If there's one type of curse that was the worst to go through in everyday life, I would be the curse of boredom. And Night Fury was taking a heavy hit from that curse. For the past few days, Twilight Sparkle has noticed his unusually dreary mood and felt bad for him. So she decided to take matters into her own hooves and get help from her fellow royals. Through careful discussion and multiple game ideas, Cadence came up with a game from her childhood called "Tickle Tag". The other princesses approved of the idea and sent an invitation from The Crystal Empire to Fury's home in Ponyville in an effort to cheer him up. Would this new game from old times be able to cheer him up? Let's find out!
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Flora Blossom,
I’m happy to see that you enjoyed this story. I helped NightFurySpeedey8156 with the writing. We had a blast creating it!
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We sure did!
Greetings. I have read and reviewed this story on behalf of "My Little Reviews & Feedback". You can find the review HERE.
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I'm glad you found my story entertaining. I will admit, some things were very tossed in as a bit of a personal satisfaction factor and some of the tags are unnecessary, but I wasn't thinking about that during writing. As for the lore bit, Night Fury is connected to another story (To Equestria And Beyond) that I've been working on for the paß couple of years and this was just a fun side story I decided to throw together that's not really connected to it. So if you'd like to know who he is, I'd recommend giving that story a read if you so choose.
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As I have mentioned in the review, I did do a little bit of research in order to know who and what Night Fury looked like. Thank you, though.
However, I still stand by my rule of thumb: Describe your major characters. It helps readers visualize who said characters are supposed to be, since they're going to be spending the majority of the readthrough along side them. Even in short/side stories, this should be encouraged. So, yeah, I highly recommend that you put it into practice in future writing projects, even if it's in a small scale project such as "Tickle Time".