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abrony-mouse


Occasional FimFic contributor. Also short reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2024.06.11. Toujours bizarre

May
6th
2024

Rarity learns Math by Gavier (Recommendation-style short-review - for fics I would recommend, but for flaws with the format that can be sorted with editing) · 3:38pm May 6th

ERarity learns Math
Twilight decides it's time Rarity starts learning how to teleport. That means, tutoring classes.
Gavier · 1.3k words  ·  56  2 · 1.4k views

Overall. Twilight thinks in 0s and 1s.

Rarity will show her the importance of I.Ref

Best lines:

Twilight's voice, angelical as always, danced on each sentence with practiced grace, turning the dull textbook into a show.[...]

"I could do that," voiced Rarity, not completely sure why.


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May
6th
2024

Writing thoughts (to separate from the general thoughts blog) [NSFW material will be referenced occasionally, but will be blacked out] · 1:22pm May 6th

Writing mistakes

Hall of shame: dumb errors by me

These errors are late-stage errors which I left in my fic after multiple reads. It happens to us all :(


Ocean Mist trots back onto the quiet landing.

She idly looks at a wall-cupboard. Even though she knew it couldn’t be in there, she opens the door anyway. She wrinkles her nose at the musty smell from a stack of used dusters.

Under these is a stepladder which she looks at curiously.

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May
6th
2024

MUSIC PROMOTION: ETHAN TOAVS (Instrumental, peaceful, hopeful, sweet, poignant, all Gens) · 4:40am May 6th

Type Instrumental / Ambient / Orchestral

Overall I still have tears in my eyes while writing this :fluttercry:

Highlights

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May
6th
2024

6th May. Random thoughts, music and pony. · 2:56am May 6th

Currently feeling:

Artist


Over-explaining

This has to be the most common writing issue when describing actions.

He ignores me and, with his other hoof, reaches for the handle and turns.

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May
5th
2024

5th May. Random thoughts, music and pony. · 4:55am May 5th

Oh Gawd, it's done. My terrible fic is done. I'm a lil nervous of releasing her, though... it's a very spicy one this time. The intrusive thoughts bodied me for this one.


The time was 11:02 on the 1st of May.

That is the day and time that I ended a drought of new friends since 2008 :pinkiesad2:.

I never hoped nor expected or sought this but, Silks, you are an angel :heart:

Bit of a shame I'm not, but there you go :rainbowwild:

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May
4th
2024

4th May. Random thoughts, music and pony. · 5:41am May 4th

WARNING: SAD

In the morning, in the winter shade
On the first of March, on the holiday
I thought I saw you breathing

All the glory that the Lord has made
And the complications when I see his face
In the morning, in the window


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May
3rd
2024

3rd May. Random thoughts, music and pony. · 6:22am May 3rd

Still Alive from Portal is still so freaking good


"The half elf pony paladin gains 4 hit points more per level than the werepony bat mage. But your werepony gains two extra abilities on the full moon. Is everypony following?"


WARNING NSFW

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May
2nd
2024

Story Ideas · 10:01am May 2nd

A place to put all my story ideas

SFW


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May
2nd
2024

2nd May. Random thoughts, music and pony. · 2:18am May 2nd

"Let me finish my cute G3 fic!"

"Silence! You shall first make a G5 fic, despite you knowing almost nothing about it! It is the perfect plan."


INTRUSIVE THOUGHTS UPDATE!

WE ARE NOW IN CONTROL OF ABRONY. DO NOT BE ALARMED. THIS CAN ONLY BE A GOOD THING


Rhythmic beats

"No, shoo, shoo!"

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May
1st
2024

REVIEW [NSFW!] Uncorinthian BY Petrichord (Random Recommendations in <50 words #7) · 9:43pm May 1st

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Overall. Dost thou propose also to conquer Limestone's frigid abyss?

Best lines:

“Pa!” Limestone bellows. “The dick’s here!”


Something warm and taut brushes up against my side. I look over to see Marble gently pressing up against me, her belly pushing into my coat, looking completely deaf to the outside world.

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