The sparkle of my eye

by platinumnic

First published

You are in love with Twilight but will she have the same feeling for you?

It has been almost 5 years that you have been very close friend with Twilight and you want to tell her your feeling toward her, the bad news is that high school is almost over and she might plan the leave town afterward.

All main character in this story are of legal age.

This is my first ever written story, please don't judge too much.

A heartwarming confession

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"Time goes by so fast." You said to yourself, "I can't believe 5 years have already passed."

You know that the finales are coming soon and you need to study for your exams."Damn it, I don't think I will pass math or science." You nervously said,"Why did those class had to be very hard for me?"

While walking through the hallway you see Sunset Shimmer and Applejack walking together, you shouted, "Hey girls!"

"Hey Anon!" They both replied

"Whats up?" Said Sunset.

" Oh not much." While feeling a little down.

"What's wrong sugercube?" Applejack respond.

You sighted," You see, I don't think I will able to pass high school because of certain subject I don't understand very well."

Quickly, Sunset respond, ''Why don't go see twilight for help? I know she can help you pass these classes."
She puts on a smirk,"Unless you're too scare to talk to her."

You start to blush a little bit,"Why would I be scared too talk to someone I know?" While you're looking at your watch.

"Because she's a girl and we can tell you have feeling toward her" Applejack said while giggling.

instantly after hearing that, you start to blush even more. What she just said was true, you do have feeling for her and want to tell her have much you love her ever since you became friends with her.

"Fine" you said quietly,"Its true, I do have some feeling for her, but I don't think she have the same feeling toward me.Im too scared to ask her out."

Sunset seems to be upset," Anon, I have bad news"

Alerted,"What! What is it?"

"Twilight is thinking to move out from here and go out and live with her parents." she replies. "So if you're thinking to ask her out, you better do it soon, it might change her mind."

"T..Thanks for telling me this Sunset. I think I should tell her.."

Interrupted, "Don't think, you SHOULD before its too late."

"ok...ok I will. But how?"

"Do it with you're heart, what she means to you." Applejack softly said

"With my heart huh? Ok I will, thanks for the advice girls."

You slowly walk away and start stressing quite a lot. You say to yourself, "Why would she leave without telling me, we are best friends."

Realizing that you have only a week before school is actually over, you don't feel that you will succeed in telling Twilight that you love her, but you say to yourself that failing is not an option.

You decide to text her," Hey Twilight, would it be a problem if I ask for your help for the exams?"

She texted back," Not a problem Anon, I would be happy to help you. You can come over to my house on Saturday."

"Thank you, you're a lifesaver." While smiling.

"See you Saturday then ;P"

confused,"why a winky face?" You asked yourself.


Its Saturday morning, you wake up all energize, your heart is pounding of excitement because you knew today was the day you are going to see twilight.


"Calm down Anon, I'm only going to see her for work purpose" But then you just remember something,"Shoot...Its true,she going to move soon unless I do something about it."

The fact that you are naturally shy doesn't help. She is the prettiest girls you've ever met, you should feel lucky to be even be friends with her, and yet as soon as she is close too you, your heart seems to beat at 100 mph. But,no matter what it takes, you must tell her your feeling for her, you must tell her what she meant for you since you first became friends.

Suddenly, your palm start to sweat, "Is this feeling stress or excitement?'

You receive a text from Twilight," hey Anon, I hope you didn't forget to meet me at my place for your work."

You were shocked for a moment there, not expecting Twilight to text this early and responded ,

" Don't worry Twi, I'll be sure to be there on time."

"God damn it, why did I texted Twi instead of her full name? Oh man, she must be in shock after i called her that" You feel stupid after writing that text," I hope she doesn't change her because of that."

A simple text appeared on your phone

"Ok, see you soon."

Relieved," Oh thank god!" You said. It seems like calling her Twi didn't seem to matter that much as you thought it to be.


Its 5:00 pm. You grab your bag with all your stuff, you are prepared to go meet Twilight.
While locking your door, you see from a distance Rainbow Dash, "What is she doing here?"
You try to not look at here while walking toward the bus station.

"Hey Anon! Wait up!" Rainbow shouted.

"What does she wants?" You asked yourself.

She crosses the street and meet with you.

"Going to see Twilight huh?"

"Yeah. Is there a problem with that?"

"No no, I'm here to wish you good luck."

"Good luck?"

"Yeah, good luck with asking her out. I know you can do it."

" whoa, whoa! hold on. I'm not going there only for that."

"Oh I know, I'm..." She interrupted herself.

"So you ARE admitting you're going to see her other than studying" With a smirk on her face.

Feeling stupid about saying that to Rainbow makes you nervous and turning your face red.

"Fine so I am going to try and ask her out before she moves out of town. But I have a feeling that she will reject my answer and friend zone me."

Rainbow reply, "I'm sure everything will be fine. Trust me! I know her and she will not reject such a question."

*sigh*,"I hope too", You said all bummed out.

The bus arrives, you say goodbye to Rainbow and you heard her yelling good luck one last time.


Here it is, the house of the prettiest and cutest girl ever In the entire world.
You somehow feel hesitant about going near her home, frozen in place, in fear.

"Come on Anon you can do it! Its not that hard to talk to the girl of your dream,*gulp*, or maybe it is."

You knock on the door, panicking at little bit inside.
Slowly, the door open.

"Twilight you look so much prettier in person than in my mind" Said your head.

"Come in Anon, make yourself at home." She said." I hope you brought your stuff you need help with."

"Yeah, don't worry I did." All stressful sounding.

"Good! What can I help you with?"

"I seem to have problems with my math and science, I'm worried that I won't pass these test."

"Well I help you as best as I can. What are friends for." With a cute smile on her face."Let me get my stuff and lets start studying together."

She leans down trying to find her books, you take a quick glimpse at her and see her bright purple pantie under her skirt. Slowly, your genitals starts to erect.

"No, not here, not in front of her."

You quickly hide your boner before she finishes finding her books.

"Sorry for the wait" She says,"Now lets start working!"

She looks at you with those cute purple eyes,"Oh, I know where we could work!"

She grabs your hand, making you instantly blush,"Let's go in my room!", She said all exited.

As she drags you to her room, you think to yourself that she must want to be in a comfortable place to study.

"Let's lay in bed, are you coming Anon?"

"Whatever suit your comfort is fine with me." You said.

You laid in bed with her as she open her books while whistling the CHS theme song.


2 hours passed. Its already 7:30 pm as you look at your watch.

"...and that's how you solve algebra with high numbers." Finishes Twilight.

"Oh my, its already pass 7:00, I guess Twilight time is over."

"Thanks for helping me Twi, without you, i wouldn't have understand these question for the test."

Now is your chance to ask her your very special question. Somehow, you don't feel too well.

"Hey Twilight, do you mind if I use your bathroom?"

"Not at all, but hurry up, I have to tell you something important."

You enter the bathroom and rinse your head which make you feel better.

"What could she have to tell me?" Confused, then you remember that she will probably tell you that she's moving out of town.

You proceed to exit the bathroom,you walk toward the living room, she was waiting for you to talk to you.

"Anon, I know you must of heard the news from the other girls, that I'm moving away."

"I don't like where this is going.", in your head.

"But it turns out that I'm staying since my parents are quite busy at the moment."

Out of nowhere, you feel extremely relieved to hear such a news, It feels like all of your stress came out of your body, feeling completely relaxed.

"But that's just one of my news" She said.

"There more?" you said all confused.

She starts to blush and playing with her hair while trying to say her message.

"You see...I...kinda...well... I'm sorry is not that easy to say."

"If its too stressful to say it, then you don't have too."

"I...I...I've loved you since we've started to become close friends ."

You ultimately fall back in shock after hearing that.

"You...you're joking right?"

"I'm not making this up Anon, I'm telling the truth. I was afraid to tell you sooner, afraid you wouldn't feel the same way that I felt."

As your processing your mind as what just happen, you feel like your going to cry of happiness.

"Oh Twilight, I...I guess there is no point of hiding the truth myself. I wanted to tell you how much I loved you since we first became friends. I'm sorry to have kept this secret so long from you, but I want you to know that..." You got interrupted by a surprising kiss on the mouth from Twilight.

You soon follow her lead and started playing with each other tongues, you never felt something so heavenly in your life.

Both of you continued making out for at least 3 minutes. Then Twilight release her lips from yours.

"Anon, If you wouldn't mind, I want to take this relationship a bit closer than usual couple does in their first date."

"What do you mean by that Twi?"

As you said that, she starts to strip her cloths off, beginning by her shirt. She reveals her purple bra, and before she takes it off, she say,

"How about we go have our fun in my room?"

Without questioning anything, you follow Twilight to her room once more. She then proceed to remove her bra and revealing her breast to you.

"I want you to have fun with them." She asked with a cute tone.

You did exactly as she said and start to lick her hard nipples.

A moan came out of her mouth as you did that, she seems to enjoy your actions.

She takes off her glasses exposing her sparkling gorgeous eyes. She puts her hand on her pantie, she fingering herself while you suck her tits.
The moans gets louder and louder when squeezing her breast which makes your cock really hard inside your pants. You can imagine your self in heaven, hoping that this night is not a dream.

"Oh Anon, you can't tell how I dreamed of doing this with you, but how about we take it up a notch."

She crouch down to your zipper and sees your nuts getting ready to come out.

"Looks like someone wants to play" She said in excitement. She then proceed to unzip your pants and taking off your underwear, exposing your huge erected genital.

"Oh my! Its bigger than I imagine it to be."

You feel like you will enjoy this moment for the rest of your life,no, of your existence. You can't seem to not look away from her underwear. Its seems that you want to see her private part as well.

"Getting naughty are we?" Twilight said as she spotted you,"Why don't you take them off for me? I took off your boxer, Its just as fair if I let you undo my pantie for me."

You reach her waist, slowly pulling down her underpants. Your eye are widely open by seeing her pussy,all wet and trembling from excitement.
Without any hesitation, you directly went in and start to lick her pussy.

"...aaa, that feel so good, please don't stop licking my pussy."

You then told her to lie in bed and told her she can suck your cock as you lick her private part.

"Ok" She said,"If that is what it take to make you happy, I'll do it."

She then start sucking your enormous boner which all of a sudden made you overjoyed in pleasure. Now it was your turn to continue licking her clit. Both of you moan in a deep orgasm way.

Feeling your getting close to climax, you tell Twilight your gonna cum,"Its fine,I don't mind swallowing your juicy fluid in my mouth."

You finally hit your climax and came inside her mouth,"I'm sorry if that was to much for you." You said.

"Its so warm and sweet." As Twilight said. Well, it seem she's jerking on your penis to get more cum in her mouth.

"I don't think it was a good idea to swallow that much cum." You said all worried.

"Not to worry, I've seen people do this online."

Online? So that why she was having no trouble of sucking my cock, she knows what to do in a situation like this.

"I guess now its time for the main event." She then position herself in bed, spread her legs and open her pussy,"Its time for you to take my virginity, make me a woman Anon."

Seeing such a delightful sight makes you blush so much that you hesitated on Twilight request,"Are you sure you wanna do this? What if I get you pregnant? I'm not ready to be a father."

"You don't have to worry about that, I'm taking contraption pills, so its fine."

"Ok then, here I go." You then move your cock toward her pussy. Slowly putting it in,( I can't believe I'm doing this), a slight moan came out of her mouth,"Its done, I'm no longer a virgin." She said. "So am I."

You started to thrust slowly, for her to get use to it. She does not seem not mind at all of your actions.

"Deeper..... faster" moaned Twilight. ( She really is into this) You grab her legs and spread them across your abdomen and started to ram her as fast as you could like there is no tomorrow.

"Mmm...mmph...oooooh....fuck....aaah yes, fuck me, fuck me until I get your juicy warm cum inside me."

"Are you sure you want me to cum inside? Because I can feel my load is about to blow."

She seem to have hesitated before answering your question,"I know you're worried Anon but I told you its not a problem for me, I just want both of us to have as much fun as possible tonight."

(I still don't think this is a good idea,but if she wants to, than I'll do it.)

You continued to pelvic thrust her tight pussy until you would finally hit your climax stage.

"Twilight...I'm...umf... I'm about to cum!"

"Do it Anon, I want you inside me, lets be together forever!"

"I'm cumming!" You yelled.

Then it happen. You felt your load pouring inside her,(man, that feel so good cumming inside, even tough this felt wrong.) You remove your cock from her pussy and the cum slowly drip out.

"Aaaa, I can't believe you actually came inside me, but...*breath* I think I love you even more now, I want to be your girlfriend forever Anon, nobody can replace you."

"I happy you had fun Twilight, but next time we do this, I should probably use a condom just in case."

"Yeah i guess so."

She then put her pyjama on, she looks at you,"Its late Anon, how about you sleep at my house tonight?"

You look around the room and notice no other bed, "But where would I sleep, there is no other bed."

"You sleep with me silly, come in bed and wrap your arm around me."

You did as she told and went to bed with her and wrap your arms around her.

"Goodnight Twilight"

"Goodnight Anon, Tomorrow is a new day."

Both of you then fall asleep and had and stayed together ever since.