With a snap, a flash, and the sizzle of ozone, the scientists gaped at their creation. It had four hooves and wore goggles. "'Sup," she greeted, stepping down from her stool with a swish of her tail. "This place looks kinda cool."
This is a tale told for Charlie, one of my lovely patrons. Let's get scientific, and turn up the volume!
Oh, this is *intriguing*~ Vinyl's amped up, and an absolute delight!
yes this pleases me, continue~
A wubbable start.
Should be
They deflated
It lives!
Oh god I love this. She’s just so cute and I love the humans’ interactions with her. For now at least…everything is wholesome and they don’t want to harm her. Not everyday I read a story where they didn’t create a pony scientifically for malicious purposes. 10/10 approve. I wonder where we’re going next.
This science pony needs more details. How did they create this pony? I would like to see their research files.
The song Vinyl and Kyle are listening to...
Do y'all see what's missing there?
This and the following two paragraphs are repeats.
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These glitches got us ponies. We need to be careful with them.
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The new pony replicant plague shall soon be upon us all and it all started with a 1 that should have been a 0!
Alright, they got the funds to make more ponies. Will they all be Vinyl or will Octavia be next?
If the researchers really want to figure out the science behind all this, they should replicate Twilight Sparkle!
Is touching a unicorns horn like fondling a mare's private parts?
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It's like someone grabbing your shoulder while you're in the middle of focusing on your arm. It can startle you.
Are any of the antagonists from the show ever going to appear in this story?
Sounds like they got a star trek type replicator that can make ponies. Computer must be getting data files from MLP videos to download into the pony.
They could make a fortune producing real living MLP character replicas for all those MLP fans. There could be ethical issues, is a pony a person or just an animal pet?
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The story, as is, is 'scientists oops a pony into being. Science and friendship occurs!'
Would a MLP villain showing up later fit that?
This is extra, just hanging out between paragraphs.
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Fixed.
What an awesome idea for a story! I found it in the "Also Liked" thing after the new chapter of "Rainbow Bridges."
How very appropriate with 420 Day coming up. I fully intend to observe the holiday. 🙃 🫠 ☮
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It's a Vinyl Scratch story, random beats are to be expected!
A nice chapter, but it feels like it was posted without being proofread. One example is this said tag:
...name," the man replied...
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Fixed. That one wasn't mine(this is a collab).
Should be
show yourself, as
This has been very good so far. But something seems to have gone wrong towards the end there with several paragraphs posting twice and caused me to no end. Must be similar to how Herrington felt at the mention of Equestria.
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Which paragraphs are repeating?
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This whole part is in there twice.
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Dang pastas and their copies. Should be fixed.
I am having a little trouble following the IT tech talk. Vinyl was created by an AI that Kyle had uploaded with Pony graphic files, making Kyle the "Dad". Did I get that right?
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Basically, but the AI didn't 'make' Vinyl, just was involved in messing with the original experiment, and Vinyl happened.
Come on, let the pony make like a dog, head out the window, tongue lolling, the wind in the mane! Can't wait to see the pony dance. All the girls will want to dance with her, since a cute pony is irresistible.
Aww, that's what I was gonna post! I'll just have to get creative.
ROAD TRIP!!!!
This deserves way more views and likes! It's such a fun thing to read!
Seeing an Equestrian pony compared to Terran horses is really a shocker!
Good fun chapter.
Music and ponies is an even better combo than what they ordered!