Sunset Shimmer returns alternate version

by riicky83

First published

What if Sunset never met Twilight? But somepony else

Twilight and her friends were staying at the castle after her evolution into an Alicorn Princess, Sunset was due to come back tonight but for a different reason.

In truth she has been returning for a while even before Twilight became a Princess.

Her reason for returning?, Princess Celestia’s adopted son Daydreamer.

Sunset’s first night back

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I barely remember my mother as I was very young when I lost her, my mother back when she was younger, was a student of Princess Celestia. They were quite close back then as I’ve been told, before my mother passed away she asked Celestia to look after me.

Since then she has taken care of me as her own son, it felt weird being addressed as Prince Daydreamer. It took some time but most of my friends no longer use my title but I still hear the guards use it, mother wasn’t strict in my upbringing so I had a fair bit of freedom growing up.

I remember one time walking around the castle I felt something drawing me towards it, it was a large beautiful mirror that had an enchanting feeling to it. I looked at the reflection and saw my birth mother stood there next to me, I looked to my side but she wasn’t there.

I must’ve been sat in front of the mirror for quite some time before my mother Celestia found me, I thought she’d scold me but she asked what I saw. When I told her about what I saw she pulled me into a hug, she ran her fingers through my hair as she kissed me on my forehead.

Since then I’ve been taking occasional looks into the mirror just to see my birth mother, as I grew older I didn’t visit the mirror as often but it appears that the reflection of my birth mother didn’t mind.

As the years went by I grew from a young colt into as my mother called a handsome stallion, I looked into my own mirror as my yellow eyes looked back at me. I ran a brush through my long silver hair which complemented my creamy coloured skin, as I brushed my hair I used my magic to brush my tail.

After I’d smarten myself up I left my room only to be greeted by a guard, he informed me that something happened but didn’t specify what happened. He simply told me to see my mother but to be careful as she seems upset, I thanked the guard as I went to find my mother.

I found her in her bedroom partially upset and partially mad, when she saw me she motioned for me to come over. She told me about her student Sunset Shimmer and what she was doing before disappearing, she never told me how she disappeared but she did say if Sunset returns then I must tell a guard or her so she could be dealt with.

It has been a few years since then as mother found a new student in Twilight Sparkle, seeing her smile from having a new student was quite enjoyable. Even after Twilight moving to Ponyville she still sends letters to mother who’ll sometimes read them with me.

I also remember getting used to Aunt Luna when Twilight and her friends saved her from her dark side, I often have fun chatting to her in the evenings as I help her change the lavenders that she hangs in the castle. True to my name I often dream away my morning making me an afternoon to an early nighttime pony, that was how I got my cutie mark as when I sleep in the morning I help others in their daydreams. During my waking hours in the afternoon, I can also jump into the daydream world, thanks to that I have a special connection to Aunt Luna.

It was now two weeks into winter as I had turned in for the night as I jumped into the shower, I barely had time to get wet as I heard alarms going off. I never heard my door close as I turned the shower off before heading into my room.

I didn’t bother to wrap myself up as I went for my dressing gown that was in my room, as I got into my room I saw a beautiful mare against my door. She had a light amber body with yellow and red hair, she saw me as her eyes locked onto my cock, judging from what my mother told me this must be Sunset.

She looked worried as she was close to being caught as the guards were virtually outside my room, she must’ve also just gone into heat as her scent hit my nose. Being in heat would slow her down and make her easier to catch, she nearly jumped when my mother’s voice could be heard.

As I got close to Sunset my cock had become fully erect making Sunset blush, she whispered to me “please don’t turn me in” she grabbed my cock. “I’ll make you feel good if you don’t tell them I’m here”, she quickly dropped to her knees as my mother called through the door.

Thankfully the door opened inwards so I could stop it from opening all the way, I peered through the gap as Sunset stayed behind the door. I felt her mouth wrap around my cock as I spoke to my mother, Mother apologised for interrupting my shower as Sunset bobbed her head as she stealthily sucked my cock. Mother explained what the commotion was about and asked if I saw anything, when I replied that I saw nothing I held back a reaction as I came into Sunset’s mouth. She swallowed my load as I said goodnight to my mother before closing the door, Sunset sat there panting from the experience.

I made sure to lock the door before I helped her to her hooves, her legs were shaking as it was clear that she was in no position to run away. I removed her jacket as I whispered into her ear "if you don't want me to tell then please remove your clothes and join me in the shower", she nodded as she started to remove her shirt as I unzipped her skirt allowing it to fall to the floor. I pulled her panties down as she removed her bra before we headed into the shower, I turned the shower back on "if you want to get out safely you'll need to take care of this". I placed my fingers on her pussy before pulling it up to her face showing the trail of her juices, her eyes widened as she saw her juices on my fingers.

We climbed into the shower as I stood close behind her as my cock pressed against her ass, my hands roamed over her breasts and down to her belly before reaching her pussy. Slowly my fingers worked its way into her pussy as she squirmed with my touch, I pumped my fingers into her pussy as I nibbled on her ear while listening to her moans. She bent over forwards making my cock slide between her cheeks like a hotdog, as much as I enjoyed her soft cheeks rubbing against my cock I wanted a little more.

I removed my fingers from her pussy as I turned her around and placed my cock against her pussy, she bit her lip as I slipped my cock into her as I felt some resistance as it went inside. "I never thought you'd be my first," she said as she wrapped her arms around my neck, I lent in and kissed her as my hands grabbed her bottom giving it a squeeze. I slowly started to move my hips as I stared into her beautiful aqua eyes, she stared back blushing as her tongue entered my mouth meeting with my tongue.

I kept my movements slow at first as I didn't want to hurt her, once she was a little more comfortable I started moving a little faster working my cock into her pussy like a piston. Thankfully the sound of the shower muffled her moans so nopony outside could hear us, I could feel my orgasm nearing as I picked up speed and judging from her reaction I could tell she was close too. She came first as she clung tightly to me while her pussy squeezed my cock, I held her close as I came firing several ropes of cum into her pussy as we slowly lowered ourselves to our knees.

I used some magic to prevent Sunset from pregnancy as she recovered, we looked at each other for a while as we stayed in each other's embrace. "Feeling better?" I asked in between breaths as my hands made their way up her spine to her shoulders, she nodded "thanks but why did you help me?" she asked. I kissed her "something tells me you ain't too bad of a pony," I said, slowly we stood up as my cock slipped out of her pussy "you don't have friends right?" I asked. When she nodded I held her close "if you want I'll be your friend after all friends look out for each other, like I did earlier" I turned off the shower before we dried ourselves.

We walked into my room where I watched her get dressed "you want to be my friend?" she asked, I nodded as I grabbed my sleepwear from my dresser. "No-pony's ever wanted to be my friend," she said as a tear formed in her eye, she was only in her underwear when I hugged her "you have one now," I said kissing her cheek. I allowed her to finish dressing as I listened to the door for any movements, "so how'd you get here?" I asked hoping to find out so we can get her out safely.

She told me about the mirror that she used to get here and that it was a portal to another world, knowing that I could get her there safely if I deactivate the alarms briefly. Once she was dressed I unlocked the door and looked outside, the halls were empty and judging by the clock my mother wouldn't stay up too late.

Sunset held my hand as we ran towards the room that had the mirror, once we were close I used my magic to deactivate the alarm as we entered the room. We stood in front of the mirror before she said "I never caught your name", I kissed her "Daydreamer and I'm guessing your Sunset Shimmer" I replied. She returned the kiss with one of her own as she walked towards the mirror, "will I see you again?" I asked as she looked back. She nodded "if I don't get caught" her hand started to go through the mirror, "you know I think your the only reason why I'll want to return," she said before stepping through.

I watched as she disappeared before turning to the presence I felt at the door, "so how long were you there mother?" I asked as my mother stepped through the door. She smiled at me "long enough" she handed me a book that had the same symbol as Sunset's cutie mark, "I knew she was in your room but I kinda had the feeling you could be what she needed" she said. "That book was what I used to contact her with" she explained, "if she has taken her one with her then maybe you two can still connect with each other", a couple of guards came in the room "could you two please move the mirror to his room?" they saluted before carefully moving the mirror. She looked at me "I'll leave Sunset to you so please help her from the lonely path she had taken", I nodded as I held the book close to me.

I bid my mother goodnight as I left with the guards for my room, we placed the mirror in my room with enough space in front of it so no-pony could hurt themselves going through it. "Thirty moons eh? maybe I can fix that" I thought as I looked at the book, "if she has the connecting book then maybe the gate isn't fully closed" I thought about how to open it for a bit. I opened the book and wrote into it "Hey Sunset it's Daydreamer here, this might surprise you but my mother knew you were in my room. Thankfully she did nothing about it, in fact, she gave me this book to contact you with and even had the mirror moved to my room. I think she's ok with you coming back and I don't think she harbours any ill feelings against you, I'm going to bed now but when I wake up I'm going to try something as I'm guessing the portal isn't fully closed. I hope to see you soon signed Daydreamer", I walked over to my bed before the book vibrated.

I opened it to find the words being written by Sunset "she did? I'm so sorry I didn't get you into trouble, did I?, truth be told I want to see you again I don't know why but I feel drawn to you. I'll wait until tomorrow to continue talking to you, maybe we can figure out how this portal works signed Sunset".

I placed the book on my bedside table as I climbed into bed, I turned out the lights as my eyes started to close for the rest of the night.

Reopening the portal to our hearts

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It was early afternoon when I woke up to the sound of the book vibrating, I opened it up “so how do you think we can open the portal outside of its normal phase?”. I wrote back “I believe our books are connected by a magical rope which the portal can’t cut off, if we can find a way to open the hole that has been made by the books then maybe we can use that to our advantage”. I looked at the mirror before looking at the book “hmm I need to boost the magic that connects the books in order to create an opening” I said as my door opened while my mother came into my room.

I noticed she had another book in her hands as she sat down on the bed next to me, she handed me the book “this was the previous book we communicated with before we ran out of pages” she said. I told her about my theory of the books preventing the portal from fully closing, she agreed with me as we discussed on how to reopen the portal.

During our discussion, she told me about her past with Sunset and everything that has transpired until she left through the mirror, “however I did notice her attitude was different with you” she said “maybe I should’ve introduced you two earlier”. She sighed as she said that “no, what has happened cannot be changed, all I can ask for now is you to take care of her and to help her”.

She stood up as she headed for my door “I’ll see you later” she said as she left, I looked at the new book she gave me as I checked its pages. True to her words the pages were full but that gave me an idea, it would still share the connection with the other books but I could use it as a source.

I spent most of my afternoon gathering various stuff and drawing diagrams before I finally came up with something, it took about another hour later until I was able to hook the full book up to a contraption that was connected to the mirror. I closed my eyes as I pulled the lever while praying for it to work, it whirred into life as a faint glow formed in the mirror similar to what I saw when Sunset left last night.

I was about to turn around to pick up the first book to write to Sunset when she came flying through the mirror, her hands grabbed onto the first thing that was near, my pants. As she fell down she pulled my pants and boxers down as I managed to keep my balance, she looked up and blushed as the first thing she saw was my cock.

She quickly pulled my pants up before I helped her up, she looked quite cute when she’s blushing I thought as I kissed her on the cheek. We walked to my bed as we sat down “how’d you know the portal was working?” I asked, she rested her head on my shoulder “I saw it glow a little so I touched it and found out it was open”.

I placed my arm around her as I held her close to me, she looked up at me “So your Celestia’s son?” She asked me. I nodded as I told her about my birth mother and how I became Celestia’s son, after that our conversation changed to what Sunset was doing now. I was surprised to hear her technically ruling a school cruelly, since last night she has tried to change but it sounds like she needs help.

I thought about that before telling her about mother’s current student Twilight, she was studying friendship so maybe at some point, she could help. I saw a smile when she heard about Twilight “So Celestia has a new student?, she sounds like a better version of me” She said. I lifted her face as I kissed her “if you want I could introduce you to her” I said, she returned the kiss “maybe another time” she said, “for now I just wanna focus on us”.

She removed her jacket and threw it on the floor before pulling her boots off, “by the way Sunset why did you offer to, well you know, last night?”. She looked at me “I guess when I came back my body changed from being a human to a unicorn and with it, my estrus cycle all hit me at once, plus with you stood there naked and the obvious desperation of the moment, well I think you know” she said. I nodded “part desperation part hormones equals last night” I said, she nodded “to be honest I couldn’t stop thinking about last night and you” she said.

She pulled her top off before unhooking her bra “may we? But this time because we want it?” She asked, I kissed her as her hands slipped into my pants before wrapping around my cock. I slid one of my hands up her legs until I reached her panties and pushed the fabric aside until my fingers slipped into her pussy, she pulled my cock out as she continued to stroke it. Her soft fingers felt wonderful as they ran along the length of my shaft, as she stroked my cock I continued to pump my fingers into her pussy as they became wet with her juices.

Using my spare hand I unzipped her skirt before I pulled my fingers out of her pussy and then pulled her skirt and panties off, I then removed my clothes before lying on the bed, Sunset crawled over to me before climbing on top of me. My hands grabbed her bottom as my magic aligned my cock against her pussy before she lowered her hips, as my cock slipped inside of her she kissed me as I felt her tongue slipping inside my mouth.

This time I let her take the lead as she started to move her hips, she broke the kiss before bouncing up and down as our hands locked with each other. Sunset moaned loudly as my cock thrusted deeply into her, her body started to glisten sexily from the sweat running down her body. Her breasts bounced with each movement as drops of sweat occasionally flew off them, her eyes were transfixed on mine as she picked up speed due to our imminent orgasms.

Her arms gave out from under her as she came allowing me to release our grip so I could hold her close to me, her pussy tightened as I came releasing my cum into her pussy. This time felt different as I fired more cum into her then last night, as we got our breathes back she casts an anti-pregnancy spell as we lied there.

We stayed there for a while in each other’s embrace as we kissed each other tenderly, “do you have to go back? Or would you like to” I started to ask. She placed a finger on my lips “for you I’ll stay” she said snuggling up to me. Holding her close I used my magic to move the covers over us before turning off the lights, she rested her head on my chest as we drifted off to sleep.

A new Sunset

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It was about early afternoon when I felt Sunset stirring as I woke up and turned to look at her aqua eyes, they stared into my yellow eyes we stared there for a bit as we kissed each other. We eventually sat up as the covers fell down exposing her breasts and barely covering her pussy, she jumped a little when she heard the knock on my door. Thankfully it was just one of the maids leaving some food by the door, I carefully opened the door and wheeled the trolley into my room. It was filled with more than what I could eat which indicated that mother must've known Sunset was staying the night, I moved the trolley towards the bed before sitting next to Sunset so we could eat.

Once we've had our fill we jumped into the shower to freshen ourselves up, it was hard not to take Sunset there and then as my hands roamed over her body as I washed her with my favourite shower gel. She must've felt the same way too as her hands moved over my body, we used our magic to wash our hair and tails as we kissed and held each other. As we kissed I held her close as I felt her soft supple body against mine as the shower slowly washed the shampoo from our hair and tails, my hands wanted to grab her breasts and her butt as my cock started to stiffen against her pussy. But I didn't want to rush her and risk pushing her away, I didn't want her to think she was just some doll to fuck and throw away. Respectfully I kept my hands on her back as we kept our kisses passionate while I used my magic to suppress my erection, "thank you" she said in between kisses as we enjoyed the rest of the shower together.

Afterwards, we dried ourselves before I watched her getting dressed, I got dressed after she was finished dressing before we spent a bit of time together before we walked over to the mirror. We shared one last kiss before we said goodbye as she walked through the mirror, a part of me wanted to follow but I decided to stay here in case she needs somepony to return to.

Since then she has made regular return visits to Equestria, normally I see her several times a week and we'd often either spend the time chatting in my room or I make sure my mother isn't around so I can take her out. We do still have some special time alone, sometimes it'll be passionate and other times it's hot and wild. I could tell she was still nervous about reuniting with my mother so it was something I'd let happen on its own in due time, with each visit I could tell that Sunset was starting to change from her old demeanour that Mother told me about. Her smile was beautiful and definitely genuine which made me happy as it suited her.

We even shared a small dance at the Grand Galloping Gala, granted we were hidden so Sunset could be comfortable
We both knew mother was aware of her being there but she did nothing to stop us from enjoying the night, Sunset did occasionally get a few glimpses of mother out of curiosity as she was still unsure of how things were between them. That changed once day.

I had gone out for a bit to get a few things to help reinforce the portal, as I got close to my room I heard a few moans coming from there. As I opened the door I was stunned at the sight, both my mother and Sunset were on my bed naked. Not only that but mother had Sunset on her lap as she lightly kissed her neck while she had two fingers knuckle deep in Sunset's pussy, she saw me as she licked Sunset's neck "just in time Daydreamer, I believe she's all warmed up for you now".

Sunset looked over to me with lust-filled eyes as my mother made her cum in front of me, I closed the door behind me before removing my clothes. My cock started to stiffen as they both looked at it, mother licked her lips "you certainly have become a big handsome stallion". I blushed when I heard her say that as I walked towards them, mother removed her fingers from Sunset's pussy and wrapped them around my cock. She stroked my cock a bit before slipping it into Sunset's pussy, she then grabbed Sunset's breasts while using her magic to stimulate Sunset's clit.

Sunset wrapped her arms around my neck as we kissed each other, I started moving my hips as Sunset wrapped her legs around my waist. Mother released Sunset for a bit as I picked her up to lay her on the bed, mother then sat on top of Sunset allowing her to eat her out. My cock got even harder as I watch Sunset lick my mother's pussy, due to her earlier stimulations Sunset came quite easily as I thrusted into her.

Mother lent forwards a little and kissed me as she pulled my cock out of Sunset's pussy, "forgive her" she said, "we've been spending quite some time making up that I think I've might've worn her out". She moved down to take my cock into her mouth, she was skilled as she ran her mouth along my shaft as her tongue trailed along the underneath. I couldn't hold back any longer as I held her head in place as I came into her mouth, her tongue stimulated my cock until her mouth was completely full before swallowing my load.

She slowly moved back a little as she sat up so she could rest Sunset's head on her lap, Sunset was breathing heavily but she was able to share a smile with her mother. Mother stroked my cock over Sunset's pussy as she told me what happened earlier, she had came into my room to share some of her letters with Twilight when she came across Sunset who'd just arrived in my room. Despite a little awkwardness at the start, they started talking to each other after a few apology's, after that they started talking until their heat cycles got to the point where it was unbearable. Mother looked at the bed "I'll have to get the maids in to clean this up" she said, as she said that I came shooting my load over Sunset's stomach and chest with some landing on mother's hand.

She licked the cum over her hand as she used her magic to pick up the cum from Sunset, she redirected the cum into her mouth and swallowed the lot. "Mm if I were a thousand years younger and you weren't my son or together with Sunset I'd definitely have you as my suitor," she said, Sunset and I both blushed before mother said, "just kidding I wouldn't want to separate you two". We shared a small giggle there as Sunset sat up to kiss me, I turned to Sunset "you might not be an Alicorn princess but you'll always be my princess".

It felt weird seeing my mother naked just as much as watching her dress, it was just as weird when she had that bit of a threesome with us but I felt like it helped a lot. Sunset and I got dressed too as they spoke with each other, mother's horn glowed "sorry I must go it seems like a new princess is being born" with that she teleported.

Sunset and I stood there for a bit before we saw a flash in the sky, we looked out of my window to see a big bright purple star surround by six other white stars in the sky over Ponyville. I looked over to Sunset as the star faded out in the distance before we kissed.

It was the next day and we were at the coronation for Princess Twilight, behind the scenes of course. Once the coronation was over I was hoping to introduce Sunset to Twilight and her friends, but for now we decided to stay here watching them. Unaware to us a shadow was lurking behind us, but that's another story for another day.