I am going to redo my entire story I'm keeping the characters and plot, however, i am changing the beginning because (to me) it doesn't fit with the story like I thought...
I going to change it from a HiE story to a "Normal" type of story. Which means i have to revoke my story for a few days. Now in the FIMfiction rules for Stories it says:
"Revoking a submission makes a story invisible on the site again. It will need to be submitted again and go through moderation before it is visible on the site again." In other words I am trying to make this story better so please be patient.