This is the story of Stovepipe, a half machine / half pony monstrosity who has a
really terrible day at work in the rainbow factory. Sad, and maybe a little silly; this is my first FiM fiction.
Oh, and if it helps clear things up, he runs along a little track like a monorail. I also do not claim any connection with or ownership of the classic "Rainbow Factory." This is a very different place. Dark? Yes. Grim? Yes. Rainbow killing fillies? No.
2 spooky 4 me.
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In all seriousness, this is very good if this is your first story. Creative, short, and sweet. I only saw a few grammatical and spelling errors, so good job on that.
I hope to see more from you.
-DivideByZero
poor stovepipe
that was a great story, something new that i'v never read before. good job![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
have some derpy![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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Thank you! It is a little dark, but that certainty isn't my focus. I actually finished another Fic two days ago which is much more upbeat, though tense in parts; I just have to get around to making the cover art. >_<
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Thanks for reading! I try to write things I haven't seen before. Not much point in spending the night writing a thousand words when you could just copy paste!
You're derpy's are delicious!
wat
1592858![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
Wow, you drew the cover art? It's really damn good. Kudos to you, sir. I wish I could draw
1593029 Ponies?![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1593111 Yup, and if you ever want to draw, you just need to try; again, again, and again. I only started doing art five months ago. It just takes practice!
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He also drew the cover art for my story, if you want to see his real skills.