Pinkie Pie has always dreamed of flying. With some spare bits, she puts together artificial wings, and realizes her dream of being the first earth pony to ever fly solo.
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Two words- Pinkie Physics.
Ending #2-
She fell 100 stories and hit the ground like a piece of taffy. Managing to pull herself off the pavement, she took in a huge breath and blew into her hoof as the gathered crowd watched with flabbergasted expressions. Completely reinflated, she gave herself a shake and trotted off for the next adventure.
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1766727 Paradox was unhappy about the ending so he decided to quickly write one.
On the other hoof
Echidna was estatic to read that an element of harmony died. Only problem is she currently isn't allowed out...
Owch. Funny.
Wow not the ending I expected! Well now on to the review! OK the detail was nice, explaining your surroundings and I didn't see any error's. I liked it until the ending that is, in an instant you took the lighthearted pinkie wanting to fly so bad with Dashie, PLUMMET to her doom... Dont take this the wrong way I still liked it however I just found it odd. So all in all good. not much more to say it was a simple fic
sincerely
SinisterBronyz AKA NotThatOneBrony
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At first I was like
But then I was like
1766707 Much better ending
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