A captivating experiment

by THEJamiboi

First published

Quinten has the hots for a certain Princess of friendship and finds a book on hypnosis which teaches him how he can get her to like him back. Needless to say, he abuses it to his own ends and loves every second!

Quinten has the hots for a certain Princess of friendship and finds a book on hypnosis which teaches him how he can get her to like him back. Needless to say, he abuses it to his own ends and loves every second!

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A captivating experiment

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Quinten took a soft, slow breath through his nose, letting the air whistle back out the way it had come in, fogging up the cool mirror he was leaning against. The stallion was enjoying the refreshing cool glass on his head as he thought. Quinten finally pushed himself back upright, rubbing his face with a hoof to wipe off the drops of dew on his grey face, as well as the sleep from his blue eyes. Quinten brushed down his blond mane, which had stuck up and jutted out from being pressed to the mirror, rubbing out the last of the water from his shower. Quinten patted his mane down absentmindedly.

“Oh for… For fucks sake!” He suddenly shouted slapping a hoof against the side of the tap, before whimpering a soft ‘Ooowww’ whilst holding his hoof “I should just… Go talk to her…” Quinten looked back at himself, his blue eyes judging the grey and blond stallion before him. His horn needed filing, his wings pruning and his face looked ragged.

Quinten groaned, before turning and pushing out the room, snatching his vest up and stretching it out, the blue sparkling aura from his horn making it an odd mess of blue and pink from the fabrics colour. When Quinten passed it as acceptable his slung it over his head and pushed his hooves through.

Quinten walked slowly through his house, staring ahead as he though “Talking to her… What do you say to the Princess of Friendship? Hay Twilight do you want to hang out? Get a hayburger? See a movie? No, because you hardly know me, okay later.” Quinten made eccentric motions with his hooves as he thought, looking like a really odd mime.

Quinten made his way into his living room jumping over the back of his sofa and flopping onto his back. The stallion folded his hooves behind his head whilst staring absent mindedly at the weaving patterns of his ceiling.

The stallion tapped a back hoof on the armrest of the sofa as he thought, finally glancing over at the bookshelf. Twilight wasn’t going anywhere anytime soon, he reasoned, maybe he just needed a bit of a breather to clear his head and form a plan.

The stallion reached out with his magic and grabbed seven books at random, carrying them over to view and judge if he could be bothered to read them. The first two were novels that were tossed unceremoniously aside instantly, the third was a dictionary, but the fourth…

“Hypnosis: Foal into Master.” The cover said of a decent sized book, the front picture depicting four ponies, a mare and stallion stood back to back using a pendulum and magic to hypnotise the opposite gender to them, the victims sat down staring with glazed eyes in awe.

The remaining books tumbled to the floor as Quinten propped the book up in front of him “Chapter one: What hypnosis are you aligned with.” The followed featured a page of text with picture like instructions for various types of ponies. Quinten focused on the unicorn one first.

“Unicorns; Believing unicorns to be able to do magic the easiest is a false term and you should not think because magic is a natural part of you, that you can grasp it easier than others, this will cause you to get it wrong. However it is not impossible either, the first thing to do is to simply project a small bubble of your magic in front of you.” A picture of a smiling stallion with his white coloured magic looked back at Quinten.

Quinten looked above the book and focused, projecting a floating ball of glittering blue magic before him, the magic swirled and shifted in the air as it held itself in place. Quinten looked back down at the book as he maintained it.

“Next, you will have to find how you hypnotise your target, this varies from pony to pony. Tt can be swirls, colourful rings, and entire colour changes, anything. To find this out, focus on what you want in your mind, picture the pony before you, sitting on his or her haunches staring up at the bubbling magic in awe.”

Quinten closed his eyes, an image of the Princess of magic appeared, Twilight Sparkle. The pinkish coloured mare looked at Quinten and smiled gently like she often did when they crossed paths, her dark purple and pink highlighted mane flowing around her in perfect form. Twilight brushed her mane back and blinked.

“Hay Quint… What are you doing…? That looks…” Twilight slowly fell back onto her rump and she stared at Quinten’s horn, her eyes wide and unblinking, her pupils shrank into pinpricks before blue tinted rings pulsed over them lazily.

Quinten opened his eyes and the blob of magic’s rapid pulsing slowed, but not before Quinten noticed the rings of various shades of blue “Wow…” He mumbled sitting up. This book had his interest now, and a small drop of confidence had fallen into his stomach in the sea of nerves.



Quinten spent several hours reading the book, he was rarely ever so engrossed in a book like this. The book included tactics and tips on how to speak to your victim, it recommended distracting the target from your intentions if you didn’t tell them your intentions. Quinten made sure to properly learn that part as he didn’t want to mess up and embarrass himself… Or ruin the friendship between Twilight and himself, this was a delicate process.

Quinten stood up, dropping the book onto his sofa, he walked over to the mirror and dusted himself down, pushing his mane down as it had stuck up weirdly from his pillow “Okay… I can do this… It’s a simple plan really, just ask if I can go inside whilst lighting my horn up, closing the bubble around my horn… No time to practise but… If I can do the bubble I can do that… Unless of course I can’t in which- ARGH!” Quinten threw his hooves in the air and screamed “Let’s just give this a shot.” He muttered turning for the door.



It didn’t take Quinten that long to find Twilight’s home once he was outside, even somepony who was visiting Ponyville for the first time, after escaping Pinkie Pie’s welcoming comity, would be able to locate the giant crystal spire jutting into the sky above the small cottages. It was often the start of the tours.

Quinten made his way through the little sleepy village, glancing automatically at the various little cottages at equally spaced out intervals, the long walls of shadows looming over him from the low sun. The stallion watched a small group of mares trot briskly towards the town market, eagerly chatting and giggling as gossip was traded before goods and bits would be. The cottages began to space further and further out as the more solitary seeking, and more pocket lined, villagers demanded more space from their bothersome neighbours.

Twilight’s gleaming castle stood proud before Quinten now, the winding trail towards it empty of visiting ponies. Hopefully that meant Twilight was on her own… Assuming she was awake. She was of Canterlot origin, they had strict patterns… She would be awake. Oh, Quinten REALLY didn’t want to wake her up that would set things off on a real foul step.

Quinten stared up at the giant doors of the castle, a dragon could’ve stooped his head to enter… Perhaps one would someday. Quinten glanced up at the giant knocker on the door, gripping it in his magic he pulled t back and let it swing forward once. The sound was almost like a battering ram for a castle assault. Well… If Twilight HAD been sleeping that was a very effective wake up call. Quinten casually lifted up a small bag of snacks he’d brought, hiding his magic as carrying the goods. Quinten began to hear soft clopping, the sound of a pony walking steadily towards the door. Quinten upped the magic, this would take focus.

Quinten’s horn glowed with the softly pulsing light of hypnosis, but in the depths of his levitation magic it blended in almost perfectly, only the sharpest of ponies would notice. Quinten smiled then jumped a little as the door opened with a click.

“Oh, hello Quin.” Twilight said with a bright, alert smile “What brings you here?” Twilight asked.

“I erm… Was hoping…” Oh god, Quinten had hoped the hypnosis would work faster, but Twilight didn’t appear to have even made eye contact with it yet “I… Wanted to catch up with how you are… After all you go around Equestria at the drop of a hat, must learn so much.” Quinten said, trying to stroke Twilight’s natural learner side and dream of teaching.

The bait seemed to work “Oooh, yes it has been amazing, come in we can use the map to help tell the story!” Twilight said backing up for Quinten to move inside.

Quinten stepped up, lifting the bag over his head in a slow arch, Twilight’s eyes naturally looking towards it… And then his horn. Twilight didn’t pay the magical aura any heed at first as Quinten took the lead but now… For some reason, watching the way the magical dust trailed down from the stallion’s horn, its soft constant glow and swirling edges with the soft blue glow on the stallions head… It was all so captivating.

“Twilight?” Quinten asked as they reached the main room, a ring of chairs lined a large table with a mini model of Equestria. Quinten’s book had told him to keep his target distracted for stealthy hypnosis, if they had too long to contemplate the sensations they were experiencing closely even the slowest of ponies would figure it out. And Twilight was a sharp one. For now.

“Oh yes…? Oh right of course, the map, um… Take… Take a seat…” Twilight said, blinking rapidly as a wave of dizziness hit her.

The alicorn mare swayed suddenly as she made uneven steps towards her chair and Quinten caught her with his body “Easy… You okay, want me to help you to your chair? You look tired maybe you should sit down and try to relax.” Quinten put only a small bit of emphasis on the words as Twilight looked towards him.

Twilight’s eyes drifted up to Quinten’s horn… It was so close… So bright… The dizziness faded as Twilight watched and she felt good… Then Quinten’s words dripped into her mind like syrup from an upside down jar “Y-yeah… I should sit down…” Twilight mumbled, allowing Quinten to guide her to her chair.

Quinten led the captivated Twilight to her chair and helped her sit down, making sure she was comfortable “Are you sure you’re okay? It is still early.” Quinten asked with convincing concern, tilting his head down slightly so his horn was closer to Twilight.

Twilight nodded “Uh… Uh huh… I’m… Fine Quin…” Twilight mumbled, eyes locked onto his horn. Quinten nodded turning around and climbing onto the chair beside Twilight’s.

Quinten placed the bag down and killed his magic, for both levitation and hypnosis, as it would give it away if he was using magic for no obvious reason. Twilight was finally able to shift her focus from Quinten, believing it was due to her finally getting herself under control, she was marshalling her mind. It had to be kept in check. Quinten smiled faintly at Twilight’s satisfied smile.

Quinten cleared his throat “So Twilight, care to tell me what you’ve been up to?” He asked as his horn glowed as he lifted up a snack from the bag. Twilight’s eyes drifted to his horn instantaneously.

“W-what I’ve been… Up too?” Twilight likely didn’t even notice her stuttering or short pause in her speech, it had likely sounded crisp and professional to her “Of course… W-well…” Twilight dragged her eyes down to look at the map as she spoke “It started with the magical box the girls and I got f-from beating Terek… I’m sure you…” Twilight’s gaze returned to Quinten, she was just being polite, keeping eye contact… Her gaze was just attracted to his horn due to the magical aura, it was normal, ponies focus on bright colours nothing weird “Sure you remember that…”

“You fought him with a laser lightshow, right?” Quinten asked spinning the half eaten treat in his magic to hide what he truly intended to do with his magic.

“Y-yes… Anyway… Erm… Oh right the girls and I then returned here afterwards and found the map… T-the first… First place… Starlight… Uuhhh… Quinten… I feel dizzy…” Twilight swayed in her chair and Quinten rushed over, forgetting to stop his magic as he dropped the treat.

“Twilight you okay?” He held her head and her eyes drifted up.

“What… Using magic for…?” She mumbled.

Quinten paled and tried to hide his fear “I’m just… Doing a quick check you look sick and exhausted… Maybe you should shut your eyes.” Quinten said in a soft voice, with just a twinge of panic mixed in.

Twilight’s eyes drooped then opened “N-no… Doing something… Stop… Head fuzzy… Quinten… Hypnotising me…?” It was more a question than accusation.

Quinten gulped taking a chance “Y-yes… I’m hypnotising you… But, doesn’t it feel nice. Just watching the colours shifting and pulsing over my horn as you idly stare up at them, feeling them become your world, all else fading. Your worries, your stress… All of it being pushed away and smothered in the beautiful colours… Doesn’t it feel nice?” Quinten bit his lip in anticipation.

Twilight’s jaw hung open in awe as Quinten’s words sank into her brain “Y… Yes… Nice to watch… Your horn…” Twilight sat up in her chair, leaning her body as close as she could towards Quinten, her breath dancing on his horn.

Quinten looked up at Twilight’s gawking face. Her mouth was hanging open with the edges twitching up into an open mouth smile, her eyes wide and rarely blinking, with a soft bluish glow to them as they watched the captivating colours before them. He chuckled making his head bounce, or most noticeably to Twilight, making his horn bounce. Twilight gasped as her head bobbed following the colours with unwavering attention and devotion. Watching the bright blue sparks fizzle and shower her with their soft glow and hues.

Twilight leaned closer to the point her breath was on Quinten’s horn. She sat up, placing her hooves on Quinten’s shoulders to hold her up “Erm… Twilight what are you doing?” Quinten asked before gasping.

Quinten felt a soft and damp squishy something run up his horn slowly, moulding and pushing into the spiralling groove in his horn. Quinten’s eye twitched at the bizarre pleasure. Quinten glanced up at Twilight, feeling her hot breath on his head as her tongue curled around his horn.

“T-Twilight… P-please staaaaaahhhHHHH!” Quinten’s sentence broke as Twilight kissed his horn then took it into her mouth, spinning her tongue in circles around it as it glowed brighter and brighter.

“Twilight stop!” Quinten ordered and Twilight pulled back instantly, panting “What was that?” Quinten asked her.

“A unicorn’s horn is susceptible to pleasure… I was thanking you for showing me how wonderful this feels.” Twilight said with her dull smile “I wanted to give you just a sliver of the wonderful feelings I’m experiencing!” Twilight said.

Quinten blushed “Isn’t this a little forward for you?” Quinten asked.

“Isn’t it why you did this…? Hypnotised me, so I could see how you felt about me?” Twilight asked.

“Well yes, but I didn’t expect you to jump the gun so fast.” Quinten said then gasped as Twilight slipped down off her chair, advancing towards Quinten slowly.

“Why wait for what you want Master? Why don’t you take it now?” Twilight asked as she placed her hooves on Quinten’s chest, pushing him down onto his haunches.

Quinten gulped as Twilight leaned her body down onto his “Twilight…” Twilight glanced at his eyes with her own glowing blue eyes, lidded and suggestive “…Go on…” He mumbled blushing and Twilight grinned, Quinten letting her push him down onto the floor.

Twilight leaned up and pecked Quinten’s horn with a soft kiss the rested her waist against Quinten, wrapping both sets of legs around his body to hold him tightly. Twilight grinded against Quinten suggestively, her tail tickling his crotch. Quinten moaned and his hips twitched as his dick grew, rising up and pushing against the underside of Twilight’s vagina.

“Is Master ready?” Twilight cooed and all Quinten could do was nod.

Twilight’s horn glowed as she channelled her limited magic in her state, raising Quinten’s penis up and bracing it against her lips, Twilight rubbed slowly, teasingly, up and down, drenching Quinten’s tip in her fluid before she clamped her legs around his body and held tight, her waist connecting with Quinten and trapping his penis inside her. Quinten’s eyes rolled back and he moaned, his hips raising up and pushing Twilight back before gravity made her fall down on top of Quinten’s dick again.

Twilight panted happily as her horn glowed alongside Quinten as the pleasure activated their magic against their will. As Twilight bounced on top of Quinten, her pussy shifting and pulsing around Quinten’s penis, prepping him for a heavenly wave of pleasure, he remembered who was hypnotised. Quinten stood up onto his hind legs, holding onto Twilight with his front, and bounced her on top of him whilst grinning.

“Who’s a good little slave?” Quinten asked with a devilish grin as the soft sound of slapping echoed in the map chamber.

“I-I am! I am Master’s good little sex slave!” Twilight chanted, channelling her magic so it wormed inside her pussy.

Quinten felt his dick being tickled both by magic and Twilight’s warm vagina and he began to thrust faster as Twilight’s magic rose up towards the end of his length “Ah- You’re being naughty with that alicorn magic, huh?” Quinten said.

“Does it please you?” Twilight asked stopping for a moment.

“Yes! Don’t stop!” Quinten shouted biting his lip and Twilight’s magic encased his head.

Twilight’s magic squeezed and rubbed switching randomly in time, getting more desperate and excited “I… I’m going to cum!” Quinten moaned panting rapidly as his hot breath urged Twilight on.

“Cum in me!” Twilight moaned, locking her hold onto him as she bounced as fast as she could, her magic humming with power as Quinten was assaulted.

“B…But what if you get…” Quinten moaned as the magic attacked him. Twilight looked at Quinten with her glowing eyes smiling.

“I’ll take care of that problem, now fill me up!” She begged, the squeezing tight on Quinten’s whole shaft.

Twilight released her magic and Quinten couldn’t stand it as the walls of Twilight’s pussy rubbed him all along his length, Quinten came, moaning in delight as his eyes rolled up, Twilight’s horn shot fireworks alongside Quinten, a shower of purple and blue and a chorus of moans.

Twilight beat her wings to keep them upright as Quinten swayed, falling backwards “So good…” He moaned closing his eyes for a moment.

Twilight pulled herself off Quinten and lay down with her head on his chest, the pair breathing heavily, recovering from the ordeal “Should we go upstairs… I have books and spells on how we can do more… And I have the day cleared for myself so we won’t be interrupted.” Twilight cooed.

Quinten grinned, his horn glowing with hypnosis making Twilight’s eyes shine brighter with hypnosis “Yes that sounds wonderful Twilight, lead me to the den of fun!” Quinten ordered laughing as Twilight nodded dully and led the way. Cum dripping from her shacking flank to entice her master.

Quinten loved that book he’d found, he had to read the rest of it when he was finished!