This story is a sequel to I could leave
Starlight is but one of the many ponies involved in assisting Andy in not being a huge idiot, but she is the one he seems to have a bit of a soft spot for. Friends are a very nice thing to have.
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Cackling Moron
"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.
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A friend in need is a friend indeed.
I liked this one.
Also, moties
♫ But I love you
More than I wanted to
There's no point in trying to pretend ♪
Thank you for this one. The first story was good on its own but a continuation showing the growth of the character was really appreciated.
This story really supports my belief that Starlight is the most adorable pony on the show. And the world was robbed of her adorableness for quite awhile (I blame Grogar for this, somehow
) until Twilight saved her.
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Dammit, you got there first.
Omigawd so many "awwwwwww's" in this chapter. This was a helluva cute read. Love it!
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So you're saying it was Grogar's fault that Sunburst got sent off to Canterlot. Got it.
I have to say this, I love that you didn’t bring up Starlight’s past once in either story. Too often do writers try and short cut Starlight’s relationships by injecting her past actions to create an understanding. I really appreciate it not being here.
9687038 Methinks he doth protest too much.
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I think it slipped my mind, honestly...
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No! Lies! I protest just enough! You're all in on it!
Infamy! Infamy! They've all got it in for me!
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I like to slip in an obscure reference now and then. I'm subtle like that.
I think I'd been reading about it at the time I wrote that line and I was going to be damned if I cut it out.
She should've invited Rarity for that part
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She would probably be the better batter.
Is it just me or did anyone else imagine Andy as Andy Dwyer?
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Closer to Pierson's Puppeteers, I would have thought. Moties are bipedal.
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I meant more in the "super good at one thing" sense.
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Yes, that makes sense. It's good to see someone with a classical education!
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Well I wouldn't go that far. For my next trick a pony kicks a dude clear through the chest and deploys some kind of superconductor-eating bacteria...or something.
How wholesome.
Much better! Still doesn't explain why he was so adamant about being a bum, but a great sequel.
I mean, thinking about it, yeah. At least four - Alicorn, Pegasus, Earth and Unicorn. More if you count Crystal ponies and possibly seaponies? Although leaving food and things-to-be-mended out at night would just confuse them.
It can get interesting for unicorns when they first start dating.
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This was pretty sweet. Have my upvote!
This and "I could leave" is hands down, some of my personal favorite short stories of all time! honestly these 2 stories were absolute masterworks of character. you portrayed starlight amazingly and put so much character into andy in such a small amount of words, they're dynamic feels so natural and entertaining to watch, and there was a lot of "da'www" moments ngl.
Great job!
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Mental health issues is my guess...
Even the narrator...
These two stories were amazing! I always wanted to read a story about a human who rejected the ponies help, and the delightful narration and Starlight being the focus was a great bonus.
I absolutely love their dynamic!