Inspired by one of my favorite songs in my favorite show. Also inspired by others.
Edited and Proofread by atronosthelast and Griphongirl_Ellie
Art drawn by my editor, Ellie
It has been a few years since Twilight and her friends had given up the Elements of Harmony. They have been through so many adventures together with or without the Elements. Twilight knew even without the Elements, she and her friends would be able to come over whatever was thrown at them.
Or so she thought...
I have made a group to post stuff related to this story, but I'm still working on building it up. If you would like to go ahead and join, feel free.
As many of you know, music can make a big impact in people's lives, including mine, so I want to share with you my inspiration list. (not all of it is complete yet)
Chapter 1 - Helping with Flurry Heart: Friends In My Heart
Chapter 2 - The Sleepover: Best Friends Until The End Of Time
Chapter 3 - They're Back...:
Chapter 4 - The Plan:
Chapter 5 - Failure: Roxas Theme
Chapter 6 - Goodbye: (The song that inspired the story,) Cold
Chapter 7 - Not Again: Destiny
Chapter 8 - How Could He...?: Ventus's Theme
Chapter 9 - Nightmares:
Chapter 10 - Coma: All Our Days
Chapter 11 - Shock:
Chapter 12 - Not Giving Up Yet: Wings
Chapter 13 - Night Time Fears: You'll Be in My Heart Music Box Version
Chapter 14 - The Big Attack Part 1: All Things Must Die
Chapter 15 - The Big Attack Part 2:
Epilogue: Home
... I was prepared for trouble, but not like this...
7959363 What do you mean?
7959580 Oh, what I said was a reference from the first Pokémon movie, when things got depressing at the end.
7960113 ah, OK.
7959363 wait until u read the end....
7960630 ... oh, great...
7961201 there is going to be a sequel, but I don't want to spoil too much
7961206 okay
Goodness... More?
7974471 yeah, working on it. My editor is still working on the next chapter.
I can't wait for the next chapter
8053939 me too. I've really improved with how I was originally going to write it. I'm also trying to fix the paragraphs.
8053939 I am HOPING to post the next chapter before April
8054551 I can't wait
8054556 glad you're enjoining it.
8054556 Not 100% sure, depends how IRL goes and how fast I finish polishing the chapter
I'll try my best
8056254 There's no rush
8056889 I think it was worth the wait.
8078103 Very much so :)
8079213 I'm eager to see what happens next even though I'm writing it!
8096323 X3
8096332 It's going to be a little harder to update though, if you have'nt seen my latest blog post
8096336 I did see it. I hope things go well. <3
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Thank You
8096389 You're welcome
I'm a little confused... is Shining Armor dead?
8113563 yes, sorry my stuffs can be confusing.
8113563
I was going for a type of ghost/spirit thing.
8115590 Ah, I see. I must have put Shining there with them, in my head
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He technically was there, but it's a little hard to explain... I hope to clarify it at some point of the story
How confusing will this story be? I won't read it if it's too confusing.
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What do you mean confusing? And do you mean the sequel?
Boring. Every last word.
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Well, what can I do to improve it? I've been trying to fix up the story so feedback is appreciated
9604770
I meant if it's difficult to understand. I mean both this story and the squeal. Also, does it bother you that Authentic Italian didn't respond to your comment?
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A little but I try not to let it bother me. Also, I'm rewriting Cold so it's less confusing. Also it's not as confusing as I thought it was going to be
The story's cover art and descriptions seem to imply the story would center around how Twilight may handle with the grief of the loss of her friends so suddenly, but most of this seems to just be on action leading up to the incident? I mean, the cover art has all of them dead, and I checked the final chapter and they're plenty alive.
I did see your latest comment though, and yeah I would say this would need both a major rewrite and a change in the cover art description
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Well like I said in the first story update chapter, the chapters labeled My Little Warhorse: Friendship is Broken, those are the rewrites, but I decided to actually post the new rewritten chapters in a separate story now. To be honest, because of how much change there will be, I will be adding a new cover art, along with a new story description possibly. (still unsure, I'll have to check with my editor about the story description)
I hope that clarifies some things! Thank you for the feedback btw, I'm willing to know what needs to be improved on, it's quite helpful! Also, do forgive me if this was just more confusing, my brain has been sleep-deprived lately.