Vinyl and Octavia have moved into their apartment and have their first day of college ahead of them. Except it’s online, and Vinyl is taking full advantage of it. Octavia is uncooperative with the shenanigans that occur from Vinyl.
As a writer you ask yourself to dream while you're awake. As an editor you ask yourself how to change a story while leaving it the same.
Vinyl and Octavia have moved into their apartment and have their first day of college ahead of them. Except it’s online, and Vinyl is taking full advantage of it. Octavia is uncooperative with the shenanigans that occur from Vinyl.
should i lead you on a trail as to what is incorrect here?