Fluttershy's obediance school.

by pinkameany

First published

When scootaloo is mistaken for a chicken will she survive the deadly obediance training?

Ever wonder why every animal fluttershy has always obeys her as if they were being controlled? Well jump in and learn the horrors of the sweet yellow ponies obediance training course.

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"It all happened so fast one moment I was riding my scooter, and the next thing I know I am living like this!"

"I am getting too far ahead of myself let me tell you how I ended up this way."

It was a happy sunshine day in ponyville I had just got done swimming in the lake with my friends Applebloom and Sweetybelle.

On my way home to do some studying on my next school test, when I noticed Fluttershy with a rather large crate.

I could hear sounds coming from inside,but I didn't want to get nosy so I just kept on walking home...

Later that night I was trying to get some sleep,but I couldn't get those noises out of my head coming from that crate I just had to see what was in there.

All of my dark costumes were dirty, and had to be washed,and the only one in the closet was the chicken outfit auntie Pan had gotten me last year for Christmas. Sure it was warm,but it wasn't my style oh well.

I put on the chicken outfit so if I get caught by Fluttershy I may blend in with the chickens,and everything would appear normal... right?

I opened my window, climbed down the tree,and hopped on my scooter. Good thing there's no curfew in ponyville I thought to myself.

After about 10 minutes I arrived at Fluttershy's cottage. I could hear animals sleeping,owls singing there midnight songs awwww it was so peaceful... I thought

"Time to investigate" I climbed over into the chicken fence quietly as to not wake anybody. As I explored I lost track of time it must've been about 1:30 am now.

I saw all of Fluttershy's house lights off so I quietly opened her window,and snuck in... This was actually quite fun and a detective cutie mark wouldn't be too bad either!

I found myself in the living room when I got in angel was lying in a bed of grass Fluttershy made for him. So I had to tiptoe around.

Finally I exclaimed in joy as I located my primary target... the crate. I could hear rustling inside sounds of ear piercing screeches it really hurt my ears as I got closer.

It took me a few to recuperate,but I got a hold of myself,and with that I opened the crate.

What I saw inside I just couldn't believe it. Chickens with there feet tied together some had died do to suffocation,but chickens weren't the only thing in there.

Bats,turkeys,chickens,puppies,cats,and loads of more animals all tied with ropes struggling to get free from the grasp of the ropes.

I almost fainted, I didn't realize how loud it all was until I noticed I had woken up Fluttershy.

"Shit" , said Fluttershy these damn animals are so loud why did I even bring them in.

Still tired Fluttershy grabbed up the animals that got out and Scootaloo along with them tied them all up together,and said now tomorrow you have to be at your best or else!

Fluttershy put me in the box with the animals.

I couldn't believe what was happening,and what did she mean by "tomorrow we have to be at our best?"

It was late I couldn't do anything I thought mayb tomorrow she would notice who I am and release me so I tried to go to sleep these animals almost kept me up all night I fell asleep around 3 am.

I felt a great pain on my side as I woke up we were being thrown out of the crate with force by Fluttershy.

"I want all of you animals to follow me NOW!", said Fluttershy

Not wanting any trouble I did what she asked I noticed she was angry, and being in the chicken suit didn't help my appearance. Chickens don't talk so what am I to do.

Fluttershy rounded us all up in a group and said SIT!

I did hoping to be "at my best" for this more stern Fluttershy. I was scared of what she might do.

I noticed 3 animals did not sit on command. So Fluttershy rounded the 3 up into a pen... What I saw next was the most terrifying thing I ever seen.Fluttershy left for a minute and came back with a bamboo stick and a gas tank.

Flutterhy walked over to the first animal that did not sit on command it was a helpless little kitty.

Fluttershy said,"ok you don't want to obey then you will be punished." She raised the bamboo and brought it done with suck force on the kitties back leg I could hear the snap of it tiny bone under the pressure.

Fluttershy proceeded to beat it's leg until she got bored with it.She then picked up the cat gave it a hug,flew into the sky and threw it with force straight to the ground.

I looked away I didn't want to see it smacked the ground,but when I thought it was over I looked back and SMACK!

When the cat hit the ground it flattened as blood gushed from its leg if ran over by a truck I could see the bone popping out of its thigh,but it was still alive Fluttershy knew what she was doing she wanted the cat to live.

Fluttershy then kicked the cat back into line with the rest of us. I was crying uncontrollably,but didn't want FS to notice so I kept my voice low.

The next animal was a chicken.

She walked over to the chicken and without restraint... Shoved the bamboo stick into the chickens rectum and twisted and pushed until it came through the other end.

Blood and guts hung off the bamboo stick I knew the chicken had to be dead,but to my surprise it was alive it was breathing.

FS picked up the stick with the chicken on it and turned to the 3rd animal a puppy.

"Out of all the animals I would have expected you to sit you mutt!" , said Fluttershy

She took the gas tank and stuck the hose into the dogs ear... Draining every last drop of gas into his head.

As the last few drops went into the dog she pulled out her lighter.

Standing at a cautious distance she threw the lighter at the dog.

The first thing I saw happen was his head explode while his body was on fire... At least it was quick for him.

FS took the still alive chicken and began to turn cook it over the dogs carcass.

After about 10 minutes she fed us.. All of her pets even me.I was eating what I just watched be destroyed.

I saw what she would do to disobedient creatures. So I was stuck there forever

Always to obey or one day end up like the 2 pets or like the cat that to this day is still alive dragging itself coughing up bloody hairballs.

That happened about 7 years ago I got my cutie mark withing that time. It is not a picture,but words that says obedient chicken.

That's what I am now just a slave forced to obey FS rules. I've made new friends.I had to... Talking to chickens isn't as fun as my old friends,but I am used to it now.

Rarity got a huge promotion and is working in manehatten now and Applejack moved to be with her family so the CMC is no more.

That is how I came to be this day I hope someone saves me one day,but for now I.... wait I gotta go Fluttershy says it's time for me to be fed... hmmm wonder if were having chicken tonight.