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Twilight pays Rarity a visit in the early part of Winter because they're planning on sharing breakfast together. But when Twilight arrives, a note and a locked door, not her special somepony, greet her. So she endeavors to get their morning started properly, even if things aren't going to plan.

Written to help cheer up a friend.
Cover image by CloverCoin!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 24 )

You already know what I think about this, But I'll try to be more coherent here instead of just resorting to screeches like I do on skype.

THIS WAS ADORABLE! Your writing style is amazing as always, and I loooooved the descriptions here. I especially really liked the part where Twi turned around to find a sleepy Rarity trying to nuzzle her.

And then when they curled their tails together, and I just oh my god

Oh god, I'm a giggling mess again because tHIS WAS SO CUTE

It's short, but very warm and sweet, like drinking a warm beverage on a sunny, carefree afternoon.

Well done! :twilightsmile:

It was a beautiful story, and I am always so happy to see a new RariLight romance. This ship has become my OTP.

I'm going to echo others and say this was absolutely adorable. A lovely, short, romantic story. I always enjoy seeing this pair together and this didn't disappoint in that regard. :heart:

I...Hnng.

That was so adorable and fwuffy. :heart: RariLight's definitely my favourite Mane 6 shipping.

Commendable effort. An oft repeated mistake is to treat any and all situation between lovers as a pretext to get aroused. Considering a tender scene instead have had been a pleasant change of pace.

Yeah, difficult to describe this as anything but cute fluff. Nice one:pinkiehappy: entwined tails are a standard for cutesyness:)

Oh my gosh, that was the cutest thing ever!:pinkiehappy:

I adore these tender moments between couples and yours was wonderfully written. Bravo!

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But the screeches are the best part!

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For once in my RariLighting (yes, that's a verb) life, I did not include tea. And now I feel like the story is missing something important. Tsk tsk.

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I have too many OTPs for Twilight. But RariLight is my only OTP for the Mane Six.

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Weaponized cuteness was the goal here. And to think that it all started with just the little idea of Rarity sleeping with her tail wrapped around herself.

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Yeah, the sexier fic (Twilestia, not RariLight) is in the works. A couple of them, actually. I wanted this to be out too to balance that.

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I try very hard to write well, but it's also very hard for me to appreciate my own writing. I had the mental image of what I wanted to convey, and I hope I got it across well.

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There`s a surfeit of "sexier" as is.

5512599 Rarity sleeping with her tail wrapped around herself is already weaponized cuteness.:twilightsmile:

I wrote a review of this story. It can be found here.

That was pretty cute.

So cute. Heart can't take it. Send help. D,awwwww...

So much dawwwww this is adorable!

So freaking adorable I love it!

This was well written and adorable.

Twilight turned her attention to the pancake batter. In a separate bowl, she melted the butter with magic

As someone who has had more than their fair share of ANNOYING moments with cold butter when I wanted to put it on toast for breakfast, I can't help but feel just a little bit jealous of Twilight, here. :twilightsheepish:

Very simple and heartwarming fic! I like it! ^^ This is going straight into my library.

This is a truly delightful little piece of fluff. Very well done, the feelings each has for the other coming though clear. A joy to read this morning :twilightsmile:

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