We all know what the Hell happens in these stories. I go to a convention dressed as my OC I purchase some weapons and other stuff from the merchant and I end up in an alternate universe version of equestria. With my arrival things will be sure to get chaotic.
For those of you who dont know the show this will be a crossover The TV show chaotics being one of them.
You might wanna get someone to help with your spelling / grammar.
I agree with displacedwriter about the spelling and grammar but it's still good
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Got any recommendations?
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Look around for groups dedicated to offering proof writers / editers, or perhaps post a topic the Displaced and see if anyone responds.
Here you go https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
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Thank you
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Np
I wonder when the next chapter will come out
Can't wait to see what happens in chapter 2
Capitailize Well and Leshy sorry I missed them
I will be watching.
Great chapter man keep it up
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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You and me both
Nice chapter I really liked all the work that went into it
Mam I really love how you included spike to help Fredbear during the fight, I'm really liking the story so far keep up the amazing work.
Great story so far. The only thing that caught my attention was, is it suppose to be “mugic” or “magic”? I saw it a couple of time in chapters 1&2. But can’t remember (even thought I read it just now ) in chapter 3. I did like the inclusion of Spike in the fight. I also hope you can keep that in the story .
Can’t wait to see the next chapter .
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From the chaotic show mugics are pentagonal shaped magical items that can be used during battle and when using them they play a sort of music while at the same time casting magical spells or powers hence why they are called mugics at least that's what I could remember from watching the show as a kid
Fantastic story so far looking forward to a new chapter