I was thinking of adding a new character tell me what you think. Always Looking for review. please help me find small errors so that I can make the story more enjoyable. I wish I could pump out the Chapters faster but school gets in the way. PLEASE FORGIVE ME rainbow dash fans
Chapter 4 The first contact
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Fredrick arrived back at his Me 262 and looked around and thought "good they have not found my Me 262."
Then Fredrick heard the sound of flapping overhead. Fredrick looked up and saw a pony with a rainbow following it.
Fredrick thought to himself "Oh no, they have found me."
Fredrick jump into a nearby bush and hid.
The pony that was in the air did a 180 and flew in the direction it came from.
Fredrick then breathed a sigh of relief.
Then Fredrick heard voices coming from the bush on the same side as him. The voices said "Twilight, this is where I saw the large metal bird," said the first voice.
The next voice said "Ok, everyone split up and searched the area for clues."
Fredrick looked around and saw all the ponies in a circle. Fredrick thought to himself "they look like horses dipped in food coloring."
As he sat there the ponies were spreading out looking for him while the purple pony circled and study the plane.
Fredrick thought to himself "I hope she does not scratch the paint," while Fredrick was sitting in the bush he felt something hard against his back and heard a voice "y'all get up slowly now and get out of the bush."
Fredrick thought it was a gun so he slowly rose up and walked out of the bush.
Fredrick was then surrounded be the ponies. They looked at him and examined him.
Fredrick thought "Wait, a second how could hold a gun they have hoofs."
Fredrick then swiftly placed his hands down into his pockets and pulled out a flare and lit it.
The ponies then jumped away when Fredrick pulled out the flare. Fredrick said" Zurück sie Kreaturen." The ponies looked at him and were giving him the confused look.
Fredrick then threw the flare at the ponies and ran.
Fredrick said to himself "they must not be too bright and I got hide from these creatures."
As Fredrick ran further into the forest while the ponies were confused.
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Twilight then said with a scared voice "Is everybody ok?"
everybody replied "yes.
" Twilight looked around and saw that Fluttershy was missing. Twilight then said "where is Fluttershy?"
Fluttershy then said "I am ok I just flew up into the tree after the creature pulled out that thing." Fluttershy then floated down from the tree.
Twilight then took the flare and put out the flame. Twilight then said "how can a creature summon fire without having a horn?" everyone shrugged.
Twilight then noticed that Rainbow Dash was missing. Twilight then heard a crash and some struggling. They all ran to the noise of the struggling.
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Fredrick was running away from those creatures. He ran further into the forest the forest seemed if it wanted to capture him.
Fredrick kept running then, but then he heard the sound of flapping behind him. Fredrick looked over his shoulder and saw a cyan pony chasing after him. Fredrick kept running harder and harder though the forest while the cyan pony was gaining on him.
Fredrick then felt something push against his back.
Fredrick tripped and fell into the ground. As Fredrick was falling he grabbed something soft as he fell on to the ground. Fredrick had fallen face forward into a sand pit.
Fredrick pushed himself out of the sand pit and wiped his eyes. When he had wiped the sand out of his eyes he saw the cyan pony 5 yards away from him on the ground not moving.
Fredrick jumped up and surveyed the area
. Fredrick thought "what is going on maybe I could get some information from that pony."
Fredrick walked to the cyan pony as it lay on the ground. Fredrick poked it with his foot and said "Warum sind sie ermüdet mich zu fangen, und wo sind sie aus auch was sind Sie?"
after Fredrick said that the cyan jumped up and tried to tackle Fredrick. Fredrick had barely stepped out of way his ribs took some of the tackle; tackle had not taken down Fredric k. Fredrick then punted the cyan pony as it hovered in the air. The pony landed on the ground with a loud thud.
Fredrick then pulled out his Luger 08 and loaded a blank clip into the gun.
Fredrick started running again after a couple of seconds of running he heard the sound of galloping
. Fredrick shot a couple blanks into the air to deter the approaching ponies.
The sound of the galloping had seemed to stop, but Fredrick took no chances he kept running and running until he was on the edge of the forest. He ran though the one of the clearings to find a guard in his way.
Fredrick fired a couple blanks into the air as he ran by the guard.
Fredrick then found a little house on the edge of the forest. Fredrick thought to himself "this should be a nice spot to hide."
Fredrick ran towards the house and crawled through the ground window. Fredrick proceeded to find a good spot to hide. Fredrick ran upstairs and found a wardrobe. Fredrick climbed into the wardrobe and fell asleep.
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Twilight and the rest ran after the sound of the crash.
When they got to the crash site they found Rainbow Dash on the ground with a big bruise on the right side of her body.
Twilight exclaimed "Rainbow Dash are you OK?"
Rainbow Dash got and said "I am fine," Rainbow Dash took a step and fell over.
Twilight used her magic to levitate Rainbow Dash on to Applejack's back.
Twilight said "Applejack take Rainbow Dash to the library and place her on the bed be sure to call for a doctor."
Rainbow Dash protested "I can help you catch that insect there is no need for me to go to the library."
Twilight responded firmly "Rainbow Dash you have been bashed up you need to get a doctor."
Rainbow Dash then said "but…" Twilight gave her evil eye and Rainbow Dash became quiet as Applejack took Rainbow Dash to the Library. Twilight watched Applejack carry Rainbow Dash away from the area.
Twilight turned to the rest of the group and said "Ok, It is time we capture that scum bag," every one agreed with Twilight including Fluttershy. They then galloped after the creature.
They could see the creature they were gaining on it until then heard terrible noises coming from the creature. They sound like lighting with its boom.
Fluttershy jumped on to the ground. Every one stopped and looked after Fluttershy.
Fluttershy said "girls it is getting away."
Pinkie Pie then said "we care more about you then a creature." Fluttershy blushed for a second and hid behind her pink mane.
Twilight then said "let's go back before it gets too late."
Rarity said" that sounds like a fabulous idea, I hate this forest."
They walked all the way to the edge of the forest.
Then they went their separate ways and returned to their homes.
Twilight hurried home to find that only a note was on her desk.
Dear Twilight
The Doctor has taken Rainbow Dash into the hospital. The Doctor said that Rainbow Dash should
be fine. Also that she will back with us in 1 day. So do not worry.
Your friend Applejack
Twilight breathed a sigh of relief as she walked up to bed and fell asleep.