Tranquility

MEnigmatic Monsters
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[MATURE VERSION] The most enigmatic of monsters will not carry the ugly faces of one. A young draconequus named Discord has yet to learn this, and mortals may never do so. Oh, and the first lamia is created amidst all this turmoil.
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TThe Depth of Motherly Love
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
[TEEN VERSION] The most enigmatic of monsters will not carry the ugly faces of one. A young draconequus named Discord has yet to learn this, and mortals may never do so. Oh, and the first lamia is created amidst all this turmoil.
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Tranquility

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A young Discord enjoys the sunrise. It's very quiet here, which means there is plenty of time to think.

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Violet Rose in The Rain #1 · Jul 13th, 2016 · · ·

I've only skimmed through the early sections of the story and them some, but I can tell that the sentence structure for some of the sentences seems a little awkward and stilted. Moreover, some parts could be a bit more fleshed out.

Unfortunately, I'm not operating at optimal capacity, so could you kindly wait before I post more constructive feedback later?

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