The next day
It was a beautiful morning. Celestia's sun started to rise and shine upon the Apple house.
The morning silence was broken by a gentle yawning of Big Macintosh.
The stallion got off of his cozy bed, exposing his large green apple Cutie Mark on his large flank.
Letting out another yawn, he walked up to a window.
Letting out a smile, the red pony happily muttered, "Eeyup."
He ruffled up his yellow mane as he stared at the sun.
"Such a beautiful day." He thought to himself.
"This really is a good life..." The red pony muttered with a grin.
He lifted his nose and started sniffing.
He smiled. Applejack did make the best pancakes out of anypony is Equestria.
He walked out of his bedroom and into the kitchen.
AppleBloom smiled and walked up to the red pony.
"Morning big brother!" She greeted as she hugged him.
The red pony hugged back the filly. "Morning AppleBloom."
Applejack smiled as she put down a plate of piping hot pancakes with extra syrup.
"Lovely day, isn't it Big Macintosh?"
Big Macintosh nodded. "Indeed it is Applejack."
He walked up to Granny Smith and gave her a small kiss on her forehead.
"Morning Granny Smith."
The green pony smiled. "Good morning Mac."
Big Macintosh sat down and started to eat his pancakes.
"Lovely breakfast Applejack." Big Macintosh gratefully said to his sister.
Applejack laughed. "I cooks them just the way ya like them."
After he finished breakfast, Big Macintosh went outside to do his work.
With a harness on his back, he walked up to an apple tree and put baskets near it.
He gave the tree a good kick and smiled as the apples from the tree fell into the basket.
Big Macintosh observed all the other trees he had to harvest from.
He let out a smile. "I still have time to visit Rarity."
Rarity was Big Macintosh's marefriend. Big Macintosh couldn't wait until she becomes his wife.
Nopony minded their relationship. Even Spike, who once had a major crush on Rarity.
However, she was too old for him...and then Spike realized that Silver Spoon, one of the well-known bullies, had a crush on him.
So that's where that mistake was...
However, she was too old for him...and then Spike realized that AppleBloom, Big Macintosh's youngest sister, had a crush on him.
There we go.
Despite endless insults from Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, two well-known bullies, Spike and AppleBloom became inseparable and madly in love.
Crap. Those two rich brats remain evil...ah f*ck it.
Big Macintosh blinked. "What was that?" He said to himself.
Something happened. He couldn't hear it or see it, he just felt like something happened.
It was like that incident last night...
"Hey Big Macintosh!"
Applejack suddenly appeared next to him.
Big Macintosh jumped. "Ya scared me there Applejack."
Applejack grinned nervously. "Sorry."
Big Macintosh shook his head. "Don't worry about it."
Applejack smiled and walked away. "Alrighty then." She said.
"Hey sis."
"Yeah?"
"Is it me...or is this day kinda like the same like yesterday?"
Applejack froze.
"Um...well..ah..."
Change the subject.
"I heard that there's gonna be a dance and Spike's taking Silver Spoon."
Spike's dating AppleBloom.
"I mean AppleBloom!"
(Sigh)
Big Macintosh looked dumbfounded. "OK..."
Applejack let out a stupid smile. "Oh look at the time! It's time for me to...do stuff. Bye,"
She ran away as Big Macintosh just stood there.
"Huh."
Eventually, he got his work done and visited Rarity.
They sat down on a bench.
"Hey Rarity, can I ask ya something?"
"Sure. What is it?"
Big Macintosh sighed.
"It feels like...there's something going on. Something weird."
Rarity cringed.
"Oh, I'm sure it's nothing...hey, remember when we first met?"
Big Macintosh nodded.
"Yeah...it was Hearts and Hooves Day...and those Cutie Mark Crusaders thought you needed a date so they..."
He stopped. Wasn't it Cheerilee that the Cutie Mark Crusaders wanted? Not Rarity?
"Something wrong?"
"Oh um...nothing Rarity."
Big Macintosh frowned. Cheerilee...wasn't she the one whom he fell for?
He sighed. "What the buck is going on?" He whispered.
Nighttime came and Rarity was escorted home by Big Macintosh.
He went home and went to bed.
He sighed. "Something's wrong...and I'm gonna find out..." He muttered as he fell asleep.
Um sir...
Yes?
Is it alright if I...um...point out some mistakes...?
What mistakes?
Well, it feels rushed, you just fixed a mistake improperly, you entirely ripped off your first chapter for the beginning, and don't get me started with the spaci...
Ok ok. By the way, are you the Human Torch?
Um...no?
Well you must be...because YOU'RE F*CKING FIRED. Oh and be a sport and fire that actress who's playing as Applejack, mmkay? Oh god I'm talking like that Suri...I hate her.