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Toric


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Not all friends are made by choice. Some are found purely by accident in places you'd never think to look. After being tossed around by a storm, Rainbow Dash makes just such a friend in a town too small to be worth putting on the map. And she's not the only one meeting new ponies, either.

But even as daily life plays out, events set in motion centuries ago begin to unfold. Things that were lost and buried are stirring, things older than even the princesses. After all, when ponies came to Equestria, who knows what they left behind?

It all begins on a spring morning shortly after the Royal Wedding.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 33 )

Great story, Needs more recognition. Keep up the good work. :D

:twilightsmile:

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Thanks. There's actually a few more parts done, but I haven't uploaded them yet.:twilightblush:

Welcome to group, my good friend! :pinkiesmile:

Dash: Hey, wanna join my crew? I'm gonna be Queen of the Pirates!

Zephyr: Alright, but I'm not a damn cook.

"We’re your friends: we’ll do it with you.”

My little Zephyr: Friendship has Benefits :trollestia:

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Yes, that was the inspiration for that particular scene...You sir win the internet.
Also, I really didn't even think about that particular line...good catch......I'm not changing it

damn cute and the feels

3536421
I was going for feels with the Scootaloo chapter. It's also really important for events later on:raritywink:

3528968 Honestly, it was the phrase "old geezer" that clued me up on the reference. And the friendship is benefits thing was too perfect for me to not say.

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I kinda figured. It was meant to be a reference to that for anyone who could catch it. My sister loves One Piece and picked up on it right away. The benefits joke just made me laugh for five minutes straight. :rainbowlaugh:

Listen to this while reading the last chapter:

OMG, I read this whole thing already on fanfiction. I'm guessing your the same writer because your username is pretty similar. Thanks for posting this on FiMfiction. Totally going to read this again, this is one of my favourite stories :pinkiehappy:

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Same person. I'm only going to update here, from now on. Fanfiction is kinda dying and I sorta forgot my password...Anyway, the next section should be out by New Year's, hopefully sooner.:applejackunsure:

Haven't read it, but I'm curios how this fits into the Past Sins group. If Nyx is in it, you should probably put that in the description somewhere.
After all, there's a bunch of people who will read a story just because she's in it.

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It doesn't fit in that universe. I think when I joined that group I misunderstood its purpose and then added to the folder. I'll see about getting it removed:facehoof:

Hate to make a liar of myself, but it looks like there's gonna be about a week's delay in the next chapter:applecry:
Family business has been taking up more of my time than I'd expected:facehoof:
Anyway, probably be a few extra days after new years before it comes, so apologies all around. Honestly, i think I'm on the brink of going :pinkiecrazy: right now.

My GOD.

First off,them feels.
I've read scootadopt stories that have tugged at my heartstrings before but dude...

That first scene in the cave, I actually felt the need to go out, find this cave, wrap scoots in a big hug and tell her everything is gonna be okay.So many points in this did I start tearing up.

The amount of feels you can pack into one story is amazing and I honestly can not wait for more.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading:twilightsmile:

3773618 Glad you liked it. Next chapter is actually coming soon.:scootangel:

I'm glad I found you through the group of under-appreciated stories. :heart:

Anyways...I'll read the rest when I have time. :unsuresweetie:

WELP What a coin-key-dink! lol Promoting this still?

It deserves a lot more attention. :moustache:

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Thanks. I hope it gets some eventually:derpytongue2:

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has more than mine! lol :twilightblush: I'll read it all sometime :)

So I read it.

I'm going to give a quick little review, sadly I wish I could give a far more in depth one...>.<

Know what? Yeah, I'll do that! I'll give you a GOOD review, maybe it'll make up for the lack of views on this piece. I'll be back in a while, with a well written review of what ya got! :moustache::twistnerd::eeyup:

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I read the whole thing.

Basically...the ONLY problem I have with it is simply that Zephyr is overpowered and inconsistent. :moustache:

I'm sorry I can't give more than that...but im' stressed for time. :twilightblush:

3773988 lol 5 weeks 2 days later...

Haha loved the story. It was cute and made me repress a few D'awws lest I wish to be forever tormented by family

Only problem I can address in this story is the lack of problems to address with this story.

Dang that's twice in one day. I guess I'm finally finding the good writers!

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Thanks for reading it, and for the compliments. Better late than never:trollestia:

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Your formatting is a little "eh", but that is completely outweighed by the story itself.

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