Editing and Critique Commissions

Need some editing done? Working on a story and not sure how it’s shaping up? I’m now doing editing and critique commissions! Check this link for more information and pricing and PM me if interested.

Paul's Editing Rules

Public Notices

People keep asking, “Hey, I see you added my story to a bookshelf! Are you going to review it?”

I book it, I review it.

No exceptions.

Reading Progress

EThe Education of Clover the Clever

Some people think lectures and classes are for educating. Star Swirl the Bearded has no patience for those people.

Daedalus Aegle · 163k words · 583 14 · 14k views

33.36% (54,419 / 163,145)

TFriendship Is Monsters

Equestria Girls

Twilight is a human in a world of monsters, although she's never met one. So when she finds a vampire dying on her front lawn one day, she's not sure what she's found. A new friend? Or her demise...

spotty8ee · 93k words · 724 13 · 16k views

11.40% (10,632 / 93,242)

TThe Olden World

Equestrian culture loves cutie marks. Filly Starlight Glimmer hates them and never wants one. So, she leaves Equestria.

Czar_Yoshi · 2m words · 389 21 · 8.5k views

3.01% (60,727 / 2,020,718)

ETea and Caramels
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Silver Spoon is an event organizer with one hell of a busy schedule. But she can spare a little time to do Diamond Tiara a favor and pay an old classmate a visit. For business reasons. Yeah.
Diamond Tiara
Silver Spoon
Featherweight
PaulAsaran · 8.9k words · 39 2 · 443 views
EPaul's Friendship Collection
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Anthology
An anthology of 500-word shorts in which assorted characters interact, one way or another.
Alt. Universe
Main 6
PaulAsaran · 6.5k words · 24 1 · 250 views
TThe Gilderoy Expedition
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Horror
Mystery
When a griffon expedition goes missing in the Frozen North, the Crystal Empire answers the call. But as the crew of the Aurora Dawn will soon learn, there are things in the ice no mortal creature should uncover.
Death
OC
Crystal Ponies
Griffons
Kirins
PaulAsaran · 22k words · 41 1 · 460 views
ETo My Uncle
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
All Keen Arrow wanted to do was write a story just like her uncle. It turns out to be more of a challenge than she expected.
Alt. Universe
OC
PaulAsaran · 13k words · 18 0 · 179 views

Review Blog Rules

Want to request a review? Want to know when they release and how? Then follow the link below to see how they work!

Da Rules!

As of June 7, there are no request slots open!

As of May 30, the 2025 Long Schedule is closed! The 2026 Long Schedule will open January 1, 2025.

Review Schedule and Other Spreadsheets

My Long Story schedule is completely booked for 2024. This means that if you want to request a story longer than 70,000 words, you will be waiting until sometime in 2025 for that review. I cannot guarantee it'll be "early" 2025, either. Just something to keep in mind.

The Review Schedule

This schedule lists the stories that are set to be reviewed every week. The next six weeks are always included. I may have more than six scheduled, but only the nearest six will actually be visible at any time.

The Reading Schedule

The day-to-day reading schedule, which dictates what I will read and when. Mostly meant for my own use in limiting how much I read every day, but kept available to the public for the sake of transparency.

Archive Spreadsheet

The archive. Contains a list of every story I've ever reviewed with links to both the story and the review.

A Brief Look Into The Insanely Detailed World That Is Paul's Mind

Read this if you want to see what I go through every Saturday to deliver to you folks a weekly review blog. Be warned, this thing is overbearingly detailed.

Favorites

The Silver Standard Once upon a time, Silver Spoon's life made sense. Now she lives in Ponyville. by PatchworkPoltergeist 296,450 words · 531 · 10
Five Hundred Little Murders Flitter thinks Fluttershy is the weakest pony in the world. Flitter has never confronted what Fluttershy's job really means. Nopony ever wants to or should. Now Flitter has to. And 'weak' will turn out to be exactly the wrong word. by Estee 10,523 words · 1,136 · 25
The Flight of the Alicorn Rarity finds herself forced into an unlikely alliance when her airship crashes far from home. by Ponydora Prancypants 227,108 words · 1,444 · 28
Sucker for a Cute Face Adagio finds Fluttershy alone one morning, and many to follow. by Eyeswirl the Weirded 276,133 words · 1,230 · 29
Daring Do(esn't Need a Special Somepony) A.K. Yearling doesn't write love stories, because Daring Do usually spends Hearts and Hooves Day tearing through Equestria in a no-holds-barred search for candy. There's no room for anypony else in the chase. Especially not some stuck-up stunt flier. by Fahrenheit 9,335 words · 499 · 10

A current list of my favorite stories on FIMFiction.

Concepts & Creations Index

A while back I started posting blogs detailing stories that I conceived but don't expect to ever write. The link below is to an index of all these blogs.

Concepts & Creations Index

Jun

6th

2024

Feel the Burn(Out) · 9:05pm Last Thursday

Ain't that the truth...

Report PaulAsaran · 269 views ·

Best Stories

Time for Tea As far as everyone who isn't Fluttershy knows, Rainbow Dash is not a 'tea' type of girl. Really. by PaulAsaran 1,000 words · 109 · 4
No Heroes Part III - For Dreams Luna's team takes on its first task, working together with the Element Bearers. But with Fine Crime out of action, can Luna keep the team going in their dreams? by PaulAsaran 92,694 words · 120 · 1
Of Angels What makes an angel? Is it wings and a halo? Is it good deeds, a gentle touch, beauty? I’ve thought on that long and hard. by PaulAsaran 4,023 words · 353 · 3
Friendship = Evil Filly Twilight has come upon a groundbreaking truth. Now she just has to convince Celestia. by PaulAsaran 2,393 words · 948 · 11
Lessons in Generosity Scootaloo is the last pony Rarity ever thought would want to be more 'Rarity', but that's exactly what the filly claims. Sadly, Scootaloo's understanding of generosity is disastrously flawed. by PaulAsaran 4,887 words · 312 · 4

My best stories by rating.

Personal Best

Bulletproof Heart In a hot desert Equestria, Rarity Belle makes her living as a clothier in the small town of Spurhoof. But when a posse of Bad Apples arrive in town, she finds her life turned upside down. Now she fights for only one thing: survival. by PaulAsaran 314,571 words · 334 · 13
Cutie Mark Chronicles: Limestone Pie Everything was fine until Great Uncle Holder showed up with his stupid boulder. by PaulAsaran 11,902 words · 66 · 2
Change, Inc. Chrysalis Chrysanthemum is a bad mother. by PaulAsaran 43,792 words · 204 · 6
Forgive Me, Friend Rainbow comes home to find her wife waiting for her. She hasn't seen Rarity in seven years. by PaulAsaran 8,521 words · 91 · 5
Of Angels What makes an angel? Is it wings and a halo? Is it good deeds, a gentle touch, beauty? I’ve thought on that long and hard. by PaulAsaran 4,023 words · 353 · 3