"I might seem a little quiet, but my strength is very real! When my cutie mark comes to life, my heart helps me feel!" -Misty Brightdawn
My parents named me Winter Breeze. They gave me anything I needed to be a successful pony. However, I'm not living the life my parents planned for me. Far from it.
I'm living my own dreams. I have my own destiny. Or...so I thought. Then I met you and I knew that all my previous dreams, my previous destiny, no longer mattered. All that mattered was making you mine. And I'll do absolutely anything to make that happen...
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>"You" inspired story
>Joe Goldberg-ass main character
>Even called "You"
>No "Hello, You" line
aside from that, very good start!
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Thank you. I hope you'll continue reading thru the chapters. It'll get just as crazy, if not crazier
This looks promising! The constant bolding of 'you' is really upping the creep factor. The writing and narration are also very solid thus far, though I hope we get more characterization in the near future. Few grammatical errors are to be found, which is always a good thing. I can tell you've either had some practice writing or spent a lot of time on this.
As of yet, I'm at a loss for what else to comment on, but know that this is some good work! I'll be sure to track this and look forward with both excitement and dread as to what's coming. I'm sure it's only downhill from here
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Thank you so much. Definitely more characterization for sure. We'll be delving pretty deeply into Winter's past, though I won't give any spoilers. Not to mention a huge reveal in chapter two. I hope you'll really enjoy the story going forward and that it'll keep you at the edge of your seat.
Is this a crossover?
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A bit. I got the idea while watching the Netflix show 'You'. It's similar in writing style and theme, but the plot, characters, and storyline are completely original.
Love it so far, keep it up