Coco's Nightmare

by Phoenix Warlord

First published

Coco Pommel has a nightmare she thinks isn't real... or is it?

Like any other night at closing, Coco prepares to close up shop at Rarity's downtown Manehatten boutique. But this night, some unexpected figures come and visit her after hours, but not for some outfits.

This story is, in a way, a spiritual successor to Self Punishment. It's not mandatory to read that story to understand this one, but it is heavily influenced from it.

Contains RAPE!, threesome, gangbang/gangrape, creampies.

Co-Authored with Prince-Nightfire93

Art belongs to TheAljavis on DA.

This Isn't Real... Is It?

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“That should be everything…” Coco Pommel says as she readies herself to exit Rarity’s Boutique in a prestigious section of downtown Manehatten. She puts on her hat and makes her way to the front door, leading to the darkening night outside as the sun sets beyond the horizon. As she heads towards the exit, she stops by and admires one of the mannequins, showing off some of the latest fashion trends for a stallion. She sighs as she looks at it. “Hmmm, if only I had a colt friend… but who’d want a shy mare like me who’s creative, passionate and works for one of the best designers in all of Manehatten? Maybe one day…”

As she walks away from the mannequins and nears the front door of the Boutique she stops and looks back over her shoulder as a faint sound echoes inside of the room she was in. She shivers softly but brushes it off as something in her head. She lowers the lights and realizes she forgot the store key to lock the door. She quickly heads back to the desk to retrieve it. At the door, she hears a few more sounds that seemed to resonate all over the room that had mannequins for stallion wear.

“H-Hello?” she asks nervous, looking around in the darkened room. Her heart rate increases now, a bit scared about what was happening. She then looks up to find the door she had opened, closed. “No! No! No!” she quickly makes it back to the door to tug on it, finding it locked. “Come on! Come on! This can’t be happening!” she struggles with the door, forgetting she had the key to the store in her bag.

Suddenly several loud banging sounds behind the terrified mare sound making her breathe even fast than before.

“Come on! Come on! Please come on!” she says horrified, tugging on the door with all her might before she lets out a yelp as something from behind grabs her and covers her mouth and overpowers her, forcing her away from the door and face first into the ground.

Suddenly she quivers as something firm and cold brushed over her pussy, rubbing slowly and then pushes into her slowly, forcing her lips to spread to accept the edge of a hoof. Coco shakes her head feverishly as she tries to resist the mysterious force overpowering her before feeling a stinging spank on her flank. The hoof slowly pulls away from her pussy and grips her tail, pulling it up, revealing her recently groped pussy and flank to the cold air of the building as a cool and smooth cock pushes slowly into her.

‘No! No! No! What’s happening! This has to be a horrible dream!’ Coco thinks to herself as she whimpers as her mouth is still covered and tears slowly fall from her eyes. As the sound of her whimper escapes from behind the hoof covering her mouth, she feels several slaps rain down on her flank causing her pussy to tighten around the cock inside her. She lets out a muffled scream into the hoof, feeling the stinging spanks on her sensitive flank, making her abused pussy tighten around the mysterious rod parting her lips.

Slowly the figure that had over powered her begins fucking her as several more shadow covered ponies begin making their way over to her, the shadows cast preventing her from seeing their faces or even if they were really ponies at all.

‘Oh Celestia no! What are they?! What do they want?!’ Coco thinks to herself as she glances out of the corners of her eye, several mannequins missing, making her heart skip a few beats, realizing what these shadow figures were…

Just before she could finish her realization, the figure who was fucking her slowly pulled out and then slammed deeply into her pussy, sending waves of unwanted pleasure through her body. Coco groans loudly into the figures hoof as she tries to suppress these unwanted feelings of pleasure in her body. She wants to ignore them, but her body is betraying her by making her produce more juices for the cock fucking her pussy. As she feels her body betray her, one of the shadow covered figures pushes the first’s hoof aside and lowered himself down so that his own cock was pointing at her muzzle. The innocent mare continues to whimper in fear as she now feels a cock enter her muzzle while the other fucks her innocent pussy, wondering if this really WAS a dream or a reality. As the one who now had his cock inside her muzzle starts thrusting, not even a single sound comes from the two who had her pinned to the floor while fucking her in turn, one thrusting deep into her while the other pulled back only for it to repeat like clockwork. The mare tries to move an inch, but is too stiff with fear to move even with them pinning her to the floor, gargling on the figure’s seemingly long cock, her gag reflex proving not to be the best. Her pussy tightens around the cock inside her love lips, sensing herself close to an unwanted orgasm.

After what seemed like an unwanted eternity the one who had pinned her and started fucking her first shoots his hot cum deep inside of her tight pussy, the seed feeling off from the normal feeling of it. Rather than feeling warm inside, it felt cold, sending a shiver down her spine.

The innocent mare groans as the seed floods her pussy, making her heart race and her mind with fear. What would happen now? Would she become pregnant with an unwanted foal? What would it look like? These were the least of her worries as she orgasms as well, the figure's orgasm sending her over the edge, letting out a muffled cry as the mannequin in her mouth fucks her mouth.

The figure who had his cock deep inside her muzzle looks down and decided to hilt deep inside her muzzle forcing her moans and groans to turn to desperate gasps for breath. Coco closes her eyes as she gags heavily on his cock, saliva drooling down her chin and onto the floor below them.

Slowly the figure who had just came inside her pulls out and a figure walks around her and takes his place, pushing his own hard cock into her pussy making her choke louder and louder as the one who had gagged her with his cock shoots his cum inside of her.

The mare continues to gag and gargle on the figure’s cock as she feels his cum travel down her throat, her mind being slowly deprived of oxygen as the next figure mounts her, using her abused and cum filled pussy. Quickly the one who had just filled her throat with his strange tasting cum pulls out and allows her to breath deeply, sucking in the needed oxygen before another pushes him out of the way and thrusts into her muzzle.

The figure fucking her pussy is quicker with their thrusting, but not as deep as the first one, making Coco moan and lightly gargle on the cock in her mouth.

As the one fucking her muzzle only thrusts just far enough to reach her throat and then pulls back as the sounds of her gagging around his cock while the one behind smacked her flank hard. Several more hard flanks rain down on Coco’s already sore flank as her pussy tightens around the figure’s cock, making him fuck her faster. As the result of her pussy being fucked faster the other figure starts fucking her muzzle faster, pushing deep into her throat, making her throat bulge around his shaft.

‘Why are they doing this to me? What did I do to them?’ Coco thinks to herself and gags on the cock in her throat, blinking as her tears slide down her face, wishing this nightmare or reality would end quickly.

Slowly the one inside her muzzle pulls back and then shoots his cum inside of her muzzle, and then quickly pulls out and then covers her muzzle with a hoof to force her to drink down his cum. The mare tries to spit it out, but is unable to from the hoof shutting her mouth tight, feeling a smack to her face. She whimpers softly and unwillingly swallows the cum in her mouth. Finally the one behind her shoots his large load of cum into her cunt and pulls out but stays on top of her to keep her pinned to the ground.

‘W-Why did they stop? A-Are they finished?’ Coco thinks to herself, feeling the figures pull out of her holes.

The one who was pinning her down uses a foreleg to sweep her rear legs as one of them lies under her before she is able to look the figure in the face, his cock sinking into her in one move.

Coco whimpers as she looks at the figure in the face, tears of fear continuing to stream down her cheeks as the figure sinks his cock back into her pussy again. As she feels the cock push into her pussy another one pushes slowly against her tailhole, having to push harder to get into her tight hole.

“No… no not there! Please! Not there!” she softly cries out as she feels the wide cock head push against her puckered hole, begging for mercy.

Without a single groan or word, the figure pushes deep into her, finally managing to sink a few inches into her tailhole ignoring her cries of pain. Coco lets out a painful groan as she endures two cocks in both of her rear holes, panting heavily as they use her petrified and vulnerable body. As the two behind her fuck her slowly, they alternate thrusting patterns so that she never got a moment's reprise as they plow into her. The innocent mare cries softly as the figures use her body for their pleasure, still praying to Celestia that this was just a horrible nightmare. She lets out a yelp as each gives her flank a firm smack. As they use her, they push deeply into her, the rings of their cocks pushing into her pussy and her tailhole adding to the pleasure between the three of them.

The mare feels a cold hoof lift her face up and look into the mannequin’s faceless form, making her heart shiver with fear. As she looks up at the mannequin, he pushes her head down a little so that she got a nice look at the hard cock that it had and thrusts forward into her muzzle, the three finally filling her holes. Coco whimpers as she feels all her holes finally being stuffed with cock, the two alternating thrusts inside her pussy and tail hole and the one fucking her mouth, making her gag every few seconds.

Slowly the one inside of her muzzle thrusts hard into her and feels her throat wrap around its cock and pushes on the back of her head with a hoof so that she couldn't pull away or breathe around his cock. The petite mare gags heavily with the thick cock inside her throat, cutting off her breathing ability. She wants to pull back, but the hoof on the back of her head forbids her from doing so. For now, she has to endure the thick member inside her mouth and her constant heavy gagging.

The three stallion mannequins thrust into her quickly, making sure that each of them got the most out of it that they could before shooting their cum deep into her three holes, the one fucking her muzzle shooting it down her throat, the two behind her shooting their cum deep inside her tight holes as the lack of air started to make her pass out.

Coco lets out a weak moan as her eyes slowly close as the pleasure from the three cumming mannequins proves too much for her body as she blacks out from the pleasure forcefully given to her.


After what seems like mere seconds later, Coco sits up in her bed and gasps heavily as she quickly starts feeling her body over with her hooves.

“What… What was that?” she pants and feels her heart race as she endured what seemed to be a vivid nightmare, a dream she thought was so real, she started to believe it was. "Th-That couldn't have been real... could it?" She asks softly as she lifts a hoof and checks her throat and doesn't even taste anything of the cum that had filled her throat.

She gets out of bed and goes to the bathroom, turning on a light and turning around in a mirror as she lifts her tail, making sure they weren’t violated. She checks her pussy and tail hole to see that they weren’t and they looked normal, giving her some relief. However that lingering fear that had filled her mind made her shudder. "M-Maybe I sh-should talk with Rarity about closing the shop together… just to be safe…” she says softly as her breathing slowly returns to normal and turns off the bathroom light and heads back to her bed, falling back asleep.

However as her head hit the pillow and her eyes started to drift shut for sleep to take her, her mind briefly put the image of the mannequins standing over her bed with their cocks hanging beneath them, ready for her to service them again.