Ponyville Police Department

by Omega6047


28. Heated Up

--Chapter 28--
Heated Up

Revan felt as sweat runs down from his forehead as he was trying to keep himself in check. He was kneeling down on the floor with closed eyes and hands on his knees, making steady and calm breaths to fight back against the effects of Twilight’s surprise sandwich. The mare herself wasn’t helping him at all. She was constantly rubbing herself against him as she circled around him and whispered things into his ears.

The fact that Viagra wasn’t the only surprise the sandwich held also didn’t help. Viagra on its own wouldn’t do much unless he was turned on, and that’s where Twilight’s skill in alchemy came to play.

He heard her giggle when his breath got a bit ragged, she then started started to nibble his ear after she wrapped her hooves around him. “You know you can always just give up, right?” She licked his neck. “Just think about it. You won’t have to keep yourself down, I’ll win our little game… everyone gains something…”

For a second Revan considered the offer, but quickly decided to turn it down. After all, he wasn’t going to let her take the win after just one trick. No matter how much he wanted to. For some people (probably most) a trick like that would be quite an overkill, but not for Revan. In his mind it was more like Twilight saying that she won’t go down easily. And since she has just set a bar this high, he can now bring the heavy cannons against her…

“Oh, you’re no fun.” She said after his silence told her everything she needed to know. She let him go and stepped in front of him, brushing her tail against his face. Revan opened his eyes for just a second, and that was his mistake. He quickly closed them, but the damage was already done. The image of Twilight looking back at him with her tail raised up and legs slightly spread was already burned into his memory. “Remember that you can always wake me up if you change your mind…” Her voice became surprisingly sultry. Twilight then jumped back to the bed and went to sleep.

Revan meanwhile was at the edge of his will power. God fucking damn it… must… think… about… unsexy things… It took him a while to clear his mind enough to be able to think past Twilight’s cute little butt. Come on, think! What are the most unsexy things that could possibly exist? I know! A fat feminazi land-whale with bushes under her armpits and short blue hair buttfucking Donald Tusk with thirty centimeters long black dick while me and Twilight are sitting on a bed in the next room making out and- Holy shit, shut the fuck up you fucking piece of meat!!!

By then Revan already knew that this was going to be a long night…


It took him an hour to finally be able to get up on his legs. He turned his head towards Twilight, who was peacefully sleeping in the bed. You little minx… I fucking love you… He briefly considered lying down in bed himself, but quickly changed his mind. It was very likely that he would start losing control the moment he felt Twilight’s body pressed up against him. And looking at the size of the bed, that was inevitable.

He could sleep on the couch, but after the treatment he just endured, he could use some more time to calm down. Revan grabbed his clothes from the table in the corner of the room and put them on. Next, he quietly left the bedroom, closing the door behind as quiet as possible to not wake Twilight up.

Not that he actually thought it might happen, she looked like a tank storming through the academy wouldn’t wake her up (unless it run into the library, then god have mercy upon the soul of the poor driver). He was more worried about waking up someone else. Mischief.

Revan quietly sneaked his way past the sleeping dog, holding his boots in hands. Luckily for him, the floor wasn’t making any noises as he moved towards the way out, like it did in his old house. Back then it was nearly impossible for him to get out in a middle of the night without waking the dog up, unless he jumped out of the window. This time however he made it, and again quietly closed the door as he walked out.

He calmly walked out of the academy, entering the empty streets of Canterlot. Since the city was placed on top of the mountain, it was already pretty cold during the day, but now it was almost freezing. Not that Revan minded, not only did he liked it when it’s cold outside (he hates summer) but in his current state he felt like it would do him some good.

The human slipped his hands into his pockets and stared to walk around the city. It was surprising how much this place has gained in his eyes now that all the damn nobles were gone. The bunch of narcissistic assholes was annoying him almost as much as Golden Ingot just by walking around and looking at him. Never in his life has Revan met someone who would look down at him with such dedication as them. And that’s saying something, especially since most of them aren’t even one meter high.

Suddenly the place became less boring than it was before.

There was a park near the academy, and that’s where he was heading. The road have led him near the Castle’s gate, where he spotted a Royal Guard standing next to a normal Guard working in Canterlot. The royal Guard was a stallion with blue fur and reddish mane, he was wearing a dark blue armor meant for night duty. The other Guard was a mare with light pink fur and a light purple mane that was falling down a bit under her shoulder.

Each Guard district has its own uniform, that is determined by either Head Guard of Prosecutor. In case of Canterlot, the uniforms were largely inspired by those worn by Royal Guard, only without a helmet and not made out of metal.

He didn’t hear what they were talking about, but all interest in finding out disappeared when the two started to make out. God damn it… Revan quickly increased his pace to get them out of his sight as soon as possible. It was of course not fast enough to not get Revan thinking about doing the same with Twilight and then maybe some more… God damn it, stop it! Remember, Land-whales and Tusk…

Luckily for him, before more of thoughts like that started to get more of these thoughts, he saw a familiar pony walking around the park as he entered it. “Luna?” He called out to her.

The princess turned towards him, slightly surprised, but noticeably happy to see him again. “I bid you welcome my-!” He quickly wrapped his hand around her muzzle.

“Kurwa mać, czy ty kiedyś przestaniesz tak się drzeć? Zaraz pobudzisz pół miasta. ((For fucks sake, will you ever stop yelling like that? You’re going to wake up half of the city.))” He let go of her mouth.

“Wybacz, ale po tysiącu lat na księżycu miewam okazjonalne problem z dostosowaniem moich walorów głosowych do dzisiejszych standardów. ((Well sorry, but after one thousand years on the moon, I might have occasional problems with adjusting my vocal qualities to new standards.))” She replied sarcastically. “A przy okazji, dlaczego nie mówimy w nowym języku urzędowym? Myślałam, że teraz powinnam go stosować na co dzień. ((Also, why aren’t we speaking In currant official language? I thought I was supposed to be using it every day from now on.))

“Eh, no… It’s just my thing, ok? I sometimes speak like that when I don’t really think about what I’m talking about, alright?”

“Oh, I apologize then. I was not aware of this.” It seems like she hasn’t changed a bit since she left the hospital in Ponyville… Good, she’s funnier that way. “Not that I’m implying that your presence in not welcomed, but why exactly are you here, dear hooman?”

“Human.” He corrected her. “I’m here to cool down after Twilight added a little surprise to a sandwich I ate.”

“Could you elaborate further?”

For a second he thought about whether he should tell her about it or not, but ultimately decided ‘why not’. After all, he still has to figure out a way to pay her back…

“The two of us decided to start a little game between ourselves. The point is to basically tease the hell out of one another until one of use can’t take it anymore. So far I think I’m winning, even though Twilight just dealt me a serious blow. That little minx slipped a powdered Viagra pill and something else that she made herself to get me horny into a sandwich I ate… It worked… very well…”

“Hmm, so Tia wasn’t lying after all… you two really are mates…” Luna said intrigued.

“I’m not sure if we can be called like that yet, but I guess we’re going in that direction…”

“And you say that she spiced up your meal, is that correct?” Revan nodded, wondering where she was going with this. He saw her eyes shining white for a second before going back to normal. “I think I see what exactly she has put in you. Pretty impressive that she would come up with using that, but it’s still easy to counter when you know how to do so. Would you like me to remove those effects from you?”

“What effects? Horniness?”

“Among other things. You see, the second addition to the sandwich you ate was not just meant to, as you put it ‘get you horny’. It was also meant to keep you that way for a long time. Looking at the dose that I sensed in you, I would say that for an average pony it would last for at least 24 hours before wearing off. For you though, I predict it to go away in 12 hours.

I don’t think you would want to go through that though, so I offer to make a counter potion to the one that Twilight Sparkle has made. I think I can also help you with making sure your mate gets a proper payback that you’re surely are thinking about.”

“That would be… nice. But what do you want in return.” He asked.

“I couldn’t possibly ask you to give me anything. I am already in debt to you for freeing me from Nightmare Moon. And this is a debt that I will never be able to fully repay… And, don’t tell this to anypony, but I am secretly practicing my ‘prank’ abilities. My sister has been performing those ‘pranks’ on me for some time now, and I plan to give her a taste of her own medicine! The victory shall be mine


Twilight woke up early, just as the sun was rising up. She immediately felt that Revan was not next to her, which was disappointing to say the least. After spending three nights sleeping in the same bed as the human -even though before now she was mostly embarrassed about it (or drunk)- sleeping without him felt strangely lacking. It was surprising for her how much better it is to sleep when you have something warm next to you, especially, when that something has long arms and wraps them around you.

A yawn escaped her mouth as she pulled the blanket off of her and got up. Her magic quickly put the bed back in order while she levitated a brush to her hair and straightened them up. She then opened the bedroom door and walked out.

She hadn’t seen Revan, but she could hear him from the kitchen. “Revan, what are you-” Suddenly, she froze in place as she saw Revan standing in front of her. “W-Why are you naked!?” And why does it even bother me!? Everypony walks around naked! Despite her attempt to make herself ignore this, her face turned deep red.

He turned towards her with a smirk. “Well, I thought that since you’re already walking around naked, I should not stop myself from showing off a bit.” He chuckled to himself as he turned back to the pot that was in front of him. “Anyways, I was going to bring you this to bed, but since you’re already here, we might as well eat together.” He pulled two bowls from the shelf, one big and the other small.

Then he grabbed the pot and filled the bowls with what Twilight recognized as apple muse and placed them on a table. “Come on, sit down.” He said as he sat on a stool.

Twilight eyed the smaller bowl he’s put on the opposite side of the table. “You’ve added something to it, haven’t you?”

“No, but if I did I wouldn’t tell you about it. Besides, we’re eating from the same pot, so if I actually added something to it I would be eating it as well.” He ate a spoon to support his point. “And as you can see, I have no problems with eating it.”

“Alright…” She said, still a bit cautious. She made a quick scan of the muse, to make sure nothing was there, but found nothing. Now more convinced that there was not trap to fall into, she started to eat along with Revan. “Tell me, how was your night?”

“Pretty good all things concerned. I mean, it wasn’t that hard to keep myself in control after the first hour.”

“Hmm… shame. I was hoping it would do a bit more than that…”

“Well, to be honest that first hour was probably the most turned on I’ve ever been in my life, so I guess that whatever it was that you’ve put in there did its job well. Watch out though. Because you don’t know the time and place when I will pay you back for this.” To be fair though, you’re already in the right place, and the time is coming… He smiled slightly, not enough for her to see.

They continued to eat for few more minutes, chatting between each other about what they’re going to be doing today.

For starters, Revan had to visit Ponyville’s head prosecutor to get his badge. Twilight knew where her office probably is, so luckily there won’t be any need to look for it. That was pretty much the only thing they had to do, so after they’ll get this over with, they will be free to do whatever they wanted. This of course included walking around the city to see some places that Twilight wanted to show him (including a library).

First they had to finish the breakfast though, and Twilight quickly found herself facing a slight problem.

Her spoon suddenly fell down on the almost empty bowl. “W-What have you put in this!?” She suddenly said with a huge blush on her face.

“Whatever do you mean?” He said calmly, forcing a stoic expression on his face.

“D-Don’t pretend that you don’t know what I’m talking about! What was in that bowl!? I-I feel…” She looked down at her rump.

“What was in the bowl you ask? Well, nothing out of the ordinary… Apples, sugar, a bit of water… and that’s all. Are you suggesting that a simple apple muse is enough to turn you on?” He gave her a devious smile.

“Don’t lie to me! Something else had to be there!” Her blush only deepened as the warm feeling started to feel her entire body. “W-Where have you gotten those apples in a middle of night anyways?”

“From Princess Luna.” She froze as the realization hit her hard. “She was also nice enough to add a little spell to them. You know, to make things more interesting.” That was it. Twilight has been scanning for physical things: powders, potions etc., not a spell. “You know that there’s a spell that mares use to ensure pregnancy, right?”

“I-I d-do, but…it doesn’t cause effects like… t-that!” Her tail suddenly started to go up as a all too familiar smell hit her nose, making her freeze in place with wide eyes and face that was beyond red.

“Yes, it doesn’t do anything else than what it is meant for in a form that is used nowadays…” He chuckled as he saw her face, knowing very well that she has realized what is going on with her. “One thousand years ago however… Ponies were using a bit different spell… one that would force a bit more natural state in which mare can get pregnant…” He chuckled again, leaning over the table and looking directly into her wide opened eyes.

“In other words, you’re in heat, Twilight.”


It took all of Twilight’s willpower to keep her tail pinned down as she and Revan walked through Canterlot’s streets. Revan’s hand on her flank wasn’t helping her at all. Luckily, the streets were mostly empty, not many ponies were out at these hours and especially nobles liked to sleep in unless they had something to do that would be in their interest.

She was afraid to even open her mouth, fearing Revan will notice and do something that would make her moan loudly, which in her current state was not hard. There was a spell she knew that she could remove the spell that was a cause of the heat which would make it disappear in about an hour, but unfortunately, Revan knew about it and her magic was already locked away by his cursed ring.

As if that wasn’t enough, there was no way to ease up the heat. Masturbation wouldn’t do anything else then make it even worse, and herbal teas that mares often use during heat seasons won’t work when the heat is magically forced. The only ways to make it go away are to either wait for the spell to wear out, or get pregnant. The second option was immediately out of the question. Not only was Revan unable to do so, but it would mean that she had to give up and admit defeat, and she was more than determined to show him that she can put up a fight, even if he has the upper hand.

Still, the prospect of simply giving up was starting to look more and more interesting to her… Stop it! Sweet Celestia give me strength… Eh, come on Twilight, you’ve passed that stupid condition tests in school, you can stay sane in heat! She tried to convince herself. B-but I never had coltfriend when in heat before… maybe I could just… NO! Don’t think about it Twilight! Think about something not sexy! Like your parents! Yes, my boring parents having the most boring sex in the universe, while I’m in the next room, tied down to a bed with Revan who stands over me with a-

She stopped herself before getting carried away in her fantasy. “We’re here.” She heard Revan say. He looked down at her, smiling as he saw her red face and tail barely kept down. “Ready to give up?”

“Ye- N-NO!”

He laughed at her and knocked to the door. They didn’t have to wait long before the entrance was opened before them by a pegasus mare.

Her mane was short, with one white streak on side of her head while the rest of her mane was black. Same with her tail. Coat that covered her body was white, almost as pure as Celestia’s, but clearly it wasn’t something she was putting much attention to. On her chest he could see that the fur is noticeably longer than in other places, which was a sign that mares use in order to inform stallions that they are already in a relationship. The hair in that area also grows faster when mare is pregnant, which based on its current length along with her slightly expanded belly seemed to be the case.

She looked at him with her blue eyes. “Hmm, I thought you would be lower…” She said in serious tone. “Well, come in. We have some things to talk about.” She stepped out of the way. Revan was now able to see her cutie mark - wage tiled to the left, with a scroll on it.

He walked in first, followed by Twilight. “I must say, I thought you would be a unicorn. You don’t often meet other races around Canterlot, especially in this part of the city.” Twilight said, trying to find something that would take her mind off of heat in her backside.

“I moved in here when I got married. Nothing else to it.” Her voice was still as serious as it was before.

“You know, you don’t have to act all serious like that, right?” Revan noted. “Anyways, I’m Revan, as you were likely already informed Ponyville’s new head guard, and this is Twilight Sparkle, the cutest little butt in Equestria.” The unicorn blushed madly and tried to cut in, but Revan was quick to continue. “Now tell us, who are you?”

“Gleaming Script.” She answered simply, looking at Twilight after that. “If you would like some herbs, I have a full stash. I could make you some tea.”

“Thank you, but to be honest, in this case it won’t help…”

Script’s eyes moved towards Twilight’s horn, where she noticed the ring that was limiting her magic. She then looked at Revan, who was smiling in the corner of his mouth. This along with the fact that the other mare seemed to be fine with the situation despite visible embarrassment and faint red marks on her hips has led her to a simple conclusion. This mare is either a masochist who magically forced herself into heat and then cut off her own magic, or she has tried to pull something off on her partner who then decided to pay her back in kind.

“Well, here’s my office, we can talk inside.” She opened another door and walked inside. Or at least she tried to, because as she opened the door and took the first step forward, she bumped directly into a light brown stallion with long dreads on the back of his head. “Ted, I thought I told you not to go into my office without asking.”

“Yeah, well… I was just feeding Monnie, so… yeah, I’ll be going.” He quickly dashed out of the office, but just as he run past Glimmering, he slapped her rump with his tail.

She yelped in surprise and a blush appeared under her white coat. “Who was that? And who’s Monnie?”

“T-That was-“ She slipped out of her serious tone for a moment. “Ekhem, that was my husband, Detective Teddy Bear. He’s part of Canterlot’s Guard Force. Eh, I sometimes wonder why I even married him.”

“Probably because you love the guy.” She turned towards him. “Seriously? You thought that I would miss the look you have each other after you bumped into him? Not to mention the look on your face after he slapped your butt.” Her blush reappeared on her face. “I’ve played a matchmaker for my friends long enough to see things like that. Things we do unconsciously are the ones that usually can tell us the most.”

“Eh, I just don’t like to act like that in public…” She turned back towards the office again and walked in, Revan and Twilight following her. The office had two levels, first on ground floor and the second one on first floor. The ceiling was high enough for Revan to easily stand straight, and for Script to fly around. “And as for Monnie… This is her.” She opened a large cage on one of the drawers and put her hoof inside.

Soon enough, a rat run onto her back. Mischief immediately spotted it, and rushed towards it with his jaw wide open and ready to kill the thing. Revan was quick to grab him be the collar and pull him backwards. The dog then started to growl and bark at the rat, making it respond in kind. Script quickly placed Monnie back into the cage. “Sorry for that. You could say we’ve had a pretty bad run in with a hoard of rats lately.”

“I understand.” She answered simply. She then flopped her wings few times and flew up to a drawer in the upper part of the office. She opened it and after taking a shiny object out of it, flew up to Revan, meeting him on the eye level. She then pinned the object to his uniform. “Revan Spicer, welcome to the Guard Force. Don’t get this the wrong way, but I hope I’ll have some job to do with you in charge.”


After leaving Glimmering Script’s house, Revan and Twilight walked around the city for the next few hours. Twilight’s heat obviously showed no signs of letting go, and in fact it was slowly getting harder for her to keep her head straight. She knew that there will be time when even thinking about her parents having sex becomes arousing for her, and seeing that happen was one of her worst nightmares since childhood.

Surprisingly, Revan wasn’t doing much to make things harder for her, most of the time only keeping his hand on her flank. She could already hear part of her screaming to him to do more than that, but she knew that the moment he actually does go further she’s going to lose the last bits of common sense she has left in her and become the sex crazed mare that most mares in heat end up as.

Mischief on the other hoof…

He has never felt a smell of mare in heat, and it seemed like he really wanted to get to know it better. It was clear that Revan was struggling to keep him away from her, though after a while he calmed down and stopped trying to rush towards her.

“What is this place?” She heard Revan ask.

“T-That is ‘Menda’, one of the most praised restaurants in Centerlot. Don’t bother going in though. The place is so busy that a normal pony has to wait a month to get in.” Almost as if he didn’t hear the last part, Revan walked over to the stallion standing in front of the entrance. “What are you doing!? I said that-“ Her jaw suddenly hit the ground when she saw Revan pulling out two pieces of paper from his back pocket and giving them to the stallion, who then opened the door for him.

Revan turned towards her. “You’re going in or not?” Seeing that she’s unable to walk at the time, he walked over to her and picked her up with one hand and placed her under his arm. He then walked inside with her still too stunned to move and placed her on a chair next to a table towards which he was led by a waitress.

“HOW THE BUC-!!!“ Her scream was cut off by Revan’s hand. Seeing that quite a few ponies were staring at them, she decided to tone down a bit. “Mind telling me how the buck have you got in?”

“I will, but first pick something to eat.” He said, taking menu left by the waitress in his hand. “Just don’t go overboard with it, will you? I don’t exactly swim in money.”

Wanting to know the answer, and knowing that pressing him to give it now is pointless, Twilight did as he said and within a minute their orders were made. “Well, will you tell me now?”

“Alright.”

“Well, then talk. How did you managed to reserve a spot here. For someone like you, it would take at least two months to get in, and you weren’t in Equestria that long. Even a Princess wouldn’t get in faster than in a week.”

“Ever heard that saying: ‘if you remove what is impossible, what’s left is probably the truth’? If I couldn’t reserve a spot myself that fast, who would I ask for help? The person who could of course. And the first pony that came to mind, was Princess Celestia herself. This thing was actually Rarity’s idea, I’ve just put it in motion. It was supposed to be a way of forcing myself to go out with you in case I never got to do it before. Now, it’s going to be our first official date.”


Moon lit up the streets of Canterlot as Revan and Twilight walked out of the restaurant. The mare had a giant blush on her face, her tail was already raised up half way through their meal, and now she had no way to bring it back down. The thing was, she didn’t want it down. In her mind, she has already lost the main part of their game, and was probably going to throw herself at Revan the moment they step out of the train (no matter if somepony will be watching).

However, she was still determined to withstand the train ride. It shouldn’t be a problem, right? I mean, it’s just one and a half hour ride, during which we’re probably going to be alone. What could he possibly do? Nothing. The exact thing he was doing now, which was driving her crazy.

Before walking into the restaurant, he was keeping his hand on her flank, which even despite constantly arousing her even more than already was, it was also partly toning down her heat , at least the part that demanded stallion’s attention. Now however, he wasn’t doing even that, and every time she has tried to get a bit closer to him, he would simply move away. Was this his plan? To get her so thirsty for attention that the moment he as much as touches her with his little finger, she will take the whole hand along with arm and everything else until she reaches his crotch?

If yes, than it was working. Very well.

She was glad that it was already late and there weren’t many ponies around to see her in that state. Never in her life has she been through a heat this bad, and she wasn’t sure if that’s because of the spell, or the fact that she has a coltfriend now, but one thing she was beyond sure. Tonight she’s losing her virginity.

Some might think she’s moving forward too fast, but not she. And the heat had nothing to do with it, she was just as willing to take that step forward two days ago as she is now. She only wanted it more now. A lot more.

They reached the train station in few minutes. There were three other ponies waiting there for the train. While Revan went to get tickets for them, Twilight sat down on a bench to hide her raised tail. Not that this would hide the fact that she’s in heat. The smell coming off of her has already informed everypony they came across about that fact.

Mares in heat usually don’t walk around, unless it’s during the heat season, then stallions are the ones staying in homes. The reason for that is that the smell is usually enough to turn a stallion on, especially in the middle of the heat, when it get worse. Apparently it doesn’t work on Revan, but then again, he doesn’t have as good sense of smell as ponies do.

It seemed that one of the stallions on the station have noticed the smell, and blushed in response as he briefly looked at her. He immediately walked away towards a different part of the station, where he won’t be able to feel the smell.

Soon, Revan sat next to her with two tickets in his pocket. Without a word, he wrapped his arm around her and hugged her closely. She was a step away from jumping on him and just letting go of everything, allowing him to take her here and now. She managed to stop herself though, limiting her action to wrapping her hooves around his neck and kissing him until the train arrived.

An action that she soon regretted, as the moment Revan pulled her away and walked into the train, she found herself not only burning from embarrassment of having few ponies watching her heat powered make out session with the only human in Equestria, but also burning with desire.

She wasted no time, and followed him. Her legs were starting to fail her, but she didn’t let that stop her. When she entered the train, she saw conductor walking out to another wagon after Revan gave him two tickets. Immediately, she rushed towards the human, ready to go back to kissing him until they returned to Ponyville.

However, she didn’t catch him.

She only saw him smirk, before he jumped up and grabbed onto the top of the wagon. Twilight of course flew forward, landing on top of Mischief. The dog didn’t fall over, only looked back at her and licked her nose. Twilight was quick to jump out of him and look back at Revan, who was still hanging there and looking at her with a smirk. “Get down here! NOW!”

“Why would I do that?”

“Because I want you to!”

“Well… I guess I could do that, but…” Her ears picked up. “But I first want you to admit defeat. How about that?”

She ignored his wish, and decided to take what she wants herself. She jumped as high as she could in order to reach him, almost reaching his smirking lips. Only then she realized that the wagon they were in was bigger than the other ones. It allowed Revan to stand freely when he walked in and now was allowing him to stay away from her reach. She tried to do this few more times, once even managing to brush her lips against his, but she quickly run out of strengths

Not knowing what else to do, she started to circle around him for over an hour, hoping that he will get tired as well and come down, but that never happened. Whatever… we’re almost in Ponyville, and the moment we leave that train…

“You know what?” Her train of thoughts was stopped. “We’re about five minutes away from Ponyville… Even if I walked down, you could probably still make it through until we get there, but…” He suddenly jumped down. “What if I was to… give you a taste now, if you will give up? How does that sound?”

Her leg twitched as she heard that. She was five minutes away from winning the bet, she could do it. But having a taste of what’s to come? Would she give up for that? Her heat made the decision easier. “Revan I…” She tried to stop herself but it was no use. “T-That thing I wrote in my diary… ‘I want him to make me…’ W-What I wrote next was… ‘his mare.’… R-Revan please… make me yours… I-I give up.”

His eyes opened a bit wider as she said that. These words don’t have as much meaning for humans as they do here in Equestria. This used to be something mare said during marriage if she decided to pass the power in marriage to the stallion. Those were times when mares outnumbered stallions 10 to 1 due to currently unknown reasons, and even before that the Equestian society was matriarchal, so saying that was a rarity.

Nowadays, it is still used, but not in that sense and just as rarely used. Surface to say, it’s a very kinky thing to say, and not something that you go around and brag about. After hearing Twilight, the quiet librarian, say that, he had only one response. “Gladly.”


You can see how it went down HERE