Shiro Hikari, a scientist, and the first man who made a thesis that could only be called the work of a madman. But maybe he isn't insane after all, maybe he's actually a genius? Sadly when he was about to prove his thesis true, an assistant messed something up which caused an explosion, which would have killed him if the scientist wouldn't have pushed him away, but the mad man disappeared the moment the could of dust cleared, never to be seen again.
Meanwhile, in Equestria, Sombra seems to have somehow survived, again. But this time, he does something else, he gets an ally. How? With the help of summoning, of course! But he sure didn't expect to summon what he did...
The cover art is something I found on google, the credit for it goes to whoever the hell made it. Don't ask me about who the fuck is in it besides Sombra, because I have no god damn idea, I just like how they look like.
Jajajajajjajjaja! Ah~ more! This story looks like it will be cool so dont stop.
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New chapter's gonna be out whenever I am not distracted by random shit and actually write. Which might take a while.
8196796 You might want to get an editor.
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Why do you think so?
8196928 Read what you wrote and you'll see.
If I hear that your one of those grama nazi I will fine you and kill you. The story I good as it is.
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I did. Multiple times. I even asked a friend to read it and he said it was fine. I, myself did not find any problems with it. But if you did, please point them out. If you consider that the mistakes make it unreadable then I apologise for the inconvenience, but english is not my main language and I am self taught. Either way. Have a nice day.
amazing story . I look forward of read the neeext chapter
Where is the next chapter? I need it to live goddammit! (A slight exaggeration)
The story is not written very well but the jerky movement of the plot shows just enough moderation to make it entertaining. I'll definitely be following this.
Sssonic2 made this pic awhile back. The mare on the right is a fire queen by the name of Pandora.
need more
8196985 Self-taught English? You're better than some native English speakers!
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2 words. Video Games.
Pretty sure that drawing is courtesy of ss2sonic, look them up. Not 100%, but it IS his style.
Whipped Sombra? This is gonna be good.
I like this. 👌
Need............More.......plez
Ouch, shorthanded. And the help is truly not what it once was, how will she survive ?. I hope the arm reforms. XD
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Or you know, Sombra could make her a black crystal arm.
I was about to say a fart joke, but it stinks.
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Shut up Owl.
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MAKE ME. MUAHAHAHAHAH.
Misspelling in the short description. "Cristal" should be "Crystal".
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Fixed. Thanks for telling me, didn't notice.
Twilight is sister in law not niece. and Cadance is pretty hot herself so that comment made no sense.
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Fixed. Words related to family annoy me so I confuse them sometimes. Also regarding that comment, yes, Cadence is indeed hot, I know that. I'm not a dumbass. But, what I ment with that comment is that our beloved scientist, Shiro, has a body that is... stupidly perfect, so perfect it's stupid. Ya know? Makes sense, right?
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the idea is interesting but Shiro's personality and execution just didn't work for me.
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How so? Please explain, I'm curious.
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Shiro's mind jumping all over and instant acceptance jsut doesn't feel right and the scenee shifting is so quick and jerky.
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The scene shifting is a little all over the place, and I admit that I could work on that more, but the personality thing? It's intentional, since Shiro isn't the most normal person, if that wasn't obvious yet. Her mind works a lot of times faster than other's and usually keeps thinking about a lot of random shit. I guess I could have tried to express that more, but really, who the fuck actually wants to read 10.000 words about her thinking of ways to torture others, what kind of furniture to make, all the probabilities possible and all kinds of stupid shit.
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I know Shiro is intentional like that but really grates for me.
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Ah... Well... Nothin' I can do 'bout it.
Is she going for a spartan Style of training?
Error brain dot.exe has fail please update
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Kinda. Just a lot worse.
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Wat.
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was a joke of cannot compute
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Myeah realised it. Question is why?
~Umbra Amino used Confusion~
It's supper effective!
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Thought it would be funny
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Well you managed to confuse the hell outta me. So that's a thing.
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Aparently
Why is it anytime I find a story like this I laugh maniacally?
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So like Tanya then?
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Right on the money with that one buddy! A training so hellish only a psychotic nazi loli could think of it!
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Only After I Watched Youjo Senki, I Recognized the scenes
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I love Youjo Senki. Also more references can be found. Don't have much hope anyone will find all of them though, since some are really obscure.
Man Shiro sure is insane, and Sombra should run off on the first chance to tell what is going on