Hollow Girl

by golden dawn

First published

Hi sooo this is what happend I went to a con buyed some thing from a creepy guy,got sant to a new world and I have a hole I my chest with a chain on it.Oh and got a little sister so not all bad.

Hi my name is Crystal Soul! I went to a con as my online character from bleach.

I bought this cool sword of Ichigo's bankai and a cute plushy of kid Nel Tu.

I took tow steps from the seller, when I saw him about to use some weird stick thing.

Now I know who the creepy guy is. The creepy guy is the one who sends people to new world's.

:pinkiehappy: I just got an idea!!

Opening Anew

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My name is Crystal soul and I’m going to comic con with my friend I am the bleach online character. I am an arrancar female wearing a white and red dress with boots. My hollow hole is in the center of my chest just above my stomach. I have a long dagger attached to my back, my hair is blue and my hollow mask is on the right side of my head.

"We are finally here! What do you want to do first." I asked Robin. Robin is my very good friend, I convinced her to come with me and she dressed up as Anime Ed from Full Metal Alchemist. Anime Ed is Robin's favorite Anime but in the female version with long blond hair and honey gold eyes. "I don’t know, I only came to look after you so you don’t manage to get into trouble again." Robin yelled. "That was one time and the only reason I got into trouble was because you told me that it was ok to get it!" I yelled.

“Crystal I said it was ok to get it if you wanted a fake, you always listen to only half of what comes out of my mouth. Next time you need listen better okay?" Robin said in a more soft tone.

I looked away, it was like this all the time between me and Robin. Robin is my best friend in the whole world. She looks out for me better than my own family does, I even call her sis and she calls me brat just for fun.

“I get it, so what do you want to do," I said as we walked by a stand with fake amulet.

"Well let’s split up since you are looking for a kid Nel Tu plushy and for a zapatou from bleach, what was it called again? Tensa Zangetsu the 2 sword vrisan of Ichigo's and I want to find my blade for my metal arm and the first one to find it called the other ok.” Robin said.

“Okie dokie Captain I’m on it.” I said while saluting like a soldier.

Robin just rolled her eye at me and walked off. I headed to the far side of the convention. There I saw this guy that gave me creepy jitters to the max , he was dressed as the merchant from resident evil 4. I was ready to walk away when I saw he had a life size plushie of Nel Tu and Tensa Zangetsu. In the back I saw the blade of Robin’s character, immediately I called Robin as fast as I could.

“Captain I have found the goods, I’m at the far end of the convention with some guy in a resident evil merchant costume, he has it I’ll get my things and wait for you here.” I said.

“Good work Crystal .said Robin, I’ll be there soon.” While I waited I saw a lot of good replicas from all kinds of cartoons, Anime, and manga item’s. There also were keyblades, pokeballs and a deck board. While I was looking through the stuff creepy guy comes close “I see we have an arrancar here but what would one want to find here?”

Oh Yeah that creepy feeling just got stronger, I just want to buy my stuff and get going as fast as I can.
"I would like to buy the Tensa Zangetsu with the life size Plushie of Nel Tu.” I said.

“Finally someone to take this girl away, now that will be $30 for the doll and $125 for the blade’s.” the merchant said.

“WHAT! That’s all? I would easily paid $300 for the blade’s alone and the plushy at least $100 just for a small one!” I yelled this guy must know that I thought.

“OH I know. said the merchant, but I need to get more stuff and they have been taking up space.” said the merchant.

I had the biggest grin on my face as I paid the man and put my new sword’s on my back and the smaller on my hip, just as I was about to leave I saw the merchant bring out a small glowing ball and he held it out toward my direction. That creepy feeling I had now turned into horrific fear, I didn’t know what was going to happen.

Out of fear of what he would do I used my dagger-sword and run at him. The look in his eyes said he did not see this coming, he shot at me with that glowing thing but not before I gave him a good cut on his hand, I saw the pain in his eyes.

That’s what you get you two faced snake! I smiled as I felt my conscious fading, the last thing I heard was Robin’s voice say my name before I blacked out.

When I started coming to I was in extreme pain, it felt like I was hit by a car and put in a crushed in a crusher.
“OHHH!!” Whatever hit me caused me so much pain and I felt something on me. I looked and saw Nul on me --- bracin was now loading.

Why is Nel here I asked myself. “How are you.” she asks with the cutest look in her eye. I couldn’t help but scoop her up and hug her.

“Oh you are just too cute, how about you be my sister from now on.” I said, as I hugged the breath out of her.
I’m so honored that an arrancar wants me as a sister said Nel but can you please let Nel go? I need to breathe. I lessened my grip to letting her go, so she could breathe in same air. I didn’t realize I was hugging so tight.

I made sure that Nel was okay before I placed her on my shoulder. I told her that my name was crystal and I was her big sister.
As I got a good look around, I noticed we were in a forest of some sort. When I went to look for my call phone I noticed the hole on my chest was not pretend anymore but real.

If the Hollow hole is real and Nel is alive then, I took out my sword Tensa Zangetsu that was on my back I looked at it and could feel power in the blade.
My thoughts were interrupted by loud screaming in distress. I began to run towards the screams and as I ran through a bush I saw a girl/pony thing. She looked like a human but had a tail and fur all over her body. She had a mazzulla, not a big one and had hooves for feet. She also had hands but what caught my attention was the big mantacorn running after her.

“So are we going to help her big sis!” Nel asked? The pony-girl ran up a tree out of reach from the monster.

I had a big smile on my face. “Look at that, you know your sister for 10 minutes and you already know her so well” I told Nel.
I yelled with fury and excitement as I raised my sword from my back and dashed forward.

(Third person view)

I’m going to die and not get to tell that stallian how much I love him. Why did I come here all alone when I knew that the everfree is the most dangerous place of all equine?

I heard a loud snap, looked down and saw the manticore was breaking the tree trunk to get to me.“Please somepony anypony help me.” said the mare.

All of a sudden her wish was granted, something hit the manticore, and this thing stood on two legs like a pony but had no tail or hoofs. This thing had no fur or ears on its head and what happened next shocked me the most, it spoke to me
In a soft voice it said “hey you okay?” I was in so much shock, all I could do was nod my head yes. Its voice was that of a female voice that appeared to be good enough for good for her.

Then I heard the manticore roar and get up and charge at this thing. I was so scared out of my mind but she was fine, In fact she looked excited and eager.

(Crystal view)

Good the girl so now it’s time for some fun. “Nel look after the girl for now, I need to deal with the big bad pussycat.” I said wall looking at the manticore. Nel got off my back and went over to the ponygirl.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lsn2tT5yTc

As if a power button was pushed, I run at the manticore,grabbed its tail and threw it against a tree. The manticore growled in pain but got up and tried to clawed me on the arm but it did nothing to me.

This was getting intersa I have hierro so my skin is now as strong as armor plates. Now I’m going to see how my powers are, I use my bala shot at the manticore, hit it and sent him flying into four tree’s and the trees all shattered like confetti.

I saw the look in its eyes, it still had pride in them so I slipped Tensa Zangetsu into it two blades form one in each hand.
“You have pride and no humility I will put some humility into you so you learn this lesson well for next time you will die.” I said as charged at the manticore again and cut him on the left front paw.

I didn’t cut it off but I drew blood, he roared in pain and backed up.
I charged again but moved faster cutting the lower half of his eye now there was blood running into his eye, this appeared to blind him.

The manticore was still not backing down but looking for some way to win. I was getting angry at how prideful these beast was that it would fight to the end.

"I don’t like that kind of belief, the belief that where you're willing to risk getting defeated again and get yourself killed not thinking of the one’s you will leave behind." I said as I looked at him.

During the fight the manticore got a shot in and hit me with his scorpion tail but the tip of it’s tail broke and fell to the ground. The manticore now no longer showed pride but fear.
I walked towards it and watched the fear in his face. I got up close to his face and grabbed him by his mane.

“Now you listen to me” I said "you think your pride is so important but it’s not, think of your family, can they live without you?"
“Now go but know that next time I will not hold back.” I let my reiatsu pressure increase making him slump a little.
I then let go and watched as he run off into the forest.

I looked back to the pony-girl and Nel and saw they had both passed out from my reiatsu pressure.

“Oh my goodness, I’m such an idiot, what am I going to do now? Let me get them somewhere safe, I picked them up and saw the pony girl had a horn on her head, with gray fur. On her hip were three purple stars on she,her fur and clothes had been torn and her face and body had wounds all over. As I looked at the pony girl she looked familiar to me.
I felt as if I had seen her before but not this young, oh well it will come to me later.
With that I put both of them under my arms and began to look for a way out of this forest.

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It was now noon and the pony/girl was still out of it as I was now at the edge of the forest as I was making camp Nel had awoke and was now next to the girl well I made a fire for the night I had Nel use her Nel Shower to heal the girl of all the cut’s she had.

“No Matter how many time’s I see you use that move it is still gross Nel.” I said as I now had to look away.

“Well Nel don’t like to do it sometime I will vomit and I lose my lunch.” Nel said as she spit on the pony/girl that healed her cut on her arm.

“I know Nel for binging a good girl I'll get you some food want some meat or fruit.” I said as I pulled out my zanpakuto and use my new speed to find small prey it took me know more than a min
to find and kill same chicken-snack thing I came back and cut,clean and state to cook it on a roaring fire.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HFlWTCTtvkw

I saw Nel’s mouth open with drool falling out she was about to fall over onto the pony/girl but instat trip on a rock.

“Ow Nel hurt her foot.” Nel said as she began to cry I put the meat high up to cook as I walked to her and pick her up into my arms pulled out my Iphone and played some music.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2VKgdNqjZCU

Nel was now not crying and was smiling at me I smiled back and kiss her oh her forehead she smiled at me and gave me a hug but then we heard the girl groaning as she got up and saw me and Nel she started to back away.

“W-who are y-you and what are you going to do to me.” she said. I just looked at her and Nel fall to the ground and started to laugh her but off.

I just rolled my eyes then cleared my throat. “Well hon i’m what is called an arrancar and this cute pig is Nel my little sis and to answer your other question i’m taking you out of the forest.” I said as I looked at her she has calmed down now and move closer to the fire.

“If what you say is the truth than I thank yo-- is that meat your going to eat meat!” she yell out now with her eye the size of dinner plates.

“Yes I’m an omnivore so I need to eat meat as well as plant in my diet why is that bad.” I asked her.

“No its just most ponies are herbivores so it is not often we see other speso eat meat.” she said.

“Ok Nel is glad she can eat both so whan is the food done.” Nel ask me I rolled my eye and looked at the food.

“Jest about done and for you miss pony/girl I found some barry’s in some barry buse so eat up and all take you home ok.” I said wall smiling so both my sister and the mare.

The mare smiled at me so I handed her the barry’s and cut some meat for me and Nel she is a messy eater I giggled at how messy she had gotten.

“You make for a good older sibling to her miss oh my I done know your name!” she said wall looking to me for help.

“Wall hon my name is Crystal and the little cute is Nel now that you now us who are you and why are you out here?” I said as I gave her a hand full of barry’s.

She told me and Nel her name is Twilight Velvet she said she came to get some material for a project but then the manticore found her,she also told me that she did have clothes on but took them off to throw off her scent.

“Ok that was not smart at all if he was following after you than you had to be hidan first befor you could lose him.” I said as I saw the gears turning in her head.

Than she facepalm and shakes her head. “Oh my I don’t know that I need to get out more.” Velvet said as she scratched the back of her head.

With that out of the way I help Velvet get home, I had told Velvet the me and Nel will live in the everfree it would have food and I can train with my new power.

“Will you came back to see me I would like a friend like you and to meet my soon to be coltfriend.” Velvet said with a huge blush on her face.

I smiled and promised to come once every three weeks, Velvet said that is ok and hope to see me soon.

I had made that promise to Velvet six year age and during it I have learn how to use bala although I did blasted my face alot and can shout it 15 time as well as ues cero that was not a good day blase a hydra that was trying to eat Nel.

I mate Velvet’s coltfriend Night Light he was about my height with blue fur and dark-blue mane he was a unicorn like Velvet was and was the captain of the guards for some princesas.

A year later it was no know surprised when Night ask Velvet to marry him and she said yes me and Nel were in the far back as Night and Velvet wedding and I shaded a few tears.

A week after the I somehow used descorrer and was in Hueco Mundo it was my new training grounds.
two months later and Velvet was now pregnant I congratulated her but what she said next surprised me and Night.

“Crystal I want you to be apart of this family will you be the godmare of my children.”

Me,Nel and Night did not see that coming at all she said it was the way I was raising Nel that she want me as a godmare to her child.

Night thought about it and he agreed that I would be a good godmare it was hard to say no I was good with kids and I did like the idea so at the end I said yes.

8 months and Velvet gave birth to a baby boy with white fur and jut-blue mane Night named him Shining armour.

After Shining was borne Nel somehow learn to become her adult form but for about one hour so I began her training with me so state in her adult form longer.

two months after the and I was now aunt Crystal as Shining said it was cute gave me a warm feeling inside me. As for Nel her training is going wall now she can stay in her adult form for a whole day.

A year after I had learned how to fly and hover I made a new zanpakuto out of the material in Hueco Mundo I named it gamuza gave it to Nel as a birthday present,the weird part is I have not seen a hollow not a one only me and Nel.

This year me and Nel have now gotten stronger and now we can use sonido,Nel has gotten more indicated and now but she stills goes to sleep with me at night,that is all I need to know that she is my little sis.

six months later and I now can use demon's curse,tiger roars and thunder boom. Nel can now go to Hueco Mundo by herself and now is on equal footing with me with the blade.

last week Velvet had ask if she could browse my Iphone, I was hectic at first but caved in when she used her puppy dog eyes on me, later Velvet came back with my Iphone but in her other hand was another Iphone, Velvet said she was able to make one with some magic materials and now
called it a Mphone don’t know but some how after she made it the pony’s at her old school mass produce them and now Velvet is now one of three richest families in canterlot.

two year and six months as fast I now can use headlong collapse and have been now living with Velvet in her new home, Shining Armor is five now and he’s such a good boy that I gave Night light a sword for Shining on his 18th birthday it as a longsword with the blade black and a blue gem in the santer.

That was the six years that we had been threw and now it was time for me and Nel to leave and make a home for are self wan I said this to Velvet she was not happy.

“WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU'RE MOVING!!” Velvet said as she was mere intense from my face.

“It’s like I said me and Nel are moving with your new M-phone now we can be intact at all times, but I need to live wild and cantrell is a civil and me and Nel need the wild the beast the battle and we can’t have that here so we're moving to the everfree forest.” Crystal said as she hide the tear that was trying to escape.

“But ante Crystal if you and ante Nel leave how will I see you and play all the fun game’s you and ante Nel play with me.” Shining said as he was crying into his mother armes.

“With come over but we need to go Nel love her Shining Armor with all Nel’s heart but we need to go with call and visat on the holidays.” Nel said as she was crying in her kid form.

“I see understand but promise to came and visit my wife and son love to see there antes ok Crystal.” Nightlight said as he confronted his son wife,I smiled and gave them a huge hug

With that me and Nel left and went to the everfree Nel is now looking for food as I build a home in a clearing it is a small home with two rooms a kitchen and a living room,out back I put up a training field.

I have now built a food stork for the food me save,Nel is the best at hunting and she never let me hear the end of it.

We train all the time and Nel is now as good with a blade as me we go and visit Velvet as many times as we can.

It has been now year and Shining is now 7, I have made a forge in the back of my home I made 12 new sword and armor with the material from Hueco Mundo and some of the bones from our hunts.

It was at this time I got a call from Velvet that her was going to have a baby I lateral dropped the phone and run with Nel under my arm and was at Velvet home wall she was still on her phone I put Nel down and grabbed her into a huge hug.

“Crystal I know you happy but I need to breathe!” Velvet said as I put her down to her hoof’s.

“I know but I love kid's it is one on the thing that make me smile all day long.” I said was I was happily humming to myself.

“Yes I know sometimes you are like a mother to Shining he has been looking forward to seeing you.” Velvet said.

After that day I came to Velvet house and help her out when Shining found out I was coming over more he ask me not to leave without taling him, I pick him up and hugged him he hug me back with his tiny arms.

8 months and Velvet is now about to go into labor Nightlight is off no a mission for the princess and can't make it so i’m going to the delivery room with Velvet and am not good with all the screaming i’m getting from all the ponies here but I need to be here for Velvet and no one is going to stop me from helping her,some guards tried to stop me from going in but stop when I gave them a death glare I had Nel look after Shining out side so I can be with Velvet in the room.

What felt like years but was more like an hour was the most painful thing Velvet was going there and with all my power I had not learned how to use the healing kido,I felt so helpless I know how to use nel shower but that didn’t help her a lot so I had to hold her hand a she squeezes my hand.

“Don’t go Crystel I need somepony here with me.” Velvet said as she was crying in pain.

“It well be ok I will be here with you all the way.” I said as I held her hand.

with one last push and a scream from Velvet the doctor halde a small baby filly in her hands she cleaned her up the baby was lavender fur and eyes with her mane and tail had dark purple with a strand of purple and light purple she was the cutest the in the room at the time,what was the killer was she had grabbed my hand and was saking on my finger,I almost died of the cuteness right there and then.

“She is beautiful Velvet what are you going to name her.” I asked Velvet as I handed her the baby.

“I think she is perfect so how about Twilight Sparkle.” Velvet said as she hugged her baby.

I smiled at the name it was so good it was the perfect fit I was going to give a respond but was interrupted by a big pony that was about two incase bigger than me standing at the door she had white fur large wings,a long horn and was wearing a silk white dress,she had a sun cutie mark and a small crow on her head.

“We need to talk outside if you well.” Said the large mare as she had many guards behind her.

There was one thing that I could say, “Oh crud.”

17 years and a pretty Princess

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It had beine 5 years since that day Velvet baby girl Twilight is now a small filly who loves me like I was was her own mother. After Celestia had ask me some questions about me and why I was there she saw no reason to hold me. But had ask me to train her guards as the new General of her kingdom. I was now looking at my squad of train Ponies in the whole kingdom only 6 had the power to use reiatsu like me after looking something up I found out the Celestia has it too so I had to force her to train in it to...hell I had to pay her ten cake recipes I had to get her to get off her big flank!

As I look at the sun rise I look at the mask taken I had made after Twilight turned 4 I remember were I had seen Velvet befor It was from I favorite t.v. show MLP I remember the fanfic of people getting sant to other Equaterra so I made my token out of a mask I had with me. The message was this.

TO THE WORLD OF THE LIVING AND GOOD PUT THE MASK ON AND CALL MY NAME GENERAL CRYSTAL SOUL, ARRANCAR FUTURE ESPADA!

I was now in Hueco Mundo getting more material for Nel to make her on backup wappen but Stopped as I sense spirit praser coming from the world of the living. I open a portal to see a bearing rainbow flying out over the sky.

I use Sonido to move as fast as I can I made it to the Velvet’s home to only come in and Shining and his marefriend doing the did. I ran out of the room and slammed the door with my face bright red.

I started to focus my consatas on Celestial Spirit parser and pin pound it to she school so I use Sonido again and found myself with Celestia next to me and a Filly Twilight jumping around us.

“So what I miss.” I said but was tackled by the small filly.

“Aunt Crystal It so good to see you, and look I got my cutie mark!” Twilight said as she show me her mark on her hand and outer theia.

“That my goddaughter.” I said as I pick her but and tickled her belly.

“S-stop hahahahaha p-please hahahaha.” Twilight said as she broke loose and started to run for me as I gave chase.

“Crystal stop messing around with my Daughter and get over here.” Velvet said as she hug me.

“It is good to see you General how have you been.” Celestia said as she was fixing the mass in the room.

“Good I was getting some thing was I felt some spirit parser from where I was than I say the sky with a rainbow fire going arkas the sky, so I came to find you and ask if you know what it going on.” I said as I look out the window to stall see the rainbow flying away.

“That would by the sonic rainboom it was do 1000 year ago but now it was only a ponies tale...Look like that will have to be fix.” Celestia said as I look at her.

“...Ok so do you now that Cadence and Shining are going at it right now.” I wiped it into Celestia’s ear.

There was a hissing sound as I look at Celestia I saw her wings pulled out and her face bright red. But I saw her taking in a lot of air in her lungs, so I grabbed Twilight,Velvet and Night and use sonido to get out of there.

We were about ten miles from the school but we still hrad the ear reping sound of Celestia scrim.

“SHINING ARMERRRRRR!” I look at the school and had one thing on my mind

“Good luck my boy you will need it.” I said as I went to the home with my family.

It now [2 years] sains that day, Shining is stall mad at me for taking Celestia on him and Cadence but I was not having them going at it and not get marrid. They do love one another but I want to have grandchildren just as mace as Celestia.

I was now building new weapons at home wall Nel was training hard outside she stall has not her full hollow form. I have not found my as wall so that soaks.

But the widars thing to happen to me was wan my Descorrer got so powerful I opened up a hole to the soul society that was not a good week.

(Last Week)

I had gone to get more materials in hueco mundo just as I got out I find myself in front of the gate of the seireitei with Jidanbo looking at me with Wide eyes.

“Holy hell you're huge!” I said out loud as I look at him.

“Thanking you...How are you?” Jidanbo ask as he looked at me.

“Names Crystal Soul Good to meet you.” I said as I put my hand out to him.

“HAHAHA it good to find one with shack good manners. Wall tham my name is Jidanbo guard of the western gate.” Jidanbo said as he shook my hand.

It was hours of taking I learned so many thing like the world of the living for bleach was here and like the year it was and how were the captains of the 13 were. It look like the Ichigo of this time is now older than 7 years old.

Wall after a me and Jidanbo had a few bows of sake and lauth the day away I gave him my tokan mask to call me if he matte with a boy with orange hair and a soul reaper uniform. After that I open a portal and came back to find Nel eating my special chocolate fudge muffin.

Nel turned around to see me as my left eye was testing.

“Oh hi sis this is--- I got nothing.” Nel said as she run out of the house.

I had one thing to say to this. “ NEEEEEEEEEEL!”

(prasant)

“Sis can I please take a break.” Nel said as I feast a new zampato.

“Ok but if you ever eat my super special muffin again you're going to train tall the cows come home.” I said with a tear rolling off my face for the lost of my muffin.

3 years latter

I was not attacking hollows in Hueco Mundo. Ever since me and Nel found are full hollow forms hollows have been sian all around Hueco Mundo. Me and Nel have been taking out thouth that have zero to no intelligence but we have found some that are young like Nel and hell I even found some arrancars around so with me and Nel’s help I made the Las Noches. I had to leave someone in garg so I put Nel on the job with her power’s now so can hardly her on.

I want to Celestia and had a world with her about the hollows that were showing up around the world.

“Celestia I think we need to put up more space guard to fight the Hollow’s.” I said as I look at the training ground of the guards.

“From the news I have been getting of die around the world some form ponies that saw nothing wall other are saying the saw a monster with a bone mask on it face...I would have to agree with you on this...All have some ponies came to you for training.” Celestia said to me as I was going to say something I was told to the ground by a small purple bluer.

“Aunt Crystal it you!” yell out a Twilight as she was hugging me.

I smiled and hug her back. :My little star how are you have you been good to my friend Celestia.” I said as I put Twilight down.

“Yes and look was I can do.” Twilight said as she made a round ball of light in her hAND!!!! Oh GOOD GOD NO SHE HAS SPIRIT PRASER!!!=0

“.....Celestia how long has Twilight been ably to do that.?” I said as I look at Twilight with a big smile on her face.

“About 2 or 3 day why?” Celestia ask as she look at me to see fear in my eyes.

“I will have to train her Celestia and any that can do what she can Celestia I told you that Hollow eat any that have spirit praser.” I said as I look at Celestia to see the light go off in her head and a look of horror was now on her face.

“O-Ok all have all the ponies that can see hollow and with spirit parser to came here and train with you.” Celestia said as she look at Twilight as she made her ball bigger.

“You to Celestia I can sense a power in you that can help your ponies to came to me wan it awakes.” I said as I look at Twilight.

(2 years later)

I was now in the training room with Twilight and her brother Shining armor it look like they have absorbed some of my powers from me being around them won they were young.

Twilight as a hand for kido as for Shining his is all with the sword so I have put Twilight into the new Kido squad that have little to no use of the sword and Shining is has a squad that as half good with kido but mostly use the sword.

I now have 4 squad that help out support,Kido,front lines and resarte. The arrancars that Nel has help are now are helping stop all the hastal feral hollow.

I was no in my office looking over paperwork and found something that was ever strang it look like some hollows were seen looking to the moon and were hallooing to it all have to look this up soon.

(Celestia’s pov)

I was looking over the now squads that Crystal has made. Twilight stall lock herself in the library all the time but is can see she is perfect host of the element of magic all I need to do is have her make some friend and it will help free my sister.

“Your so lucky to have your sister Crystal.” I said to myself as I look at the moon.

“Wall if i’m so lucky i would not have to go out and find points to defend us but sat is life.” A voice all too familiar said from behind me.

“Wall hello Crystal how are you.” I ask as I look to see her leaning on the door.

“I had something I need to ask you it that is all right.” Crystal said as she walk over to the bed and laid down.

“Yes what is it?” I ask her as I made my way over to her.

“What is on the moon?” Crystal ask as I froze in midstep.

“W-why do you ask.” I said as fear came into my heart.

“I have reparo of Hollow’s all doing one thing incoming the have been howling to the moon.” Crystal said as she look to the sky.

I side as I order the guard to leave. “ What I’m going to tell you stats back a thousand years ago.” I said as I told my tell about me and my sister how I was loved by all and how she grow to resist me and the ponies for not looking at her lovely night. How her resist grow tall it was to make and she trand into the pony now know as Nightmare Moon, how I had to use the element hoping to stop her and change her back but all they did was but her into her on moon.

“I see now so the is why all the hollow’s are holding to the moon.” Crystal said as she look to the moon.

“Yes most likely I how with Twilight will find make friends to help her and the thousand of the sun chalabrasin she will break free.” I said as I look to Crystal with a look of fear in her eyes.

“Celestia I-I think your sister is right now a Demi-Hollow if I’m right we need to have everything right for that day!” Crystal yelled out as grand a scroll and started to write thing down no it.

I look at the scroll Crystal had the plan she had was crazy hell it was like putting a mice agas a manticore but I have seen what Crystal can do….Ok I have came to an conclusion.

“Ok I don’t want to loss my sister let go with you plan.” I said as I look to Crystal as she has a big smilly.

(5 years later)

I was in my room in the office looking over my 13 new sqand that are now around all major cities. I now have Nel as my second in command for all thing going on in Los Notas we have now over 100 arrancars and 1000 hollow that are no more than children.

As I look over my new powers that have come to me hell I even made some Hōgyoku with the material from hueco mundo most just power up my Kido or stamany in my body.

I was about to leave wan my door to my office opened to see Twilight running in with a cold sweet.

“General Crystal I have news that invest the safety of the world!” Twilight said as she saluted me.

“Areas Lieutenant Twilight but like I said call me Aunt were family.” I said with a smile on my face.

“S-sorry Aunt it just after all that training me and thought under you have come to respect you.” Twilight said as she scrat the back of her head.

“It ok Twilight but what is it, I know you came here to tall me something.” I said as I put all my paperwork away.

Twilight nodded her head and told me all the thing she has said to Celestia about Nightmare Moon and the prophase and how Celestia said to get out more and make some friends.

I nodded my head as I listened to her I know she need help but not how she thick.

“Ok here is what I will do first I want you to do what Tia said for you to do, next I will go and look up some thing so for now do what you are told ok.” I said as I smiled at Twilight.

She was not canvas but know me enough to now I would do it she run up to me and hug me.

After Twilight left I want to see Tia and have a world with her. I made to her room and knock.

“Come in it opened.” I heard the voice of Tia, I opened the door and saw her look out from the balcony.

“Tia you know it time I need you to go to Los Notas with Nel and but half you power over the sun into my Zanpakutō.” I said as I pulled out my sword from my back.

“Yes I know the only way to save my sister is to have me not here...But I were that something will go wrong.” Tia said as tear fall from her face.

I smiled and hug her than I opened the port as we fall in. I look around us to see all the arrancars and hollows around us all bowed to me.

“Mistras Crystal it is good to see you.” said one of the hollow kid’s.

I look down to see a hollow that look like nel in her child form.

“It is good to see you Skill Burner but I have no time now can you get the captains of the guards to came here please.” I said as the little hollow smiled and run off the get them.

As I waited I saw many of my family all around me I know some hollow are evil but all thouth here are good and help one there. Thank goodness that I made one rule here we will only eat evil hollow or souls that are evil to help make us more powerful.

I look up to see my two Captains of the guards Hall Storm with her hollow mask of a salamander and Cold Flame with a mask of a ice phoenix.

“Mistras Crystal it is good to see you how may we serve you.” Said Hall Storm as she bow to me as Cold Flame salute me.

“I have a mission that I need to do but I need you two and some of you man to protect my friend her Tia, is that understood.”I said as I look at the Two.

“We will protect her with our lives Mistras.” Cold Flame said as he look at Tia and I could see the blush on his face I was going to say something but when I look at Tia she had a blush as wall.

Oh hell look at that look like I get been made mate maker. I look to Tia and had her put her power into my sword. I opened the port back to the world of the living and with the power I got from Tia I started to put the sun down and raise up the moon.

But one the moon was up I heard this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Td6CIHfMVLQ

I look out of town to see hundreds if not thousand of Hollows all marding to the Town.

“Well it alway a good day to fight.” I said as a big smile formed on my face. I pulled out Tensa Zangetsu’s.

(Twilight pov)

It was not good Nightmare Moon is back I need to find the element of harmony thank to the girls I now know that I need to good to the everfree forest thank goodness that I trained with Crystal to protect myself.

Just as me and the girls got the eager of the forest were heard roering not ordinary roaring hollow roering.

“What the hay was that!” Rainbow Dash said as she fly over us.

I look to the girls all having scared look on her face. But than I heard music familiar music I know all to wall.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1lsn2tT5yTc&index=1&list=PLgQt67NlnbatfpadRpSAhLZKnUK0VeRpQ

I look up to see Aunt Crystal with her wings out and flying past us over a hill. I look at the girls and nodded we run over the hill to find a house of hollow’s marting out of the everfree forest and battling with Aunt Crystal.

“Holy hay look at all the baddes out there!” Pinkie said as her eyes widen at seeing them. But we all stop wan we heard roars of pain I look out into the houard and find Aunt Crystal in the middle of all the hollow’s cut or blasting them with her kido. I look to see an huge opening where Crystal is.

I-Is She opening a path for us to go throw is that why she is in the middle of all thought hollow so we can get throw.

I look to the girls all scored for all the hollow and most likely Aunt Crystal but now is not the time.

“Come on girls we have to go and stop Nightmare.” I said as I stated to make my way to the forest.

“Twi’s right y'all we have to go now wall we have the chance let move out.” Applejack said as we run into the forest I look back to see Aunt Crystal taking out hundreds of them at once with that I made my way to the girls.

(Crystal pov)

What the hell I know I’m good but with so many hollows how will I help the girls out.
I jump out of the way of a hollow that almost bitte me as I but the head off of two more I can kill as many as I want but I need to help the girls ho--- OH I’M SO BUCKING DUME I HAVE MY PHONE ON ME I CAN CALL MY SQUAD THAT IS STAINED IN CANTERLOT TO COME.

I put one of my sword back and pull out my phone to call Shining Armor. As it ringed out I blast a large group of hollow with Thunder Boom annihilating them.

“Hallow Is that you Aunt Crystal!” Shining said.

“Yes Shining I need you to deploy all of Squad 11 here at ponyville at one it is a level 10 emergency.” I said as I cut a hollow that was heading to the town.

“What level 10 oh hell all Squad 11 prepare for battle we leave now.” I heard Shining say to somepony than the line cut out.

I now have two hundred hollow around me the allsteadt to pour their energy into one of the bigger hollow mouth to shout me with a death beam, I smiled and let them shout me the shot at me and I opened my mouth to absorb the energy and than I held it than blasted it back at them destroying another hundred of them. Just as more of them came I hear roars of pain I look to see Shining Armor with half of squad 11 attacking hollow.

“Sorry we're late General Crystal we had to have most of squad 11 fly the ones with strong magic teleported all the earth ponies with us Unicorn.” Shining Armor said as he cut down a level 5 hollow.

“Good I leave this to you Shining Armor how all squad members team of 4 back to back.” I said to Shining Armor as I use my Demon’s curse on all the hollow around it made all the hollow that got hit roar in pain those that don’t get destroyed slowed down with the curse making their healing power now cut in half my squad had a better case.

I use my sonido to run all the way to the castle of the two royal sisters and see my little Twilight and her friends about to end Nightmare Moon but just as shout a blast out two level 7 hallows came out in front of Nightmare Moon as stoped the blast.

“HAHAHAHA look like victory sale by my as I end you little walps.” Nightmare Moon said as she charged her horn to shoot the girls but is was not having that.

(Twilight pov)

NO! of all the time a hollow had to came it had to by now me and the girls are too weak from the first blast. I look up to see Nightmare Moon horn lighting up.

“Girls we have to get up and blast her again.” I said as I look at the girls only to see that tham baearly ably to move.

I look back to see Nightmare blasting a magic beam at us. No mom,dad,brother, Aunt Crystal, princess Celestia I’m sorry. I close my eyes and waited for my doom seconds turned to minutes and still nothing so I opened my eye to see a somepony in front of me I look open my eyes wide to see my Aunt/Godmother over me eating the magic beam.

“What trakere is this how are you!” Nightmare yelled out as she was look at Aunt Crystal.

“You put the world in darkness,attack the defaults and hurt my GodDAUGHTER and you ask me how I am...I am GENERAL CRYSTAL SOUL AND YOUR GOING DOWN DARK SIDE!” Aunt Crystal yelled out as she disappeared only to reappear behind Nightmare Moon and blast her with the magic she eat a moment ago.[Stop music]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sMuIWxdSrr4

“Twilight what is that thing...If you don’t mind that is.” ask Fluttershy as We saw Crystal pull out her sword’s as Nightmare pulled out a large sword and shield.

“Ya what up with that thing and why does it have a hole in it chast and what with the skill on her head.” Pinkie Pie ask as Crystal swords clashed with Nightmare Large sword and pust Crystal back with the Shield, But now the battle was getting heat as Nightmare made magic sword flouting in her magic as she attack. I look at Aunt Crystal to she blood coming from her arm and she was now no the defensive position. Magic bear and kido blase fuld the air as the two stade to do damage to one another I saw lager cut on Nightmare’s wing and her blood coming from a cut in the upper corner of her eye, Wall Crystal was now going all out she had her mask over her face as blood was seen one her left hand and one of her wing was in no better shape than Nightmare’s. I saw them chard at each other or disappear only to came back with even worse.

“Tack this Getsuga Slash!” Crystal yell out as both of her sword light up one While the other Black sparte energy came out of the sword and cut throw Nightmare's shield sanding her harling into the castle wall, blood flow out of Nightmare’s arm it just hanged there not moving.

I look around to see the girls were back up and for another round. I look back to she Nightmare blasting Crystal sanding her horling to the floor but just as fast as she hit the ground she shout back out and blaser her with Deman’s curse both attack hit and the shock wave launch both of the far away.

Just as I was going to tell the girls Crystal called out to me as she dodge multiple magic beams.

“Twilight I need you to use your kido to hold her down all add my power to it to have more effect so do it now!” Crystal said as she put one sword back and through her hand at me as I powered up my Kido.

“Soul of the king grant me the power I need to hold my enemies magic seal: full body bind.” I said as I magic and Spirit energy pulled together and blaster a binding spell on Nightmare, she stopped flying and was now on the ground trying to move.

“Now girls form up and let blaster her.” I said as I felt my binding spell being taking over, I look but to see Aunt Crystal putting out huge amount of energy into my spell.

(Crystal pov)

I was now putting all my hollow energy with my spirit energy that was now holding Nightmare in an iron grip.

I than see I rainbow light blooming form the girls. Than it shot out of the girls and came down on Nightmare Moon, she screamed out as the blast hit but with little of what I huard Nightmare say was. “You're not getting rid of me Luna I will come back and make you mine!!” Nightmare said as her body turned into a mask over a smaller body the mask broke off and revealed a….DOME CELESTIA YOUR SIS IS HOT!!! My mind yelled out as I look at her. As the rainbow light ended she fall to the floor with the girls so I open a portal to get Celestia here I told her that I had to go see the hollow probably at the town but to come after her little talk with shr sister.

Celestia agreed as I run back to Squad 11 to see most of the hollows running into portals back to hueco mundo. I look to see that Shining Armor holding a new sword and had a...HOLLOW MASK ON!

“The hell happened here Shining!” I said as I look around most of the Squad 11 was now here some with major wounds but nothing life threatening.

“Oh do to see-.” That was as far as Shining said as the mask on his face vanest in a black mist and Shining fell down I grabbed him to find that he was out cold.

“Wall this will be interesting.” I said as I pick up Shining and went to the inn.