Broken Elements: Reforged!

by NJH12


s[P]ike Version: Center of a star.

Spike was in space...

"How cool is this!" I said not caring if anypony was listening. "Right, now where is that forge?" I asked nopony in particular. As I used my fire breath to get to the sun, but it was difficult to propel me in the direction I wanted to. I must do this, I need to be perseverance. I thought. Celestia's spell worked realy well, as my eyes were not burning, instead it was wellcomeing me in. I inter the sun, I found a small solid rock-like object in the middle of the sun. That was when I dropped my half of the magic element into the inferno of the sun. Then light-shadows creachers show up and was attempting to destroying the Sun's forge. I could not let them destroyed the forge, so I attacked them with no ideas to defeat them. I tried burning them but they grew bigger, my claws went right though them and I was running out of ideas. My next idea was to talk to them, "Hey I'm Spike, what is yours?"

"Spike, help us." they all sickly said together sounding like my friends in one creepy voice.

"How can I help you?" I asked but not really sure I want the answer to that question.

"Spike, turn off the brightness." they all said sickly and creepy.

"You want me to turn off the sun?" I asked.

"Spike, we like to hug you forever with us." they said, slowly getting closer to me.

"Uh, No thank you." I said as I backed away from them but comming towards the forge until I was on the edge of the forge's hole. Then the creachers smushed down into a goo-like object and leaped towards me as I barly dodged the goo. The goo and me fell into the forge. I came out looking kind of the same but a little bit darker colors and the magic element gem fused on my writing claw. But my voice was less childlike, and a bit on the dark side. We said, "We are Meltalik! And we are comming for you, princess of the sun!"

at the castle...

"... But I must go and meet another." Celestia said. Then we arrived, shocking the princess of the sun. "Ah! What are you doing here? I thought you were gone Nightmare but it seems that it is more like Nightdrake. Could I speak to Spike?"

"Why should we? The Princess of the night ditch us when the Elements took us away towards the sun. We were almost died if it was not for this drake. By the way, we are Meltalik! And we will not leave! Ah! Hurry Celestia I can not hold it for long. Help me! Ah! Sorry about that outburst but we like this one, he has much potential." We said.

"I can not seperate you yet Spike, but know that you are not welcome here but you must pretend to be Spike otherwise Twilight Sparkle will notice..." Celestia said before she was interrupted by none other than Princess Twilight Sparkle.

"Notice what? Spike why is your scales are darker?" Princess Twilight Sparkle asked.

"Mother! I got sun burned. I should of got sunscreen today." We said.

"Mother? You have not called me that in years! What is wrong?" Princess Twilight Sparkle asked.

"Excuse me but I must be there for another." Princess Celestia interrupted the conversation.

To be continued in Pinky Pie's version...