Surprise

by Cyber V


Chapter 14: Chaos and Orders Parting Gifts

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Chapter 14

It was a few hours after the fight with Discord. We were all back in Ponyville and everypony was celebrating, but the one thing that was on my mind is what Discord said, now you will never get home, and I didn't like the sound of that, so I started to think of a plan.

I waited for Luna to meet me on the hill outside of Ponyville. As I was thinking what to say to Luna about I was planning, there was a glow and Luna appeared next to me.

"Hello my love, "said Luna.

"And hello to you too, "I replied trying to sound happy, but Luna heard through my disguise, and asked, "what's wrong?"

I braced myself for what was about to happen, "Luna, sigh, I need to go home."

I looked at Luna, she looked confused at what I said, "Home, why? Are you happy to be here and with me? "Luna asked, looking she is about to cry.

"Yes I am happy to here and with you, it's just that, I miss my family, and what Discord said got me really worried, "I said quickly trying not to get her to cry, but I failed.

She started to cry, and tremble. I wrapped my arms around her trying to comfort her. After a few minutes of crying, Luna calmed down and said, "I understand J.C., I too missed my family when I was banished to the moon for a thousand years."

"But don't worry I'll be back, to be here and with you, "I said, then I kissed her, "I promise."

"Alright, I'll go and get my sister, "she said.

"And I'll gather Twilight and her friends, "we agreed and we went to the things we said we would do.

I quickly found them, still celebrating at Twilight's house. After I explained what I was going to do, everypony started getting teary, but I reassure them that I will be back.

There was a knock on the door on the door and Twilight opened it, to reveal Luna and Celestia there standing. After they entered and Twilight closed, Celestia spoke looking sad, "so J.C. you want to go home? "

"Yes I want see my family and to see if they are fine, "I confirmed.

Celestia nodded and said, "very well, are you alright with this Luna? "Celestia asked to Luna.

Luna nodded and said, "Yes I am alright with this, and anyway we will see him soon again."

Celestia nodded, Luna and Celestia both started a spell, which circled around me with lights of white and blue, until I couldn't see anypony else I closed my eyes, and then there was a bright flash. I opened my eyes expecting me to be at home, but found myself still in Twilight's home.

"What happened? Why am I still here? "I asked Celestia, whom has the look of shock.

"I don't know what happened, it should've worked.

Then I realized something, "do you think that Discord did something to me? "I asked Celestia.

"I don't know let me see, "she closed her eyes and her horn glowed and her aura surrounded me, after a few seconds, she canceled her spell and looked at me shocked, "J.C. I sensed the familiar magic of Equestria, but I also sensed the magic of Discord, and since he is bound in stone, you are bounded here."

I stood there shocked of what I heard, after a few seconds I collapsed to the ground crying that I will never see my family.

"But there might be another way J.C., "Luna said.

"What? "I asked feeling a little hope.

"You see, when I learned the viewing to see you, it was written by Starswirl the Bearded, there was also a spell that I couldn't understand, so I didn't bother with it, but I think it could help."

She took a deep breath and continued, "Starswirl the Bearded has many names, the Star Traveler, and Merlin the Great."

"What did you say Merlin? "

Luna nodded and said, "Yes I did, why?"

"Because Merlin is mentioned in our legends, it was said that he was the greatest wizard to ever lived, you don't think that those two are the same."

"It is possible, let me get the book, "she concentrated, there was a small pop, and there was the book floating, opened, "see here it is, but as you can see it is written in a unknown language, "see handed me the book, and saw the spell.

"Luna I can read this, "I said, surprised to see it written in English and not in Equestrian.

"Really, but our greatest mages, isn't able to understand it, why can you? "Luna asked confused.

"Because it is written in English, my language, and there is a note in it, "I answered her.

"Well what does it say? "Twilight asked.

"It says, to those who are reading this means you have a human there with you and that person wants to go home, but can't or wants to but can't leave, that is why I created this spell, so that person can go home and can also stay here in Equestria, but that person is required to one thing, and it is to become a pony themselves, but be warned this spell is created to be used once, Starswirl the Bearded or if a human is there Merlin the Great."

I looked up from the book and saw that everypony has the look of well I don't really know what the look that everypony has on.

"Wow, Starswirl the Bearded sure was the greatest wizard to ever live, "said Twilight.

"Indeed he was, now let's get this spell started, "I said feeling relived that I can see my family again.

"But J.C., are you sure you want to go through with, "asked Luna worried.

"Yes, I am sure, I want to be with you, but I also want to go home. With this spell, that is possible."

"Alright then, what does it require for the spell? "Celestia asked.

I read the main requirements and read them, "The Elements of Harmony and the sun and the moon, "I said as I list them out.

"What in land sake does it mean the sun and moon? "Applejack asked.

"I guess it means at sunrise, "I said answering her.

"That doesn't leave us much time then, "Celestia said as she looked out the window.

"Already then, "I said, "I say that we should do this outside, "as I looked at the spell again.

"Good thing that the Elements are already here, "said Rainbow Dash.

After moments of preparation, we all stood outside in a field outside of Ponyville, with Twilight and friends surrounding me with their Elements, with Luna and Celestia in air ready for the word.

I had with me, all the things I brought here. I took a breath and said, "Alright let's start, "I said to everypony. Twilight and her friends powered up the magic of Harmony, while Celestia and Luna did their spells.

The results were quick for I was surrounded by the lights of the Elements of Harmony, I concentrated of what I was to do, when finally the sun and the moon were in the sky, there was a bright flash, I felt like my bones were bending into immpossible angles, and I also felt like I was pulled in two different directions.

I hope this works, I thought as darkness surrounds me.

Luna's POV

As the tornado of light disappears, there where J.C. was standing is a gray coated, sliver mane pony laying there. As I flew down to the pony on the ground, I cautiously step up to the pony and nuzzled it side and said, "J.C. is that still you, "I asked.

The pony stirred and got and I noticed that he has wings and a horn, the pony said in a voice I know too well, "did somepony get the license plate on that tornado, "he said confused and dizzy.

"It is you, "I cried out.

I hugged him and started kissing him. After I pulled away I had tear of joy in my eyes, "I am glad you are still here,"

"So am I, "he said.

OMG this was a hard chapter to write and I feel like I went to fast on it, so please Read and Review. I like to see the reviews so I know that I can fix something in my story, if somepony finds something wrong, and also thank you for enjoying my story.