After the events of the Wiggly Big Show the Crusaders got a magazine from Photo Finish and loved it. Then they went to meet another band: The Doodlebops! When they saw success go in Deedee's head they have to help her remember that it's not only her that's a star. It's the whole band.
You use the word said too much.
I suggest you rewrite this, and add a little more description and stop using the word said so much.
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I got rid of some saids so I hope that's better.
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Hope you replace it with something