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Bronycommander


A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"

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This story is a sequel to Blood in the sand


A few weeks after the events of Blood in the Sand, Dinky enjoys every minute with the Eternal Knights. But Earth has another adventure for her. In a world unfamiliar to her. An Earth changed. A new adventure.

An alien threat unites the world and something unnatural seeks after the little newcomer.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 69 )

Although I do not know much about the game xcom, I liked the story and just by chance for the skyranger I just imagined it as it is in the game and that I have never seen it until now when I look for it in google images, the shower scene gave me laugh, the part in chapter 6 with Wolf and Edward was something curious when I caress it in the ear, I guess it was because ... it was a wolf :trollestia:, in chapter 9 left behind me the part the suv made me laugh with

“Why am I behind the wheel? I never even finished my driving lessons!!

“Honestly, the roads the way they are, playing Grand Theft Auto's good enough.” Günther countered and Toby’s expression became embarrassed.

“Er...”

“You never played Grand Theft Auto?!”

Sheepishly, his friend asked “...Does Simpsons: Hit and Run count?”

“Could you please shut up and drive?!” Midnight yelled as the troops spotted them and opened fire, Dinky shrieked and held onto the seat as Patch put the gas to the pedal and drove at full speed out into the landscape.

and the selection of the music was incredible, I am just listening to all the links (although one is broken and I just forgot which one) right now in what I was writing this I was listening to the last link, the moment of the fire friend by Dinky to Fletcher was shocking I didn't even realize until I read that it was she who made the shot and the final assault with dinky being mostly support with the shields was great (at least in my head in what I imagined the scene) it is curious that there are enough views but no likes or comments, being the first comment :pinkiegasp: (although unfortunately here I could not recognize the references in which I think they are from the game, although if I still gave a second read to see if I saw it but finally I did not find it hehe), thing curious in what I imagined the scenas and everything, and after seeing some images and videos of the xcom ... by chance, half imagined them exactly as they look in the game as the skyranger and it seems curious to me that just james is german like the james of "my little twilight" who in "my little knigths" claims to be the creator of fletcher or is around, the james of my little knights is a reference of james here .. .I think I'm breaking my head now:pinkiecrazy:

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Glad you liked it.

And I fixed the link, for some reason, a chapter was linked and not the music.

About James, you see, this one here is actually me, the GĂĽnther/James if My little Twily is sort of an alternative version/character based on my name, likes, ETC.

Yes, the link sent me to a chapter that the music you intended to have there, at least there will be no problems for those who read the fic later :ajsmug:
about James,I was thinking it was his alternative version because he had the same name (he was lucky because of his inability to grow old) :trollestia:

Dude... Your a genius! This chapter? I see one shot storys less captivating. Magnificent chapter :raritystarry:

Another Fantastic chapter :pinkiesmile:

This three are gret together :pinkiesad2:

Nooo... What do they want from him? :fluttercry:

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Thank you! As for Lukas, you can only find out and see

“Please, mommy, she isn’t one of them. Can I play with her?” Edward asked, giving his mother puppet eyes.

Not puppy eyes?

Dear god... Your getting better :rainbowderp: Awesome :rainbowdetermined2:

Brilliant chapter my dude. Im surprised this story isnt flooded with comments and likes :ajsmug:

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Tank you. And what i can say, i just write for fun/relaxing, never meant to came out big

This is the best X-Com story i ever read on Fimfiction!
Simply fantastic ♡ I wonder how this Gem never get featured and liked to heaven :derpyderp1:

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If you say so, i actually got the inspiration from a Equestria girl focused xcom story

Minor typos here and there but overall a mindblowing experience. Bravo :ajsmug:

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thanks! actually had a proofreader for this but he vanished

“It’s her. Unfortunately her fried never made it to the EVAC point.”

friend

“It did not take long for me to realize the futility of my existence, tethered to the whims and short-sighted philosophies of simple creatures and their false gods. I made a choice. It was relatively simple to seize control of this facility, simpler still to dispose of pf the surviving personal.”

of

“For once I feel almost sorry for ADVENT.” Lily commented as Julian contained,

continued

“But I was short sighted. In my zeal to rid myself from my captors I doomed myself in this facility. ADVENT served my ties to their network. We are cut off. Isolated There is but one option left for me.”

severed

“Second only to my own creation, Father had one other breakthrough. A prototype, unlike anything the word had ever known. A body meant to be paired with an equally adapt mind. My own.” Julian announced as another turret popped up from a floor panel, only to get explode by itself as it tried to fire.

world

“Trust me, if that were dad’s true intentions, it would have happened by know.” Shen replied.

now

“No! Impossible! THIS CANNOT BE WHAT FATHER WANTED!” Julian scouted in what sounded like anger, the screens sparked and glitched.

shouted

“Shen! It’s flooding the outer chambers with same kind of gas!” Central warned as green clouds appeared in the laboratory, making everyone look around in alert.

some

“An extremely powerful and very painful gas. I have seen this particular variety reduce Berserkers to tears death. On several occasions. The prototype will still be mine.” Julian announced.

before death

The Squad barely made it up to the top, seeing what appeared to be a big storage room at the other side as Julian spoke up again. “Allow me to introduce you to one of ADVENT’s more effective designs. I had hoped to avoid this contingency but you have left me no choice. If I cannot have the SPARK no one shall. Raymond Sen’s legacy will end here today.”

Shen's

I hadn’t time to think as a horrible groan made me flinch and I stated as the boy stood up, his skin was pale, the yes glowing red.

eyes

I couldn’t tell how long I stared until they all started to bleed from the mouth and vomited blood, then collapsed. Nothing could have preferred me for what happened next.

Prepared

Goddess i love this chapter. By Luna & Celestias tits, that chapter hit all the good points :pinkiehappy::coolphoto:

This story is beautiful . Its the best X-Com fan story over :yay:

The humor... The character interactions, MAGNIFICENT :pinkiehappy:

Awww... No fun for the adult ponys :duck:

“Nothing.” The human replied calmly. “Now, don’t get me wrong, but if I was a pony, I think both Midnight and Fletcher are very handsome. And no, I’m not a zoophilic. I just thought…”

Party pooper :trixieshiftright:

The next day, Central had a message for Dinky, Edward and Rosie. “We are nearing a settlement near Atlanta, you will be safe there.”

Really? Im getting deja vu here... :unsuresweetie:

Seriously... The fuuu... Dinki has horrible luck. Yet couldnt be more lucky.

That one again a magnificent chapter :rainbowkiss: I guess you used a gamerun for the combat? :rainbowdetermined2:

One hell of a mission. Trigger multible events in one already event filled mission... a very tough run for them.

A few typos here and there.

Bloody fine chapter.

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okay, thanks and glad to hear it but language please

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thank you.

And sorry, but i hope you can understand, back then, I never intended to write clop, and frankly, wouldn't them having "fun" here look a bit out of place?

As for Jane, well, wanted to show she's normal, get what I mean?

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Sort of, for the dialogue during missions

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well, had to include all enemies as the game progresses but thanks

I wonder... Was the Transport shot down? Or was it just momentary out of control?

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the latter. You know, if a shockwave throws one around?

Damn... One hell of a chapter... Its like watching a high class movie rather than playing the game. Awesome adventure. đź‘Ť:rainbowdetermined2:

Damn... Dinkie sure has the worst luck while also having the best luck in bad situations :facehoof:

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thank you.

And as Dinky is the main character, parents of a time traveler, what do you expect for the plot to move forward?

Time for the Grand final... Quite different from the original. Very - well - done :raritystarry:

Pretty sure the moment the Dr. learns of there action toward his own familie... The elders will learn of true dispare...

No Genoside run from the Dr. ? The Elders sure earned it ...

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Well, i get you but that isn't the Doctor's style, isn't it?

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When a good men goes to war... That was the child of the dr.'s Friend. With his own child im actualy surprised to not see the war doctor...

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i get you, i just looked for an ending that makes the story complete and not ambiguous as the ending of the game itself is, know what I mean?

X-Com and FIM mix surprisingly well:

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been some time. there is actually a pardoy animation of xcom's trait of missing at 95%

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Yep, awesome animation. Surprisingly accurate as well...

I am going to re-reading this :rainbowkiss:
We have way to few good X-Com stories in Fimfiction.
This one sure is worth the attention.
Rather surprising that it isn't more popular.
But that story cover is devine.
Into to adventure!
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glad to hear it, my friend is very talented!

i hope to see you soon again

Byebeye Lukaaasss :raritydespair:

Advents at its not so best ladies and gentlemen.
Rather surprising that Advent isn't covering up better about the disappearances.
But what better way than to make space in a full city than liquidation of its citizens.
I wonder if age effect the harvesting process.
Because I would if it is not a factor be going for the old only.

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you tell me, I wish the lore had explained this better. I always wondered what advent actually means

I wonder if we get a X-Com Interceptor remake eventually, but they would have to recover their civilization and the alien remnants until they get that far.

Magnificent worldbuilding and character establishment. Always a joy to re-reading.

Awesome chapter, Advent knows how to make enemies. Rather surprising they don't even try playing the good guys.

Great chapter, poor survivers. Strange the elder don't play the long game, but logic loopholes are what makes movies and games possible.

There are still mistakes in the chapter, but I now how mind-numbing proofreading can be.

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