punched Celestia in the throat. She fell on her back, as Jack knelt over her body.

"Twilight has made a grave mistake, your highness! She took the love of my life and ruined her! This wasn't a Twilight problem, this is an Alicorn problem! You have done this to stallions and mares in the past, but I've been the only one to act! How does it make you feel, knowing that your bloodline will never continue, knowing that you will never have a child as long as you live? Your life's work at creating harems and having consorts, down the drain, because of a simple mistake?" Jack sunk his knife into Celestia's stomach. He removed it and quickly brought it down to her testicles. He sunk the knife into each slowly, four times. His smile widened. Celestia's face morphed into one of pure agony. "Twilight made an even worse mistake when she put her child into my wife! She has simply paid the price, as have all Alicorns now. You have crossed a line! You have fucked with a man who has nothing left to lose! Perhaps this is a lesson you can teach to all your lapdogs and pets! Your instinct has ruined my life! So I simply went with mine. Though I may die in what feels like a blink of the eye to an Alicorn, you, Luna, and Twilight, will never have a child. You will die alone, with no one to comfort you. Your existence will have been pointless on an instinctual level, as your Alicorn biology pleads you to do what you must to breed a mare. Your entire existence is not to govern nor is it to be a mother figure to your citizens, but to be a mother yourself and have a child to continue your legacy. And now you have failed, your instincts have failed, anyone who wants to get in my way of my solution to the problem has failed!"

Jack took a final stab into Celestia's penis, the blade going straight through, the tip of the blade coming out of the bottom of it. Jack rose up off of Celestia's body, leaving his blade in her penis, and stumbling over to her throne. He watched over the room with a slight grin. His work was complete. Luna's and Celestia's bodies lay on the floor, motionless, except for the subtle movements of their chest as they took ragged breaths.

Case Closed.