In a time long ago, in a land clouded with war, chaos, darkness and corruption, a last stand against a powerful enemy becomes a fatalistic error, as the "Father" of the Vampire race is cast into "The Gate", a portal supposedly leading to a plane of existence inhabited by extra-dimensional demons.
The governing laws of fate in that universe, however, had other plans for the ancient.
Now he exists within a lush and vibrant new realm, but still carries the darkness of his curse with him. Will he, the Father of the Vampire race, be able to adjust and accommodate himself amongst the peaceful populous of ponies, or will he perchance become a perilous predator to prey on the equine kind?
(To those who don't know, this is a Crossover with Legacy of Kain. Specifically, the end of the fourth game released in the series. *dodges thrown objects* I know that particular installment isn't the greatest, but with capable hands, i can make a decent story out of it with MLP: FiM. Have faith in me... or not. Regardless, i hope you enjoy.)
(Note: Yes, i know, it's not exactly very funny right now, but I PROMISE I will ramp up the comedy in future chapters)
(Note 2: I don't mind if you give me a thumbs down. It's disheartening, yes, but I ultimately don't mind. HOWEVER, I would prefer that you express WHY you gave me and my story a thumbs down. I can't grow as a writer if I don't know what I did wrong. So please, if you thumb it down, explain why you did. It will help me greatly. Thank you.)
I'm not familiar with this Legacy of Kain but it seems good so far. I will be tracking this.
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Thanks. BTW, i have already uploaded a second chapter (or, the 1st official chapter). I hope you enjoy that too.
I for one am glad he told the truth.
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Janos has been an honest vampire... even if he is reluctant to tell the whole story.
i love the "Legacy of Kain" series. defianatly reading this soon.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_grin.png
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You know, the reason why i am writing this story is because there is a SEVERE lack of LoK stories on here. Many HALO stories, DMC stories, Fallout stories, etc, but i've only seen 3 Lok stories thus far...
1057183 I agree, there needs to be more LoK stories. And I just read yours. This is really good, cant wait to see where this goes.
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Thanks. Hey, if you have any friends into LoK, or that like a decent crossover story, or just want somehting new while they wait for their updates, tell them about Miracle for the Cursed! I'd loved to get more readers that could potentially give me more positive/negative feedback.
1059998 definitely. this story deserves so much more attention, even though it is just getting started.
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Just getting started is WAY too true. I'm working on Chapter 2 (the official one), and Janos is gonna be heading for Ponyville, to, ya know, get used to equine life...
1060037 Events shall ensue.
Excellent...dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
1055537 if you aren't familiar with the series, you should check it out. it is really good.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png
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Oh, you don't even know the HALF of it. >: 3
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*Evil laughter*
Just a minor spelling error here,
after I raise the sun, of coarse." She got
It's of course, not coarse.
Love the story, can't wait to see more!
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Thank you, and thank you for the heads up. It's hard to catch all of the grammar/spelling errors when your zipping back and forth between chapters, trying to keep things consistent.
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BTW, i posted a brand new chapter. I hope you like it.
Yay, new chapter!
good chapter i really liked it hopes you will continue with this story it is really intresting and funny!
Yesh! I ahm pleashed! Seriously, good work. I love it.
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Thank you.
awesome story awesome chapter keep it up
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Thanks. I'm doing so as we speak...
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Awesome
I wounder if i should upload one of my storys that i have worked on?
to see what people thinks about it, it is about nightmares!
and a char that i created named Nightmare!
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Doesn't hurt to try...
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Problem is thou i think i need help with editing it and i dont really know how to upload a storry i mostly just read them!
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I'd be inclined to help, but i'm rather busy with my own activities, including this fic. I suggest you ask around, maybe get some brony friends to proofread your stories...
Also, technically, you don't upload stories here, like you do in Fanfiction.net. Instead, you create the story, and then write the chapters on the site as they give you a template to do so. I suggest you go over the FAQ for details.
Alrighty, first, you are an excellent story-teller, based on this chapter, I would suggest just a few things;
1) be a bit more consistent with the creativity in your vocabulary. It is definitely there, and it's good, just in certain bits, use synonyms, one can only read "spikes" so many times, try spines, thorns, protrusions, etc.
2) your spelling is almost perfect, I only came across one error, even so, you could have had 100% rather than 99% don't ever count on spell check alone, reread, carefully.
3) be a bit more clear, while you definitely can do it, it's just a matter of making it more consistent. Unless however you want to make it obscure as part of your artistic freedoms, that's fine. Just a suggestion.
Overall, I enjoyed reading it, and can't wait to see the next few chapters!
The first chapter is fantastic, I don't know what LoK is, but your story gives enough detail that I don't NEED to know, that in itself, is quite something.
I really enjoyed reading this, and based on this chapter, my only suggestion is to, whenever writing, reread it closely to catch things you may not have seen before.
Final comment: you are really talented at setting a scene!
Well, your skill increases with each chapter! I enjoyed this one quite a bit, and it seems to me to be in it's most perfect form! :D
This chapter was also 99% perfect to my eyes, just one small thing
"Uschtenheim, the small village that he WOULD unfortunately had to visit when he needed to feed" I'd suggest omitting that and adding a "had", I would change it like this: "Uschtenheim, the small village that he had unfortunately been forced to visit when he needed to feed"
That flows much better, and there would no longer be any conflict of tense.
A very enjoyable read!
This chapter was amazing as well, all I suggest is carefully rereading it for errors, some things may be spelled right, but in the wrong place, for example, you could easily write "foe" and mean "for". Aside from that, it is a splendid story!
Another fantastic chapter! Again proofreading is key to getting rid of all errors! Still, fantastic story, I enjoy it!
Wonderful story so far! I just engulfed all of these chaps after you posted your comment on The Last Brony Gets His Wish. I became curious and got quite the treat out of it.
I await eagerly for the next chapter. P.S.: If you like Vampires, you should check out my story Feral. 
I hear good things about it.
1461364 Thank you. I'll be sure to take a look at it. :3
1461372 Much obliged!!
Keep up the awesome work, Brony!
1461376 You too, fellow brony.
I smell a bit of the Hylden Lord in him.
1815916 In who, pray tell?
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Janos, he was possessed a bit by the Hylden Lord. this was after when he and Raziel witnessed the pillars being destroyed.
1815926 The possession ended when Janos was sent to "The Mass" to be tortured and starved for years on end. Actually, the Hylden Lord will be part of the story later, but not in the way you're considering...
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Okay:) Just remembered it thank you for bringing it up. Only thing I have seen Janos did nobily was when Kain in Blood Omen 2 was fighting the Hylden Lord and he stalled the Hylden Lord a bit at the Hylden Gate.
But all in all, can't wait to see where this goes.
1815939 I believe i pretty much retold that scene in the prologue chapter of this fic. Anyways, thanks for the comments. I'll be sure to try to get up a few more chapters later...
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Np, I thought it would be when Raziel's former self killed Janos:
But still good to see a bit of BO2 in here:)
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... I have a question. And be honest. Did you read the prologue chapter of this fic? Or, did you skip ahead to chapter 1?
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I read the Prologue, know it was in Hylden Gate where Kain fought.
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Ok, just checking. I've know people to skill the introduction of a story... hell, i've done it once (big mistake on my end). And the way you've considered how the Hylden Lord was possessing janos, or how Raziel's human self slayed Janos would be involved in the story somehow (which is only briefly touched upon in the visions Janos has...
2199802 Hey, don't be sad. I have like, 3 chapters in the works for this fic, and 1 other chapter idea after that. I just have to, ya know, get around to doing them?