Fear.

by PonyPlay

First published

A heavily wounded and bloody colt is taken in by the gentle and loving Fluttershy. But suffering from years of running from monsters, and living on his own in the wild, can she curb the intense fear that is pent up inside him, or will he be consumed by his nightmares?

Please don't be afraid to comment. I can take criticism. Suggestions are always nice too :)
Before i start writing chapter 3, im doing a complete and utter overhaul of editing on chapters 1 and 2 (If youd like to help just ask plze :) ) It might take a while too.