A Second Too Late

by Thunder Seethe


Of All The Things...

*Authors notes: Sorry for the late update, got school... Anyway I've got a pretty good pic of 'Thunder Seethe' aka: Storm, Stormy, or Shayne. Anyway, enjoy the story and expect sort of late updates daily (except Fridays I hope, and DEFINITELY Saturdays. And Sundays, unless I get busy. I have a project for cinema, and our group needs to get weekly updates so... I'll be busy EVERYDAY! Good for me though. Every pony, just one last note; when I have the characters talking about it in the future, I'll be using Bold. ok that’s all, see you soon!

~One Day before the Grand Galloping Gala~


"Shayne... Shayne..." No response... I hope he ain't dead or anything! Haha I crack myself up... but he better not be dead.

"Shayne!" He got startled and with a quick beat of his wings, he tackled me. His golden eye was staring into mine, but when he realized who woke him up, he got off of me and chuckled. "What the hell man... not cool." He said while glaring at me.

"Well you weren't getting up! And it’s not like Dashie is here, she left early morning."

"Hmm, probably has work today, speaking of which... I still need to find myself a job! I gotta talk to AJ then meet up with Octavia for practice." He sounded like a man on a mission... pony on a mission.

"Well you see, staying here alone... well... doesn't exactly 'seem’ like fun. I was kinda hoping I could make some friends. You know. Pony friends." I hope he says yes, I don't want to be here and remain such a secret. It’s literally going to kill me if I could never talk about my life, because I've already told it all. Then I'd be forced to listen... not something I want to be forced to do.


"Sean... you do see the problem with that right?"

"Yea yea yea... everypony is going to freak the hell out and I'm fucked, and then maybe get sent back to Earth. sigh"

"Yea, I could talk to the Princess, I mean sooner or later they're to find out right? I mean they pretty much know everything. Its best not get on the bad side of them and try to keep a secret this big from them. The last thing we need is 'Royal' trouble," he joked but... not something I'd laugh at, but I did anyway because I wanted to remain calm about this. "Yeah, you're right. How exactly are you going to contact them? There aren't any phones right?"

"You're right about that, but I can contact them telepathically, so...no phones needed!" he gave me a smile and I guess he started talking to the Princesses but he was still, and was blank faced. He wasn't even blinking. I decided that if this was going to take a while, I should move him to the couch and set him down. I did so, but was that how Redheart was contacting me? Was it because I was now in the same world as Shayne that I couldn't contact him anymore, or is it because something went wrong with the magic...? Well, as much as I hate to say it, it’s really out of my control and I can't do crap about it.


Shayne's POV ~Meanwhile~

'Princess, you there?'

Yes, this is Celestia. she didn't really need to say that, but I guess it’s just in case or something.


'You know of my friend Sean?'

Yes... what about him? This is where it turns from bad to worse. Or awkward to silent.

'Well... you see... he came to this universe and isn't a pony... and the thing is, he doesn't want to be changed. I also don't want him to leave either, and neither does he. He's already pretty much given up everything he owns in Earth from what he's told me.'

I understand. Well, I can allow him to stay, but he mustn't want to stay hidden forever does he? Maybe it was better than I had expected, but this was still pretty early on in the conversation.


'Yea... I have an idea though, but only if this is okay with you...'

Well, I guess I'll listen.

'The Grand Galloping Gala is going to happen soon right? So everypony isn’t afraid of him... how’s about we make him a special guest? He could be announced as a new friendly species, and as the only one of his kind. If a Princess announces it, then they must know that he's safe right? You may want to add that he can speak our language fluently... they may talk to him very slowly and stuff... he's not a fan of that.' the picture of him being talked to slowly and baby talked didn't appeal to me one bit. He would probably rage and stuff... he could never stand dog owners or pet owners in general who really babied their pets and stuff, he felt like it wasn't right to treat them like infants, and they should be treated as people who are mute and rascal.

I see what you're getting at here. That could be arranged, thanks for letting me know. My sister and I don't take kindly to ponies-or people when they keep secrets that shouldn't be kept. Not to seem rude, but if you have any other things I should know, please tell me. Well, that was basically it...does she want to know the physical look of him? I'll ask.


'Well if you need to know his physical characteristics... he's twice as tall as me, walks on two legs, has fingers including a thumb... and he's kind of skinny but not too skinny at the same time.'

Thanks for letting me know. I think he'll be very easy to spot then, I’ll see you at the Gala. When the day comes, I'll teleport him to my castle. I’ll send him a message and let him know.

'Thank you so much Princess.'

She chuckled. Please, it’s kind of weird talking to a friend that keeps calling me 'Princess'... just call me Celestia and call my sister Luna. It doesn't have to be formal coming from you. Even though we never see you, we think of you as a friend.


'Ok, haha! I'll see you later then.' And with that, the connection faded and I reeled back into reality.

I was now on the couch and Sean was sitting next to me flicking between stations on the TV. When did that come in? "Hey Sean, when'd that come here?"

"The same time the computer, internet, and cable were installed..." I was clueless and I had that face on too, my eyebrows setback and my head slightly tilted to the side. So he gave me the detail I needed. "This morning when you were still dreaming about your crush on Dashie." He teased me and he had an evil grin on his face. I set on my furious look but it quickly settled and I was normal again. "Heheh, being defensive and giving in? Ya' know, you're already sleeping with her and it’s still just a 'crush'... I know you like her but, why are you being so...reserved with her? Why don't you tell her how you feel already and just let it out? You'll never get what you want unless you ask... or work for it." I don’t really need a marefriend/fillyfriend now. Not now. I need to see Octavia in a few hours and I gotta see AJ still. I should probably get to her at night when things are more settled. But would it be rude to walk in when they may behaving dinner? Hmm... I'm going off topic. Good.

"Sean, I don't exactly need a fillyfriend right now. I'm not even sure if she likes me back, even though she's been hinting. It could've been playful stuff. You know... anyway I gotta get to Octavia's place to practice, and I decided that I'm going to AJ afterwards. And as for you being able to go outside and meet people, Celestia should be sending you a message. She's got plans. And it’s ok for you to keep you human body and stay in Equestria... just don’t do anything stupid to get yourself kicked out."


"Alright alright..." he gave me 'the look' as he walked away. He almost hit the door frame because he kept staring at me. I kept the same face I had on and kept focus on him so he would hit the frame. Sadly he just 'had' to turn around at the right time to notice it. He turned back towards me, seemingly frightened by almost hitting his head. He gave me a final look before he left the room. Now it was just me, the TV, and the computer. I'll work on some programming later.

I grabbed my violin and left towards Canterlot.

~Meanwhile in Canterlot, Octavia's house.~

Octavia's POV

Yawn... Another day... wait. Something is suppo-Storm is coming today! Oh my god! How do I look? BED HEAD! Agh got to fix this mane. Oh no, what time should he be here again? 12:30 ok... still got a few hours. I should take a shower so I don't smell... Ugh I got to fix this place up. Where's that vacuum! There... ugh! It’s so dusty. I hope this works. I don't have much time before he comes! I plugged it in, and to my own fear it just died on me. WHY ISIT THAT WHENEVER SOMETHING CAN GO WRONG, IT DOES! I was screaming in my head, I was probably turning red and multicolored. I was enraged until I heard knocking on the front door. Oh dear Celestia... don't let it be him early... I walked toward the door fearfully, but sure enough, it was a pegasus, but not Thunder. Thank goodness for that.

He had a brown mane, red eyes, and an orange coat. He was shorter than the average pony, but he was still standing tall and proud. "Excuse me ma’am, would you mind taking a look at my new product for just a second?" Oh no... Not one of these ponies.


"I'm truly sorry, but I'm not buying. A... friend of mine should becoming over shortly and I simply must fix up my house before he comes."

"Oh milady, this should only be a moment! I insist! You wouldn't be happening to be looking for a new vacuum, would you?" I looked behind me and looked at my old broken vacuum. I really could use a new one. But he wasn’t carrying anything with him, nor was there anyone around to help carry a vacuum. He was just there empty handed. How could he possibly-"AAGH!" He tackled me! Oh no! He closed the door and locked it shut. I stared into his eyes before asking anything. "What are you doing?!"

"SHUT UP! If you want to get out of this alive, you're going to have to listen to ME! So shut up and just follow through. OK!?" I simply nodded, tears were flowing out of my eyes, and I feared that I would never see anypony again. I feared death waiting. He demanded money, and I pointed towards my bedroom. He had already tied me up with multiple ropes to restrain me from using my hooves. He then put an apple in my mouth to keep me quiet. I was trying my best to spit the apple out and wiggle my way toward the door. Only to be stopped by him, and he threatened that if I moved from the very next spot he put me in, he'll slice my throat. I was crying my eyes out. He continued going through the house and I noticed his dagger that looked like he found it from the trash. It was black. Could it have been obsidian? I don't really care. Whatever it was, it could still kill if he tried hard enough. The worse the blade is though... the longer it'll take for death.

I was sitting in that spot for hours now. I could still hear him scurrying around the house searching for valuables, I heard my cello getting tossed around, and every time I heard a screech or bang coming from it, my heart just ached more and more. I looked at the clock and it was already 12:13, so he should be here soon. Hopefully when the thief sees Thunder, he'll scurry off with whatever. I don't want Thunder getting into a fight with him. The thief is armed and I doubt Thunder is. I could only imagine the battle if he were to try and fight him. He could get seriously hurt... or even killed. If this had been an earth pony it may be easier. But this is a pegasus. I haven't seen either of them fly before, but... I don't want to see this regardless. Somepony...help... I turned toward the clock, and it showed 12:26 he should be here soo- I heard knocking on the door. It’s him!

I struggled more and tried to get the apple out of my mouth. I resorted to violently chopping it, and I did. I spat out the other half and spat out the rest. I couldn't yell for help just yet. I should try breaking the rope first. At least then I could unlock the door and tell him that we should go. I was biting the rope before I heard the thief. "Get out! We don't want you here! We're busy!" Bad mistake... I suppose he didn't listen to me when I said a friend was coming over, and didn't pay attention the part when I said 'he'... This is what I had feared of more than my own death.

"What the... well Octavia and I were supposed to be having a music rehearsal... I feel like I deserve to know what’s goi-"

"Thunder! Leave now! He's armed with a dagger! Just go and get help!" I screamed as loud as I could. I hope this didn't encourage him to break in. Then again... I should have just kept my mouth shut. I could hear hoof steps coming up the stairs toward my room. I could hear him muttering something to himself.

"What the- I'm coming in! Leave her alone and I swear you put a finger on her I'LL RIP YOU IN SHREDS YOU WORTHLESS FISH! I'LL GUT YOU INTO THE NEVERENDING SEA AND FEED YOU TO THE SHARKS AND I'LL BE YOUR FUCKING PERSONAL DOORWAYTO HELL YOU BASTARD!" He has quite the tongue. I was speechless at this cussing. I also heard hell... from my understandings, that’s basically the underworld of the afterlife. Even the thief must've been stunned. He had stopped walking, and he turned around and walked toward the door. The door was clearly being bucked down, I could hear banging and everything going on while I was stuck here being useless.


He bucked down the door just as I got out of the rope. "WHERE ISSHE!" he cares... badump... Then I heard kicking and groaning. I rushed downstairs and saw a full fight going on.

"Octavia go and hide!" He took a beat of his wings and flew at top speed faster than I've ever seen before into the thief. The thief didn't accept defeat. He got back up and started charging toward him swinging his dagger around. Thunder kicked it from his hoof, and it slid across the floor toward the front door. The fight was raging on, as they exchanged blows and occasional beat downs. The thief’s face was bleeding, from his nose, and mouth. His back had a gash that was probably caused by a piece of wood. His violin was on the ground in the corner. Thunders eyes were blackened and his mouth had a single strand of blood coming out. Other than that, he was fine.

"Last... chance..." he was breathing deeply.” We have done enough damage to this poor mare’s house." I looked around them and saw that it was a complete mess. "Never!" The thief flew quickly to the door while agonizing in pain from his back. I could only tell through the faces he made with each flap of his wings. Thunder followed him shortly. The thief picked up the dagger and took Thunder by surprise. He stopped quickly and turned around and charged back towards Thunder. He squinted his eyes shut knowing what was awaiting him.

The thief stabbed him in the front left leg (his left) and took a few more jabs at his back before deciding he had enough. He walked over to me and was about to kill me. "Thunder!" If I were to die now, I wanted his name to be my last words. I closed my eyes and feared the worst, until I heard aloud cracking sound and a scream. I opened my eyes and saw Thunder's violin bow jabbed into the thieves head. It was over, but it wasn't for Thunder. He fell to the ground, and became unconscious. His breathing was becoming very faint. He won't have enough time to make it to the hospital. Just then, a yellowish light of magical aura surrounded Thunder and I and we appeared into a library.

"Where am I now!?" I said loudly and a purple unicorn was sitting down reading a book and she suddenly looked toward me and spoke. "Whathappe-THUNDER! SPIKE, GET OVER HERE QUICKLY! I NEED YOUR HELP!"

"Alright, alright I'm comin' Twi, what’s up? WHOA." The purple dragon was frightened at the sight of a dying pegasus. I assisted the unicorn, seeing as she was unable to get the dragon to move much further. He seemed like a baby so I could understand why.

She started to use magic on him and his wounds were beginning to heal, but it was slow and I could already tell the unicorn was getting tired. She was at this for more than half an hour. My only job was to hold him still, because a reaction may occur which makes him get up and start feeling more than excruciating pain. He had three deep wounds from the dagger, a single slash on his leg, and multiple bruises on his body. The bruises started to disappear first, and then all the bleeding stopped in unison. "He'll be fine for now, but may I ask who you are?"

"I'm Octavia. I'm his friend from Canterlot. May I ask who you are?" I tried being as polite as possible, but I was agitated from this event. So it was pretty difficult.

"My name is Twilight Sparkle. I'm a student of Princess Celestia, and also am a friend of Thunder." That’s good to know. At least I know that he’ll be fine now.

Shayne’s POV ~Going to Octavia's house~

I left Ponyville shortly after the conversation with Celestia. She was sounding pretty confident about the situation, that’s a good sign. My flight to Canterlot should only be a few hours. Unless I rush, then I should be their sooner. Maybe I should just to get familiar with the place.

I took a quick beat of my wings and started flying as fast as I could with my violin to Canterlot. I arrived in about an hour tired, but proud of myself for being able to do that. Only if Dashie were here... I walked around in search for Octavia's house but with no luck, I found myself going in circles. She was supposed to be living in a large two story white house with a gate in the front. I continued searching until I found a house that fit the description...the address was right, the time should be around 12:20. The day was really uneventful, besides the talk I had with Celestia, so it was a pretty average day. I walked up to the door and gave it a few knocks. I waited around a bit to hear another pony... not Octavia's voice at all! It was a male voice. "Get out! We don't want you here! We're busy!" This guy would have to be mad to think I'll leave a friend hanging. But if they really are doing something... best I'd not get involved, but I should know. Just in case.

"What the... well Octavia and I were supposed to be having a music rehearsal... I feel like I deserve to know what’s goi-"


"Thunder!" Octavia's voice sounded like she'd been gagged or something. "Leave now! He's armed with a dagger! Just go and get help!" Oh hell no. He is not fucking holding my friend hostage... I exploded with anger.

"What the- I'm coming in! Leave her alone and I swear if you put a finger on her I'LL RIP YOU IN SHREDS YOU WORTHLESS FISH! I'LL GUT YOU INTO THENEVER ENDING SEA AND FEED YOU TO THE SHARKS AND I'LL BE YOUR FUCKING PERSONALDOORWAY TO HELL YOU BASTARD!" I started bucking at the door, and eventually it broke out into a full on fight. I kicked the dagger out of his hands and started bucking him in the chest while he was still confused. I charged at him multiple times, destroying a few walls. I charged at him again, but he bucked me in the face before I could reach him. He took a quick beat of his wings and started towards me. Not letting that happen, I slammed him to the ground when he was close enough. I heard a few cracks in his back, but it didn’t phase me. Octavia came down the stairs and was watching the whole thing. "Octavia! Go and hide!" I took another beat of my wings and slammed him even harder into the ground. He was screaming in pain, but that was nothing compared to what I really wanted to do. I just can't do it in front of Octavia.

A few more minutes of fighting and he was making his way to the door. I quickly followed him shortly after, but he took me by surprise. He turned around and stabbed my left leg. I screamed in pain as the blade wedged deeper into my skin, and I tried head-butting him but failed. He left the dagger in my leg and bucked my head. I slammed onto the concrete ground outside, then he pulled the dagger out. It felt even worse than the pipe, but I can't quit now. Octavia's life depends on it. I CAN'T QUIT NOW! Just as quickly as I had thought it, he stabbed my back multiple times. I fell to the ground acting dead. He fell for it.

He was walking toward Octavia, and she was whimpering. This made me feel bad. I need a weapon. I need to wipe him out once and for all. I noticed a crowd watching the horrific scene as I was bleeding out. I didn't care. Octavia needs me. I slowly edged my way back into the house as the crowd watching was screaming and crying, calling for help. I searched the room and saw my violin in a corner near me. I must have thrown it off when I charged at him. I opened the case silently and stealthily made my way behind the thief. I took the bow from the case and jabbed it at his head, making a sickening crushing sound a she screamed in pain. If he survives this, he'll be brain-dead for the rest of his life. Shortly after, I blacked out.

I awoke at Twilights, to see Dashie and Twilight with her glowing horn. She seemed concentrated. I saw Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy who was staring at me in terror, and Octavia who looked to have minimal injuries. She was probably just mentally scarred for the rest of her life. This only angered me more. I didn’t show it, because it'll just cause concern for the girls. There was also Applejack, who was staring at me with much concern. I found that Rarity had fainted on the ground, and was being calmed down by a purple dragon. I assumed he was friendly if he was allowed to be near ponies. Lastly was Sean. He looked freaking pissed. He was pacing around, and was looking really pissed off...probably at me. I opened my eyes slightly wider. Not because I wanted to see more, or wanted to be noticed. It’s just that I wanted to get up and ask Octavia how she was doing, and if she was fine. I already made the assumption that someone teleported us here. Don't know who to thank though.


Just then Octavia noticed my eyes open and almost immediately planted a kiss on my cheek and I could tell it shocked the others. They all had the 'pokerfaced' on. She whispered in my ears, "Thank you so much for saving me. I don’t care what you did, or said. I'm just glad you were there for me." she gave me a hug and started crying.

"Uhh... If y'all don't mind me asking... what happened back there?" My turn to speak up.

"I killed a pony trying to... who knows what with Octavia. I'm sorry, I’m a bad friend. I understand if you guys hate me for doing this. Just understand that this was done for her. I'm sorry." I looked down with all the guilt in the world. I shouldn't have killed him. He was probably just poor and desperate for money. He didn't ask to be poor, or need to rob places for money, though there could have been better options. I could have knocked him out. I guess we're both at fault. Just then I saw Fluttershy squint her eyes and fly into me for a hug, joining Octavia. Soon enough the rest joined in except for Twilight who was concentrating on her magic.

A few minutes later the group hug broke up, but Octavia and Dashie were still there. I hugged them back, since I could actually fit my arms around them. I was tearing up too. Dashie was already crying but she kept her face in my chest so it wouldn't be as obvious. Octavia had already fallen asleep. I guess we won't be getting to practice for a while then... luckily I was therein time too. What happened to my wounds though? They don't hurt, nor are they bleeding anymore. I looked at Twilight again while she was still in the deep focus of her magic. Her eyes were closed and were tightly shut. She was straining herself. I carefully placed Octavia on the couch and Dashie started cheering up a bit. I walked towards Twilight and poked her, and whispered. “You can stop now. I feel fine."

"No... You’re not fine..." She was tearing up and continued wither magic. My wounds were now beginning to close.

"Trust me. Get some rest, there’s a big day tomorrow. You should start getting ready." I tried saying that in the calmest and soothing voice possible. She opened her eyes and stared at me a bit. She started to cry so I gave her a passionate hug. Then she just let it out. Tears were flowing from her eyes like a waterfall. I swear I'm not exaggerating either. A few minutes later Rarity woke up and she was lying down, Sean was still pacing not noticing that I was a bit calmer after the hug. I'm glad they knew about him. I should just bring it up anyway. "So you guys know Sean now?"


"Yes." They all replied in unison.

"You girls are okay with it? Not weird or anything? And you see him as a friend?"


"Yes." They all said that together again.

I nodded and told Sean to explain his problem. He had told me that I'm such an idiot for doing what I did. I should have just gone for help, like call the police or whatever. He was going on and on about what could have happened and how it may have benefited all of us from this stress. He made me feel really bad about this. I just looked down and started tearing up. This was kind becoming too much to handle. I was about to speak up until Dashie did for me.

"HEY! THAT’S NOT COOL! HE ONLY DID THIS BECAUSE HIS FRIEND WAS INTROUBLE AND MAY HAVE BEEN KILLED! SO WHAT IF THERE COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER WAYS!HE JUST THOUGHT THAT IF HE WENT TO GET HELP, IT'LL BE TOO LATE AND THAT'STALLION' WOULD BE FINISHED WITH WHATEVER HE INTENDED TO DO, AND GET AWAY WITHIT! SO DON'T BLAME HIM!" I looked at Dashie with much surprise. She was really pissed off. Then she looked at me, and quickly became shy. "I-I...I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said that." She backed away and started walking toward the couch and sat next to Octavia.

"Look Sean... I understand why you're upset. I can forgive you for that, but you do need to see my side of the story here. If I did leave to get help... who knows what could have happened... I didn't want to lose a friend. I just acted, similar to what you did to save me a while back. You know what I’m talking about, don't you?" He nodded in response and just looked down with tears building up in his eyes. "You don't need to be mad at yourself now. Just know my side of the story. I know that there could have been better ways to solve the problem, I just didn't believe at the time that the other ways would save her." All the other ponies’ eyes were tearing up. I could see Pinkie Pie's mane flat again, and she looked REALLY sad. I have to drop the subject quickly. I can't bear to see that pony sad. She's just... always so happy!

"So... who wants to do something? I'm kinda bored here." Octavia walked up behind me and put a hoof on my back and whispered in my ear, “You should play us a song on the cello, I'm sure that'll be great. “I thought about it and agreed.

"Ok girls, I'm going to grab my cello and play you guys a song. Then hopefully it'll lighten up the mood!" I said it cheerfully to get the little pink pony's head up and smiling. They all nodded and I left for Dashie’s house.

The Gala is tomorrow, and I have nothing to wear. At least I'm bringing Dashie with me and Sean is going to make a hell of an appearance tomorrow. What about Octavia though? By now she's got to be devastated! Her house is destroyed, and somepony died in her home. She's probably going to need to move out. But to where? Canterlot is her home, and she can't move here. How will she make it to Canterlot for her concerts! sigh I guess... once I get a home, I'm going to buy her a new house! That’s my current objective... after I play my friends a song on the cello.

*Authors notes: What a chapter... that is all.

Just kidding of course, but what do you guys think? Thanks for reading and I’ll see you all soon!

Sorry if there’s any error in spelling or grammar. Google basically decided to screw over my writing and delete all the spaces and such. I think I did a good enough job for it to stop, but… can’t be sure if its all okay. Anyway see you later!