Twilight starts to develop new powers after her brother's wedding, more things happened during the wedding that were not shown to us that time.
Twilight discovers that she has a beast with an incredibly high power named "Kurama..."
Now she must learn how to use it cope with all the problems she has and face the enemies, and the most important thing...who is her real family and what is the truth of Equestria?
English is not my maternal tongue, however I already have experience writing stories, I hope you like this story, it is a different version/rewrite of my previous story titled the same.
Chapters (3)
This isn't the first story like this. I know it isn't. Or maybe it's just the cover art.
So basically this is a REDO of the ORIGINAL story?
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Yes, however this one doesn't follow the same path, in the previous one there were plot holes, and I know that several people saw it, they also emphasized it to me, although there is a difference with this one and the other one, and that is that Twilight will have to learn to use her power, and also, how is she going to have kurama just because? Someone would have to have sealed him, in the next chapter kurama will show himself physically, professor kurama will explain it to you.
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It's from my old story
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And those drawing in my old story are mine too, you can find all in my devianart account If you want to see them
its great nice job
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Thanks
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Thanks.
Nice chapter, waiting for the next!!!
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its ok nice work and sorry to hear about your dad
Sorry about your dad. Take your Time. I send you my biggest hug.
I hope you are feeling better.
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Thanks, and I'm feeling better, he's gonna be in my heart even if he's not with me physically
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I'm kinda better
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*hugs*
Our deepest apologies about your dad. Your readers & followers on FIMFiction gives you their blessings & prayers for this difficult time your going through.
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Thanks :)
Well this is certainly interesting.
I can't wait for future chapters, the story is interesting, I just hope Twilight gets the apology she deserves.
I haven't read the previous story mainly because I don't want spoilers.
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Well, the first versión of This story Is a different version, so I think you can read it, of course, it's canceled, but I can continue it, I just think that the depelovment of my characters was...bad, so I'm trying to make different things here, I'll publish a new chapter next week, I had problems in my life so I took a Time
Ya you better cross that out, don't want to ask for trouble now do we? Frickin idiots. "Oh YeAh, WhAt CoUlD gO wRoNg?" EVERYTHING!!!
Found a mistake.
Ya, kinda pisses me off a bit that Celestia's first concern is the wedding and not Twilight's feelings and how she isn't even thinking about her last interaction with Twilight, you would think that would have been implemented in her damn mind.
Seriously, Twilight knew something was wrong meanwhile Celestia was more concerned about the wedding and "Cadance" than the fact that there was Changelings outside a barrier surrounding Canterlot.
Also makes me upset that Shining Armor forgot everything that has happened once he was mind controlled, didn't expect him to get brainwashed during the process as well.
And last it make me upset that Cadance doesn't even know what has happened before she was rescued.
Seriously, does nobody care? Maybe they'll apologize eventually.
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Celestia is used to Twilight doing whatever she says without question and being really easy to forgive and forget so the fact that they should offer some real apologies for their behavior wasn't something she imagined.
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Oh yeah...
I would still expect them to feel guilty about the whole thing though, I doubt something like that happened to Twilight before, I mean her friends basically feeling disappointed in her and abandoning her instead of comforting her and then Celestia being even more disappointed and saying "you have alot to think about".
Yes she follows orders practically without quastion but I doubt something like being abandoned and left by everyone you care about happens often, especially considering Celestia is Twilight's idol in such, pretty sure she'd rather get pierced by a spike than Celestia being disappointed in her.
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Well there was the time she implied nightmare moon was just a childhood story and twilight friends always take advantage of her forgive and forget attitude to the point where they don't seriously think about trying to change. They find a different way to repeat their mistakes.
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First of all, thanks for the correction, I didn't realize it.
The fact is that I went back to see my little pony because there were things that I had forgotten, I made Celestia and the other characters based on how they acted there, and this is only the introduction and the first arc, I also introduced part of the next arc which is the crystal empire to show you what is going to happen.
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Oh... Ya I forgot about that, kinda like the one episode in season 1 with the gala tickets where all her friends was practically fighting for the extra ticket?
Ya, there probably not the best friends on the entire planet and it's funny that you mentioned that they repeat there mistakes, just like how Celestia basically neglected her sister which resulted in Nightmare Moon, and I believe she was responsible for Sunset Shimmer leaving for not paying enough attention to her and now there's Twilight for not listening to her.
Although I don't know since I haven't watched past season 1 episode 10, beyond that I only know the main storyline of the show and clips from some of the episodes.
I wonder how many times she is going to abandon one in need until she learns and stops repeating the mistakes.
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Yes, and we have to accept it, during the whole series Celestia was like that, I would have liked her not to be a flat character, there are things that could have been explored in the series.
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And finding new ways to repeat old mistakes doesn't make the girls look very mature for adults. Truthfully most of the time the cmcs looked more mature than the main 6. And Celestia was never really helpful except for flurry broke the heart.
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Fr
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Umm, well, we're talking about Celestia, she just learns, but in fics, and it's hard to find one like that Fr
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Same with Spike, he often ends up being more mature than the girls there at times iirc.
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Yeah the show really didn't do him justice.
nice work
Thanks for the chapter.