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Fullmetal Pony


Why the name? FMA is awesome. Why the avatar? I like One Piece even more. Welcome to my page and enjoy the stories!

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Star Gazer can't get a break. He's always stressed out by his constant studies. But his greatest stress of all come from mares: he turns into a quivering mess around them. Yet he still spends a large amount of the time in the Ponyville Library studying various books. It just so happens he's there one day when Twilight is testing out a new spell. However, things don't go as planned and now Star has to deal with the consequences: a longer mane and eyelashes are going to be the least of his worries.

*Special Thanks to Magic Bolt for the amazing cover art!*

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 41 )

I tracked :raritywink:. Keep up the good work

This requires a track please continue!

I just have to laugh at the spa mares from hell.

O_O

Twilight's a stallion now. This story is becoming more and more crazy every chapter...

Question: Does FIMfiction have pre-readers?

This story seems intriguing eough. Consider this as an announcement of me checking the "tracking" box.
But yes, FIMfiction has pre-readers. Hopefully you'll find some willing to help you. I didn't notice many spelling or grammar errors though, so you got a good foundation in that regard. However, I myself sometimes struggle with grammar, so take my observation with a grain of salt.

"Well you're definitely passing the speed test with flying colors!"
I see what you did there :rainbowwild:

This... wow.
I don't think it would be fair to ask you to write a sequel, but I would like to see more of this OC!

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Well :twilightsmile: I really did regret never fully explaining Star's cutie mark in-story. It would have been way too bulky and expositiony, if only there were a way to explain its back story:rainbowkiss:

That was an amazing ending! Thank you for writing this! :pinkiehappy:

-WG

I loved this! Why did I just find this story now?! Favorited! :pinkiehappy:

You troll. Genderbending with the anomorphic spell? :D:trollestia:

This is a great story! I hope someday you write a slice-of-life style story of all the hijinks that Star Gazer gets into with his... predicament.

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Eh I've got to finish Reality Break first. Plus, I just found this awesome anime, I'm getting a really weird sense of dejavu though
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Trolling really can be fun sometimes :pinkiecrazy:

368082 dang broken image.

I'm going out on a limb and guessing it's Ranma or To Love Ru.

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looks fine to me but yeah definitely Ranma... and probably some of To-Love-ru as well (that one ova :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:) Oh I am a cruel author

368146 I haven't seen a successful Ranma crossover yet, and I don't think there is a To Love Ru crossover except for the reference in your fic. (there is one r\Ranma crossover, but I think it has too many flaws to be enjoyable)

After Reality Break I want to see some crazy anime crossovers >:D :trollestia:

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just waiting for some reviews on this one (not Cloudy Stars) but...
ya read one piece?
:pinkiehappy:

368202 short answer: no

my answer in a few minutes: yes
:moustache:

419369
A psychological issue rather than an actual one, if you'll recall a certain purple unicorn managed to defeat a Dark Lord of Chaos yet still probably had a greater breakdown over being late on a fricking letter:twilightoops:

Downloaded this to my tablet last night, and went through it this afternoon. It was a very enjoyable read. I'm glad to see that you have a sort of sequel fic going, as well. I hope it'll be as enjoyable as this was.

So every time he sneezes he goes form a stallion to a mare and vise-versa. :applejackunsure:
:rainbowlaugh: That is exactly like a manga I read a while back.

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Oh shit! Get him away get him away!

2457259 Well that's a little mean Don'tcha think? He's just minding his own business. :trixieshiftright:

YES! I love genderbending stories! :heart:

Status: Faved.
Reason: Awesomeness.
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これはよんでたのしかった。ありがとうございました! :heart:
This was a fun read. Thank you! :heart:

I want to read this, but the cancelled sequel gives me some concern. The epilogue does wrap everything up with adequate closure, yes? If I start reading this I want to be sure I won't be left hanging.

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I was wondering if you were going to show up

"What do you… no… just no, I already lost my outer masculinity! I am not losing any more by going to that boutique!"

oh the indignity

Dang, and I was almost betting that Celestia WAS Starswirl. :derpytongue2: It would be a good reason then for the curse 'By Celestia's Beard.' :pinkiecrazy:

419369 oh hay it's you. I would ask if you're stalking me but by the timestamp I'm stalking you. Hi! I can't remember if we have spoken before but I see you on a lot of the stories I read.

Huh, I read this like 200 weeks ago, but I can barely remember any of it... maybe I should reread it at some point? :twilightsmile: Seeing as I gave it an upvote, it might be worth it, heh.

Gooks solely about Zebrica

Maybe slur, probably just a typo

I made an account just to give this story a like!

going to downvote because you mess with my great and powerful waifu

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