Red's Adventures

by HeavensRaptor

First published

Red, a common pony is given a rare opportunity. It is the start of his new life and adventures, come see where it takes him.

Red, a starving commoner from Mapan, under the rule of Emperor Night Lock, is given a once in a life-time opportunity by Lord Black Tail. What will happen from such an arrangement? A Lord taking in a commoner is very frowned upon, what will this lead to for Black Tail, what will it entail for Red?

(( I like being as surprised as my readers when I write these... so this shall be interesting. ))

Chapter 1 - Beginnings

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Chapter 1 - Beginnings

Red sat on the side of the street in the poor district of Westmane, the capital of Mapan. His appearance was similar to many of the other poverty stricken ponies that were begging for food and money. He kept himself alert as possible on the cobbled roadway; the scent of dust and sizzling foods filled his nostrils from down the street. Drool slowly crept its way from his lips at the tantalizing smells from the sweet fragrance of orange chicken and veggie egg rolls as they wafted on the downwind. That was how hungry he was, the smell of flesh cooking was delicious, surprising since he was an herbivore, well, that’s what he thinks at least. His body seemed to be telling him otherwise with each breath of the cooking flesh. As he was lost in his daydreaming of mowing down a large fish he was snapped from his lucid thoughts by a painful belly ache as it grumbled, informing him of what he already knew. He was hungry.

His belly ached painfully as it grumbled audibly, with one look at him you could tell he was malnourished, ribs visible through the skin as well as his hips and thigh bones showing on his hind-quarters. If some dared to look closer they would see his mangy dull black mane with split ends thinning and its lost luster of those of higher class. A visible dreariness clung to his entire being as clumps of fur were bundled up at the skin. His tail hairs falling out and sharing the same fate as his mane in it’s lackluster black. His coat a dull crimson instead of it’s glorious statement of blood, blood of his Earth-Pony lineage, which seemed to be a lie he was becoming painfully aware of. For if one were to give the time to look into the face of this pitiful looking pony they would see one traitorous statement over him, golden sun-fire-orange slitted eyes that tainted his being, betraying his pure lineage.

As he sat calling out to ponies with a weak voice to those who clearly had enough to survive and then some, he would ponder his situation. Pffsh look at all those fancy pants. They get to have three meals a day, money to spare on anything they desire and you'd think they'd have the kindness to help those less fortunate. No, instead they'd rather blame us for our outcome... I may only be nine but I sure know that it's not my fault the laws are so messed up! Let alone if you try to leave the city without proper paper stuff you could end up killed... pffsh, or worse.. in the dungeons. After all, everyone is an enemy who wishes to leave to another city or kingdom. At that moment Red's thoughts were broken as some noble seemed to be talking to him. It didn't even register with him until he was poked with a hoof to drop him of his trance like stupor that he hadn't realized he entered.

"Did you hear me?" Stated the well-aged stallion with a bit of annoyance tinged in his voice.
Red looked up at this pony and realized... He... he looks so cool! Red's thoughts blanked and his eyes widened as he took in the stallions' stature. His mane flowed like a white river down his left side out of his eyes and behind his ear, his coat a beautiful shaded tan, fit for royalty. His eyes a glorious and bright sea blue, like gems hidden amongst the dirt-path. His height easily being twice the size of a normal pony and a broad body with no speck of fat, just lean muscle. His tail seemed to glimmer as it flowed in the wind, a glorious black like that of an eternal night sky. Prying his eyes away Red took notice of the stallions hooves, a beautiful black sheen covered them, not even a speck of dirt on this earth pony's hooves. All of the attentions to his appearance made Red think immediately that this pony was a noble, even without attire they were typically easy to spot. Well-groomed and healthier looking than any other being in this run-downed lot they call a city. To Red, this place felt like a birdcage and he was one of the many birds.

Remembering himself a bit and the situation at hoof, Red chose not to speak forth right, he knew better than to speak to the nobles and passersby that traveled these stone ways in an equal tone. So he adopted a servant attitude, one he had developed over the last three years through observation. "I beg your pardon my Liege, how may I help you?" Red stated in a weak higher pitched tone as he averted his gaze down at the ground. He couldn't help but chuckle in his mind at his ironic statement. Hahaha, yeah, help you... right, like you need help from a starving commoner like me.

The stallion inhaled calmly as he looked down at the prostrated pony before him and replied in a gentle and flowing stern voice. "What is thy name, Colt?"

Red took a moment to register what was said, it wasn't every day that a noble looked at a commoner let alone talked to one. His reply was a bit shaky and meek sounding. "R-red, m-my Liege."

"Red, ye' say?" The stallion responded flatly.

"Ye-yes." Red's shakiness was now visible over his body, he had not realized how scared and weak he was to actually be talking, let alone to 'A Noble' that actually asked his name. With his thoughts on overdrive a single thought crossed his mind. Wait, how do I know he is a Noble? He has not stated so, or overturned it yet... but he does look and sound the part... maybe best I just keep assuming, maybe it'll get me a good meal or coin. Red thought enthusiastically as he moistened his lips with a lick. The sizzling food still lingered.

Red glanced up from his humiliating stance to quickly survey the stallion and his surroundings. Just as he did, three metal armored ponies came approaching the possible Noble.

"My Lord..." One of the armor decorated stallions stated as Red's eyes quickly fell back towards the ground, his view filled with cobblestone and hooves once more as his thoughts moved about. Well that confirms his nobility in my view, no-pony that is armored goes up and calls any pony his lord... wait, what!? His eyes widend and his ears splayed outwards at the realization of the word, lord. Lord is not just a Noble, that is one of THE nobles... oh crap. Just breathe, just breathe, don't do anything to anger him Red... and you might live? Came his slightly fear invoked thoughts.

The new pony did a quick salute as he continued his conversation, his voice sounding trained and informative. "There is a summons for you, from Lord Iron Mind, he sent this parchment for your eyes only and you were to receive it immediately, my Liege." He extended his hoof with said parchment towards his Lord, his head slightly bowed.

The stallion inhaled and exhaled audibly, sounding his frustration with this new information, a tic that you would pick up on if you knew him well enough. As he took the sealed parchment he stated to the Guard like pony. "Thank thee for thou haste in delivering this unto me, Swift Leg." He then turned his attention back to the visibly shaken and famished colt before him. "Red, thou shall, as of this day of our Emperor Night Lock, year 45 (795 A.E.), shall be in service to thee, Lord Black Tail. Now, rise and follow me, I have much to do today." He stated in an authoritative manner, one that lead no room for questioning.

Red sat with his jaw agape, realizing the gravity of the words that were spoke to him, his mind tearing itself to pieces saying he was an idiot, that it was only a dream and that he would wake back up to the nightmare of his life as a passed out pony begging for food and coin. As well as stealing what he would need to survive the coming day, yet never getting enough.

When Lord Black Tail realized the pony was still wasting time staring ahead with his mouth gaping, he turned and headed over to his pony-drawn carriage. He glanced back at Red after he settled himself inside the lavish carriage. It was an open body, easy to get in and out of with room for four ponies. A pearl white paint coated it; a light blue covered the trim around the entire edge. On the back was the Lord's family house seal, engraved and colored in a glossy black. The wheel spokes were an alternating of pearl white and gold, the wheels themselves were a solid black metal ring. The carriages overall height was around five feet.

After Red realized he was not in a dream and that this was indeed happening. He slipped out of his emotional shock that he had not realized he entered. Noticing this only after Lord Black Tail sat himself and looked at him. With a mystical pull he had already begun moving towards the carriage. His legs shook and trembled as he approached the lavishly decorated carriage. To Red though, it was an extravagant work of art; one he never thought he'd ever be allowed to come close to. With unsteady steps and hunger chewing at him he made his way to his newly given proprietor and savior. When he reached the carriage he realized how small he was in comparison to it all, only standing at three feet tall says a lot. He considered this mentally for a moment as he looked up into the carriage as he attempted to make the two-and-half foot step into it. Needless to say, Red found himself short on even getting his hoof up, his legs feeling too weak to support his light weight to mount it. Granted he was not about to let this opportunity give way by asking for more help than what was being graciously offered. As well as the fear of this all being lie still trickling in the back of his mind.

Black Tail continued to watch the struggling colt he'd learned to know as Red. Each movement was painfully slow and time consuming, but this did not really bother Black Tail, after-all he had no one but the Emperor to truly answer to. Ponies would gladly wait around for hours to have an audience with him. Years of combat had taught him not to rush things when you have the time to think... which is exactly what he had today, time.

Red, hmm... no last name was given. So, suppose it is safe to suspect no last name at all... maybe once he is stronger and begins training I can test him to see if he is worthy of my name. I know many will dislike it since his eyes bear the mark of Lord Slyther. He was a great and powerful pony, indeed, great in power yet horrifying with it. His thoughts were interrupted as he noticed Red's fore-hooves make contact with the carriage floor, attempting to hoist himself up. Determination is something thou are going to need a lot of, Red. This is a fight for life, one I have seen many a times. Heh, your struggles will make thee stronger, as will I. Although, I don't want you passing out just yet... hmm, is Swift Leg still around? With a practice ease Black Tail shifted his head just ever so slightly to give Swift Leg a glance.

Swift Leg noticed his Lord's gaze fall upon him, without word he moved to assist the struggling colt into the carriage. With one hefty fore-leg he shoved the colt up into the carriage. Swift couldn't help but notice how light this colt was. It made him cringe to think how easy he could break him and how thankful he was that he'd never been as unfortunate as those in the slums.

Landing safely on his belly, Red hazard a weary glance towards his Lord and then stumbled to his legs and sat across from him. Averting his gaze from his new hopeful savior and employer; he couldn’t help but have some fears. With such Red’s heart was starting throb in his ears as he hoped that this was not some sick twisted joke by a noble. He'd heard of them doing things like this and witnessed it only once. They would promise a place of stay and food in return for duties performed. Some would get the 'victim' to their carriage, then as they went to climb in they'd kick them down off and laugh it off as they rode off, cursing and spatting on them at times. Others, as he had seen, would get the 'victim' to their establishment and then call the guards to remove the 'vermin' from their property. Needless to say, the Guards were never gentle with trespassers. With no real alternative though, Red had come to the thought that he would have to take the chance with this or die of hunger eventually, probably within the week. With that thought and his fear evident he continued to play his role as a lesser, with only speaking when spoken to, or asked to. If this was real he did not wish to screw it up.

After a couple of blocks went by the slums and stores gave way to good standing citizens in the market district; Lord Black Tail decided to start the conversation to learn more about Red. Adopting an inquisitive yet fatherly tone as he spoke. "Red, tell thee about thy family life and how thee survived day-to-day within these walls." He spoke as he subtly gestured to the surrounding area.

The words were slow to Red as he had to give them thought; he had not realized how long it had been since he had a family nor a decent meal. "My mother, Dew Mane, passed away during childbirth of me... my brother Swallow Step and my sister Pura Mane raised me until I was eight years old. They... they died, my brother shortly after my eighth birthday. He was executed for assaulting a Guard... and my sister died eleven months after that, before my ninth birthday from childbirth... uhm... I know not of my father, my Lord." Red looked up and side to side in a slight panic, his ears twitching and flattening during his explanation. This told the older stallion how much these things scarred his mind. The nervous tics were evident to Black Tail and he made a mental note that family may be a touchy subject, yet a strong one.

"So, tell me how old thou are and how thou survived day-to-day." Black Tail stated coolly.

Swallowing the lump that had formed in his mouth and lack of saliva to assist, Red carried on. "We-well my Lord, I..." Red looked around, knowing that if he confessed how he survived he could very well ruin his chances. Especially about being a thief of the night, granted the last year had been rather difficult for him.

Black Tail noticed the lie Red was about to make and wanted to eradicate that mentality immediately before it became a harder habit to break. With his voice stern and quick it easily caught the young Colt's attention. "I would choose thou's words truthfully young one. I am not so young to be fooled nor am I so old to be easily forgiving. Know this; there are two things that anger me in this world. One is dishonesty, I would rather a pony be truthful with me and themselves. Tell me the truth to my face rather than make it a farce. Two, gambling... anyone who can waste riches on chance deserves to lose all chance of riches. Nothing ever good comes of the two... do I make myself clear?"

Red's knot came back in his throat as his eyes widened and just nodded, realizing he was caught before he even put forth a sentence. "Y-ye-yes, my lord... Well... U-Uhm, after my sister died I ended up begging most of the time... at least by late evening when the nobles would cross into the market district. By night I would... uhm...” A slight nervous tension entered his voice again as he spoke. “I would steal what I needed from ponies or eat from the garbage." Red spoke and looked away in shame of admitting his short-comings and way of life.

Lord Black Tail sat stoically, observing Red's slightest movements and pondering all that was spoke to him. Looking directly at the young colt Black Tail’s voice flowed forth. “And where did thee sleep, surely thou had a place thy called home.” His eyes focused on the youngster as he awaited his reaction to a simple word, home. He had to make sure the child was not too far gone in his mental stability; although he was impressed with the child’s linguistic skills. The thought of him being schooled slightly had not slipped past the wise stallion.

With eyes of pain that could be spotted by a fool, Red let out a breath of air shakily before speaking. “I - - don’t have a home. Not that I never did… I just… don’t now. It, it was raided by the guards last year and they said a lot of things about some law. Just that I couldn’t live there or really anywhere… so I was forced to sleep in the open or in areas with cover. The good spots tended to be crowded and overall not safe.” With a deep exhale Red could feel a small bit of weight lifted from him as he had brought forth his courage to speak on a simple yet emotional subject.

Nodding to himself and closing his eyes Black Tail spoke again. “Doth’ thee know how to read and write?”

Red sat for a moment as he looked up at the Noble with a bit of curiosity and intrigue showing on his face. “I… know a little bit. My brother and sister helped me. They knew all this stuff from our mother… and they would say that she would have wanted me to know how to...” The threat of tears began to emerge from Red as he spoke. His words choked off by his own emotions of remembering his brother and sister.

Noting the emotions brewing in Red, Black Tail pushed the question forth. “Tell me Red, how did thy sister die? Thou said birthing… so there was a pony she was with?”

Red’s emotional state came and went just like a candle being snuffed in the dark, it was lit and now out. “Yes, she died during childbirth.” Was the simple and suddenly cold emotion from the colt’s eyes, a clear and deep seeded hatred could be seen by the war veteran.

Black Tail was no slouch when it came to observations of others, years of politics had helped hone his keen sense of physical and physiological features. That sense was telling him that Red was holding something back about the subject. With ease he could clearly see the young colt had already set forth who he felt his enemies were. “So, thou brother was executed for assaulting a guard, why did he assault the guard?” He felt a change of questions may lead him to an answer, although he was already formulating the answer in his mind.

He waited for an answer from the colt, but silence was all that greeted him. The answer that he felt was correct was starting to feel more as truth. Though he possibly knew the answer, he did not want to leave it to chance. If he could not get the answer from the colt who needed it more than him, then he knew of another way to get the answer… and it was not very nice.

Drawing a breath in as he readied himself to speak a lie, one that he knew was essential to spur the youngster’s fiery spirit out. “Thous brother was executed for assaulting a guard, he deserved his punishment if he had no reason.” The words were hollow; he felt no truth leave him. Granted, the colt with his emotional state and hunger would not be able to see that.

Just like fishing the colt’s anger and feelings sparked forth without thought.

“HE DID NOT! HE WAS JUST PROTECTING US! TAKE IT BACK!” Shouted the young colt, his eyes were filled with anger and something more as he stood facing the accuser.

Black Tail could feel the emotions brewing from the child. Is that blood-lust I feel; thought Black Tail. A smile crept its way onto the Noble’s face. “Yes, he did. He was a fool to fight for something so simple and stupid; to protect thee? That is what the guard is for.” Holding his head high he awaited for the young colt to make his move. Thinking with an eager giddiness the stallion realized how he could use this. This was the first test of this colt’s moral grounds. Would this Red stand his grounds even against someone who would feed him? Show me your character, young Red… SHOW ME YOUR STRENGTH! Black Tail’s thoughts concluded as he heard the colt’s reply with a low yet peeved tone.

“Stop, the cart.”

“What was that?” Stated the haughty looking Noble with some dissatisfaction seeping forth.

“I SAID STOP THE CART!” Screamed the colt, who’s energy reserves were obviously being depleted.

“Ha! Ordering me around? You think I will feed—“ Red chose this moment to cut off the Noble.

“I don’t need your kindness or your lies! My brother protected us and I don’t care about your stupid offer! I’d rather die than have my brother dishonored by the likes of YOU!” Red’s word had carried more wisdom with them than a commoner and this had only solidified Black Tails suspicions of what occurred. Although, before Black Tail could respond he noticed the colt getting ready to leap from the carriage. With an ease, that was no surprise to his guard’s, Black Tail grabbed the young colt and faced him. The colt attempted to struggle free of the grip but his attempts were feeble at best.

“Whoa, hold on there young Red.” A smile crept on to the stallion face as he seen how irate the colt was. The first words to leave his mouth were pure and simple and filled with truth from his soul. “I’m sorry.” His eyes held a bit of moisture and softness as the colt peered into his soul.

“I apologize for getting thou riled up like that, Red. I had to see who thee are, thou brother’s death, do not make it be in vain and come with me.” The hopeful smile held its place on the Noble’s face while gazing into the colt.

With confusion and anger still evident on his face Red managed to see that Black Tail was indeed being truthful. There was just something in his eyes that told him he could trust what he was saying. With a sigh and his body relaxing he gave a weak nod.

Black Tail had hoped he found a treasure amongst the rocks, although now he felt he found ‘the’ treasure. This colt held so many similar characteristics to himself. To his surprise the young colt’s eyes flipped back as he fell limp in the stallion’s hold. Chuckling lightly to himself he positioned the colt next to him. He could not get over how light the child was right now… but the bone structure signified that he would grow larger and become very strong. As long as someone helped nurture and guide him he would grow very strong.

As he stroke the colt's mane Black Tail gave the order to return home after he stopped off and grabbed some bread and preserved meats. When the child woke he would be hungry after all and they had a few days to get home to his village.

Chapter 2 - Social Standing

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Awakening to the sensation of the bumps along the pathway Red had found himself laying next to the Noble who had picked him up earlier. He quickly noted that a blanket had been placed over him and that the combined heat from the stallion and covers were welcoming. He'd gone without covers of any sort since the guards raided his original resting spot. That was not the only thing he noticed though. Within hooves reach he noticed something that was dried looking, yet delicious to his nose. With a cautious hoof he reached out and gently brought it to his mouth. Feeling as if he were being stealthy he commenced the action of chewing on it. His molars and small fangs tingled as he chewed on the unknown item, a piece of dried meat.

Black Tail kept a watchful eye as he noticed the colt attempting to be sneaky in gathering food. Knowing full well that the colt would seek food immediately after waking. Instincts running high on hunger as they were, he had placed it within easy reach of the youngster. A small smile had seemed to plastered itself on the older stallions face. Food was what the child seeked as his hoof took it's prize, though he had thought the child would take the bread first. It mattered little as he had been filled with nothing but contempt and joy as the colt laid next to him. The journey had barely begun and he had a good feeling about the trials ahead for the both of them. With taking the action he did, if he were to care for this child even as a servant he would receive large quantities of disapproval from his fellow nobles. Maybe even within his own battalion and servants. Treading carefully and laying the law down would have to be done quickly and he knew just the ponies to help him.

Taking a glance, Black Tail observed Swift Leg as he trotted along side the carriage with the other three free guards, two on each side. With two guards dedicated to pulling the carriage. The road ahead was not well traveled, a thing that Black Tail did not mind. It just made carriage travels a bit more difficult, he had thought of just walking but his troops did not let that happen. You could say he was ambushed from his original plan and he did not wish to insult their choices. After-all, they were just looking after their Lord's safety.

"Swift, hop in here and tell me what thou think about what we discussed earlier." Black Tail inquired as he felt the colt next to him cease his chewing and slight mewing of approval over the food. Black Tail's thoughts struck out as an even larger smile grace his features. He probably didn't even realize he was making any noises, hahaha.

Swift quickly leaped into the carriage and took his place off to the right of his lord, facing him. Taking a moment he observed his commander and the child he had brought with them. "I must say my liege, it tis not my place to comment. Tis your own choosing, you are my Lord; which ever you feel is correct I will support." His statement was firm and he showed no sign of betrayal to his words.

"Yes, I know I can trust thee... otherwise thou would not be my army's captain. What I wish to know is what thee think about the child, personally." Black Tail addressed without any worry of any of the soldiers over-hearing. "I wish you to speak your mind on the matter of his heritage and what you view."

Taking a moment Swift Leg churned some thoughts about, mainly problems he may foresee with his lords choice of accepting a Slyther decedent. "It's not a matter of my view Sir, I fear for the opposition you shall face from this choice." He brought his gaze from Black Tail to the child that rest beside his liege. "I fully understand why you wish to do so and in truth I can not complain as..." A moment passed as he took a breath to ready his voice. The words he were about to speak were seen as taboo amongst the Tail House, his gaze shifted to his Lord's. "Since the passing of your wife I can understand why you would choose him from an appearance stand point. Mainly I fear that you shall receive much shunning in courts and lose many a favor for taking non-blood as your family." The words did not leave easily from Swift and his gaze never left his lord's.

Black Tail was the first to break the staring lock as he looked to the passing country side. Rice fields and bamboo forests littering the hillsides as they traveled. Taking a deep breath and allowing his smile to stay tuned he replied, calmly. "Yes, I see. Thou is correct, I more than likely chose him because of his blood and appearance. Though helping those in need have been my families core value and I shall not let some haughty fellow lord or noble think he is less." A deep breath as he returned his stare to his Captain who had not ceased gazing at him with interest. "Tell me Swift, is family only by blood?"

With a smile Swift closed his eyes and shook his head as he chuckled. "I know that better than anyone my liege. In truth..." Staring back at Black Tail with a smile. "I am just enjoying seeing you smile again my Lord. Even this much."

With their words complete the journey continued, Swift went to get out of the carriage but was stopped by Black Tail. The company of a friend was more important to him than his unneeded guarding. The colt had managed to successfully snag the bread without either of them noticing, as well as the water sitting at Black Tails hind legs. Both began laughing as they heard the colt choking on the water.

"Sure we shouldn't call him Stealth Leg?" Laughed Swift Leg.

Laughter, it has been so long. Thought Black Tail.

"Let us make camp at the clearing ahead." Tail's positive energy seemed to be infecting his fellow soldiers as they gave him their acknowledgements, their smiles and alertness showing fully.


With the sun cresting on the mountain side the group of ponies gathered themselves and were preparing to finish the last leg of their journey home. When out from the brush and trees a group of masked and wood armored ponies surrounded them. Their spears facing their targets. They had managed to get the drop on the veteran group of soldiers.

"Leave your belongings and no harm will come to ya'!" Shouted one of the masked bandits.

The guarding soldiers of course did not relinquish their weapons or belongings. They would never do so by a commoner's request, the only being they listened to was their Lord, Black Tail. Which had just exited his tent to the sweltering number of bandits around them. His eye quickly counted and noted almost every single detail of his would-be attackers. They encompass us all, I'm sure my guard might of failed to notice the archers in the trees. There is a chance that this is a village that is on hard times with taxes. Or, the fact we didn't notice them could mean they are a rogue band of warriors. A sigh left him as he hated that some Lords chose to tax their villages to the breaking point as well as not pay for their protection. Looking around he seen his soldiers had already taken up position with their swords drawn and eager to hear his words. To slaughter or not to slaughter, their thoughts were only based on protecting him.

"I am the leader of this company, if it is gold you wish to have then here." Black Tail reached into his tent and pulled out a sack and threw it on the ground between his guards and bandits. Which one of them eagerly picked up the sack. "I am not here to fight, nor have I brought a lot of wealth with me. Though I think that should be satisfactory for safe passage." He left no opposition in his reply.

A bunch of grumbling occurred from behind the group of bandits, surely they were not pleased to see the sack filled with a lousy fifty silver coin.

"This is all you have!? I don't believe it, no noble travels with guards and only has fifty silver!" The stallion that was bellowing came forth, facing the blades of the victims guards. Clearly not afraid of being injured or taken hostage, why would he? He has the upper hoof and they all seem to be tactically trained. This is not their first show. Thought Black Tail.

Point his hoof at Black Tail the Bandit Leader made his demands. "You! Step aside from the tent, we shall see if you lie to us. If you have, we shall run you through!" His declaration clearly made his troops look a bit troubled.

Black Tail looked the bandit directly in the eye. "There is only one other treasure in this tent, though if you attempt to take it in any form... I will have no problem collecting your head and skinning you to use as my doormat." His eyes had narrowed and the essence of blood lust filled the air. With that he stepped away from the tent to allow the bandit access.

Walking firmly with purpose the Bandit Leader opened the tent and peered in from the safe distance of outside. Inside rested a snoring pony who had not stirred since the small commotion. No other objects seemed to lay within the structure. Clenching his jaw shut he looked back to Black Tail. The idea of taking him as hostage and having the family pay for ransom had crossed his mind but that would require a lot more work. Sighing he stepped back from the tent and gestured to his fellow bandits. With tensions being as they were he really did not want to risk losing one of his fellow cohorts. The Bandit Leader seemed to take a moment to collect his thoughts and situation. He said soldiers, not guard... and his demeanor is passive at the moment even though just a second ago it felt like he would kill me and everyone... Take it and run I suppose? Easy money is better than hard money. Huffing a little bit he retorted.

"Fifty silver is fine enough." Taking a moment he eyed the noble's guard. "Take your soldiers and kid and get outta' here." Turning his back to Black Tail he walked away. "Alright everyone, lets get outta' here. They got nothing worth while!"

Black Tail sighed after the bandits had retreated, he was not looking to having to fight their numbers. He was also glad that they were not looking for a fight, just easy prey one could say. Taking notice of what had been taken and not he couldn't help but realize the smart move the pony just did. He even left the carriage, smart pony.

With the excitement done for the morning Black Tail and his guards all set forth to continue their journey. Tents all packed, food store away and one sleeping colt who was oblivious to everything in the world.

"That colt has some real nerves, can sleep through a loud bandit and not even stir once?" A hearty chuckle left his throat.

"That he be, though I fear what may come when he does stir in the future..." Black Tail's vision seemed to drift off to the future prospect of his adopted son.

Small banter filled the camp as they finalized their setup and moved out. None of them caring about the eyes and ears that still lurked on their every movement.

The bending road way up the mountain soon gave way to a flat piece of land with a stone wall surrounding a medium sized village, looking to become a city soon. At the very top was their destination, the castle of Black Tail's family. Approaching the village they came to a wooden gate with a dozen visible guards.

"Hail, it's Lord Black Tail, open the gates!" Shouted Swift Leg as they made their approach. The pathway was wide, around fifteen feet across which allowed for average cart movements in either direction. Its road along a steep decline to the base of the mountain, turn cliff as they neared the gate.

With the approaching carriage the gate opened inward revealing it to be a set of double doors. The twelve foot walls were a splendid scene of defense, their thick base tapering upward fortified their position on the mountain side.

Cheers of welcome rang-out as Black Tail's carriage made it's way to his fortress like home. It rested up high, giving a great view of the city below and an advantage for any invasion into his home or beloved city. Smiling and waving back he ascended to his station, making sure the colt stayed covered from view.


"Oh, he is just filthy my liege! FILTHY! It's like he didn't even try to clean himself! His hair is knotted, heck we've had to cut away a lot of it just so it can grow back properly... I mean, if you want some-pony that is presentable you're going to have to wait a while." Rambled the Housekeeper as she looked on the new charge with exhaustion. She was just happy the frail thing didn't try stopping any of them when they were pulling and snipping hair off him.

"I mean, let alone, look at them ribs, you can see them! Even the wolves would pass him by, mistaking him for a stick! No meat, no fat, huh, what are you planning to do with him? Have him serve as fire-wood!?" The mare laughed rudely as she watched the colt being tended to by many of the maids, working tediously on his pelt. Although for Black Tail was use to his Housekeeper, she had been with his family since she was a filly and he pretty much associated her as such.

Expressions of momentary pain speared across the colts face as his fur was pulled tight and then fell slack from the shears shearing close to his skin. In all, as time went on and he ended up with bald spots where he had been tangled, tail and mane included. He couldn't help but feel happy from all the ponies and attention he was getting. It had been so long since he'd seen a friendly face, yet, here there were dozens it seemed.

"Well, for now just help him get back his strength and be groomed. I know thou can do this... as for his role. He is claimed as my own and shall be treated as such." Black Tail spoke as he watched his future heir be groomed. The atrophy would take a while to be alleviated but with Mayden watching over him he would be fine.

Mayden looked at her Lord with surprised blue eyes; her cream tan coat having a gentle sheen as her black mane and tail swayed in the motion as she came to face Lord Black Tail. "...are you serious?" Was her small reply, with which Black Tail only nodded once to her. Mouth slightly agape as she realized some difficult times may be ahead for her. "Is he?"

"No. He tis not my flesh and blood but I hope he shall be at least in spirit."

With her Lord's words she composed herself properly and looked back. "Very well, I shall ensure he is taught properly." Her tone leaving no room for an argument as it was sharp and crisp. One final thought filled her mind as she excused herself to her charge. Now I know why he was smiling...