Everyone said this thing would revolutionize travel. Cross the galaxy in an instant, no ship required.
Well, it worked.
There's just one problem.
I have no clue where I am.
The pony in the cover image was developed here:
https://ponylumen.net/games/3d-pony-creator/
is this some kind of crossover? or already used OC, just the narrative is as if the reader knows at least something
are his "cyber" hidden? just in the hospital he said that see this cyber hooves, but neither the locals nor the medical staff paid attention to him
Yes, they are hidden. The reason comes up later in the story (in a part I haven't finished yet), but he's designed to look completely ordinary from the outside.
Admittedly, the character here was created for something else. I was basically goofing around and decided to throw him into Equestria on a whim. I'm trying to write the story in such a way that everything important is revealed at some point, but this is my first time writing like this, so if it's not working properly, let me know so I can fix it.
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Since the M6 is on here you can add their tags or add M6 tag
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Good idea. Thanks for catching that. I'll go ahead and fix it.
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Well that's kinda horrifying to picture. But yeah, it's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.
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Nice
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Thanks.
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... I'm just going to assume that others have made bombs that look like his charger, it's the only logical conclusion that I can think of.
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Ah yes, a logic error
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That was the last chapter
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I feel it works good as an introduction, mate. The way the character's backstory is left vague at this point mirrors the disorientation he's feeling by being thrown to a new place he knows nothing about, and leaves readers curious as to what's gonna happen :3
What a fun story mate!
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Anomalous transference detected. Method unknown. Flavor unknown. Multiverse connection not established. Further inspection required.
An incursion project gone awry? Curious.
Missed opportunity interrogating the hospital staff on how he arrived in their care. Surely somepony else brought him in?
Let's hope the connection is detectable enough when it's needed. 🤔
Hehe, hi Nyx!
Heh, half expected Rainbow to yak his ear off for messing with her napping tree.
"to begin with, sir, this is a certified improved tree and meets current building regulations for domicile and business use....."
Better to have an ally than uncertain enemies?
Technically, any pony can also be mind controlled, with somewhat scarily easy spells too.
They're lucky the things they've summoned so far were able to easily be returned. There are so many things that... wouldn't be.
Sleeping in the open air isn't strange at all. Failing to utilize available resources to begin rebuilding, however, is.
"now I'm imagining what other things she could "come out of" and I'm horrified that I'm getting turned on."
Well, suppose a tool that improves efficiency is worth it for the accelerated pace of construction...
Whelp, now they're up to murder. RIP cadet Red Shirt.
Would that we had our lovable Bolo Crusader to help...
But hey, you have power cells now, that's a plus!
Technically yes, but only in the same way household items haphazardly squished together is a bomb.