The train raced by through the desert of Southern Equestria. Its destination was the village of Somnambula, named after the famed ‘Pillar of Equestria’ who had protected her people from many evils in the past.
Inside the train were Spike, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Mrs. Cake, and Flurry and her five friends. They were all vacationing in Southern Equestria with Spike and their mothers, serving as chaperons. While the mothers talked amongst one another, Spike was sprawled out on his seat, snoring. The kids were all admiring the sights outside their window.
“Whoooah!” said Storm Streak, “Look at those big pointy things out there!”
“Those are called pyramids, silly!” Flurry giggled as she put down the book she was reading.
“Er, right. What are they for even?”
“Ancient Southern Equestrians built them to bury old kings known as ‘pharaohs.’ They’d put them in coffins and wrap them up in cloths.”
“Oooh, you mean mummies! Cool! We could go in and fight zombies then!”
Flurry rolled her eyes and shook her head back and forth teasingly as Stormy flew around speaking.
“Yeah, I don’t think those old pharaohs are gonna awaken in there, bud,” Pound told Stormy. “We’re here to see the pyramids from the outside along with the sphinx statue and plenty of other stuff, but I’m not sure they’d allow us into the pyramids. It’s okay though; there’s still plenty of great things to see.”
“Plus they’ll have some really cool souvenirs in the marketplace!” said Pumpkin.
“And we might even see Somnambula there,” Annie added.
“Somnambula? You mean the place we’re going to?” Stormy asked.
“No, he means the pony Somnambula. They named the city after her a long time ago,” Chip said.
“Oh, yeah. Her. Well I mostly just know about Flash Magnus. Mom always told me about how cool he was back when they all came back to stop the Pony of Shadows!”
Stormy flew over to Rainbow Dash to nudge her as he spoke. She smiled and patted him on the head.
“Flash was something else, Storm,” she said. “Somnambula’s also pretty neat. She’s a pegasus just like we are.”
“And she and the Pillars sure were the talk of the town over a thousand years ago,” Applejack added.
Suddenly, the train began to slow down and let off steam. Spike was startled from the light jolt and began to wake up.
“Ugh…we there yet?” he asked, rubbing his eyes.
“We’re there, big fella,” Mrs. Cake told him. “Alright kids, who’s ready for vacation?”
The kids all cheered and made their way to the door of their cab. Spike picked up the big suitcases and started carrying them while the mothers carried some smaller ones with their mouths and the kids carried backpacks. They walked out the door and stepped onto the station platform. There were many other ponies at the station. Some were from afar, while others appeared to be Southern Equestrians boarding to travel or waiting for loved ones to exit the train to greet them.
“WHOO! Man it’s a lot hotter here than Ponyville!” said Chip, fanning himself.
“That’s the south for ya, buckaroo,” Applejack told her son. “We farmers don’t even feel the same kinda heat the Southern Equestrians do, but at least we came prepared.”
“It’s hot but it’s still so beautiful seeing what the desert looks like!” Annie said, staring at the horizon out on the edge of the platform.
“Maybe we’ll see a giant sphinx roaming around!” Pumpkin said, bounding in next to her.
“Uh oh. I hope not,” Annie said, nervously.
“Pump, don’t scare her like that,” Pound said, elbowing his sister. “Don’t worry Annie, I heard the sphinxes keep to themselves in the mountains nowadays.”
“According to what Twilight told me, the sphinxes live out in places like the wilderness, the mountains or out by the sea where they have access to water. They’re pretty wild like the dragons, but they’re at peace with Southern Equestria now.”
“We’ve got nothing to worry about,” Spike told the children. “I think everything’s gotten better ever since Somnambula stood up to Anatankha.”
“Alright now, everypony and dragon. We don’t wanna be late for our check-in at the hotel,” Mrs. Cake told them as she flashed her ticket to a nearby guard who let her through a terminal.
“She’s right. Let’s go get checked in and then we can go shopping in the market!” Spike said as they all followed Mrs. Cake.
A few hours later, they had already gotten checked in and dropped off their luggage. Now was the time to go sightseeing in town and look for nifty trinkets. Mrs. Cake had already bought herself a sun hat while Rainbow Dash was wearing new sunglasses. The kids couldn’t help but stop to gaze at some of the wonders of the town of Somnambula. There were ponies in the streets doing amazing acts like fire-blowing, dancing, and snake-charming. Spike was in charge of the camera and used it to take photos of the things the kids seemed to love most.
“This place sure is cool!” Stormy said.
“Good thing we picked it for a vacation spot with Flurry visiting this year!” Chip replied.
“Hopefully we can make it next year, though I wouldn’t mind trying Baltimare too.” Flurry said.
“There’s a really cool Daring Do convention next year in Baltimare so I have a feeling Dash and Stormy are really wanna go there,” Spike said.
“THERE’S A DARING DO CONVENTION NEXT YEAR?!” Stormy squealed.
“There is kiddo, but we’re gonna need to save up our money if we wanna make it,” Rainbow Dash told her son. “It’s happening this year too but we all decided to come to Southern Equestria this time while your father, Tex, and Mr. Cake are gonna take you kids to the park in a few weeks.”
“Aw, okay,” Stormy said. “Least I get to finally go on the big kid rides this time!”
“Hey, everypony, come check this out!” Applejack said as she stood with a crowd that was watching an acrobatic show. Some of the kids and the mothers went over to join her while Spike and Flurry decided to watch from a distance.
“You glad we came here, Flurry?” Spike asked the little princess.
“I really am, Spike,” she replied. “I never got to see Southern Equestria, I just wish Mom and Dad could’ve been here. It’s too bad they still have a lot going on in the Crystal Empire.”
“Don’t worry, I’m sure they’ll be able to join you someday. You miss them a lot?”
“I do miss them, but I’m glad they let me stay with you guys for the rest of the summer. It’s been a lot of fun and we’ve had quite a few emotional turns like with Cozy the other day. I hope we can help her soon. I’d hate for it to happen while I’m gone this fall.”
“Hopefully she comes around. For now, things like this are a good distraction from some of the chaos.”
“Hehe, don’t say that in front of Discord.”
“Spike! Princess!” said a voice off to the side.
Spike and Flurry turned to see Somnambula standing a few yards away from them. She was just as Flurry had remembered; she just had a different headdress and necklace now and had her tail tied up with several metal rings. She smiled warmly as she greeted the familiar faces.
“Somnambula!” Flurry said as she rushed over to hug her.
“Hey, Somny! Long time!” Spike replied, walking over.
“It’s so good to see both of you! I heard through a letter from Starswirl that Flurry Heart would be here along with the new friends she’s made. I was in town and I thought I’d stop by to say hello.”
“Well hey, is that you Somnambula?” said Applejack as the others began to walk away from the performance, wondering what Flurry and Spike were doing.
“It is! Great to see ya again, Somny!” Rainbow Dash said, giving Somnambula a hoof bump.
“Guys, we found her!” Flurry told her friends, excitedly. “This is Somnambula, the Element of Hope!”
“Wow! Great to finally meet you, ma’am!” Chip said, bowing politely with his sister.
“Hi, Miss Somnambula!” Pumpkin said, joyfully. “It’s awesome getting to see some of the Pillars of Equestria like this. We finally got to meet Starswirl the other day and now you!”
“Pretty neat, right Stormy? Uh…Stormy?” asked Pound as he looked up.
Stormy hadn’t spoken a single word for he was too busy staring at Somnambula. He had never seen a mare so beautiful as her. Not even thinking about how grown up she was compared to him, he was already smitten. His eyes and mouth had been wide open the entire time the others were talking, but he finally blinked them and revealed heart-shaped irises, while tiny pink hearts started floating out of his head.
“Wow…guys, she’s…she’s sooooo pretty,” said the enamored little colt.
“Oh dear. Take it easy there, Casanova,” Rainbow Dash laughed, “She’s a little bit outa’ your league.”
“No Mommy, she’s perfect…” Stormy said, continuing to stare.
“Hehehe. You’re too late, Dash. All it takes is one look and he’s sold,” Spike told Rainbow Dash.
“Yeah, you would know, Mister Rarity’s-Number-One-Fanboy.” Applejack teased as she poked his belly.
“Sorry about Storm Streak over there,” Flurry whispered to Somnambula while trying not to laugh. “He’s the youngest.”
“Hehe, that is all right. I do tend to turn some stallions’ heads,” Somnambula giggled. “Anyway, I’m happy to see some familiar faces, and I hope you don’t mind if I join the troupe if you’re sightseeing.”
“We’d be delighted, Somny! We’re already having so much fun!” Applejack insisted.
“This guy certainly wouldn’t mind,” Spike teased, pointing to Stormy who was still love-struck.
“Anypony wanna look in this shop? They’re selling some pottery and other decorations and I think Mr. Cake would love some!” said Mrs. Cake, pointing to a nearby shop with tons of Southern Equestrian ceramics and other hand-crafted items on sale.
“Ah yes, this place always has some really good heirlooms. Let’s take a look!” Somnambula said, leading them in.
They all went in to the shop to look around. The mothers bought a few nice little vases and some shirts for their kids while Stormy kept begging Rainbow Dash for a special headdress that resembled Somnambula’s.
“Mommy, can I get this? Pleeeeease?!” he begged.
“Alright, if you get this, that means no ‘I Heart SE’ shirt like the others, okay?” Rainbow Dash told him.
“Okay, I’ll take the hat! Somnambula might think I look cool in it!”
Rainbow Dash giggled and put the Somnambula hat on the counter for the cash register and paid for it with a few bits. Stormy squealed with excitement and put it on. It was made mostly out of cheep cloth, including the small moon on the golden band, but Stormy didn’t mind. He had already seen a few tourists wearing one earlier and thought he would find one to buy. It was something many shoppers would get to show their appreciation for the Element of Hope, and now Stormy had it to show his admiration for Somnambula.
“I look so awesome! She’s gonna love this!” Stormy said.
“Stormy, what are you wearing?” asked Flurry from behind.
“What do you think I’m wearing! This is like Somnambula’s pharaoh hat thingy! She might think I look cool in it!”
“Pffft! If you say so.”
“Where is she anyway?”
“She was just over there buying something.”
“Hey, Somnambula, I have the same hat you’re-”
“Shhhhh! What’s she doing?”
Flurry stopped Stormy as Somnambula appeared to be busy over at another adjacent shop. She was talking to a peddler that was selling old used goods that appeared to be from many years ago.
“Are you sure you don’t want me to pay for it?” she asked him. “It’s old, but it must be worth something.”
“Not at all, Lady Somnambula,” said the peddler. “Consider that a symbol of my gratitude for ridding us of that fowl Anatankha. This village would have been long gone if it weren’t for you!”
“Well, if you insist. I appreciate your generosity.”
Somnambula bowed politely to the peddler and then walked away with a small shabby urn in her hoof.
“Somnambula, what did you get?” asked Flurry.
“I’ve been searching for this ever since I escaped from limbo,” Somnambula explained as Flurry and Stormy gathered around. “I found an inscription on a tablet some time after I returned that told me to look for an urn of this description.”
“An urn like that?” Flurry said.
“But there’s probably tons of those around…uh, no offense, Somnambula,” Stormy added as he quickly remembered who he was talking to and went back to gazing at her.
“Yes, but this one is special because it is a puzzle. The top of it is closed, but if I turn it around just right…”
Somnambula began to fiddle around with the urn. There were colored rings with symbols on them and she tried to match them up in a specific sequence that she knew how to decipher. A tiny scroll popped out of the top.
Somnambula looked carefully at the scroll. She then used her feathers to unroll and read it aloud.
To she who walks blindfolded yet does not fall
Stands up to a sphinx when her people call
Follow this path to find a temple out yonder
Your gift awaits you! Waste time no longer!
-An Old Friend
“That’s interesting,” Flurry said, stroking her chin.
“Cool! A treasure hunt!” Stormy beamed.
“What’s this here about treasure now?” Applejack asked.
“Somnambula’s on a track for some clues leading to something this little note told her about,” Flurry explained as everyone else gathered around.
“Very interesting, but I’m not sure what this is talking about,” Somnambula said. “I’m sure this must be a note that was meant for me a very long time ago, but whoever wrote it is sadly long gone now. I wonder what this ‘gift’ is they have left for me.”
“Well, we best not keep you waiting any longer,” Rainbow Dash said. “Let us know what it is when you come back.”
“Mommy wait! Can we go with her?!” Stormy said, moving in closer to his mother.
“Eh, I dunno, Squirt. This wasn’t exactly on our agenda for things to do in Southern Equestria.”
“Mommy, pleeeease?! We might find some really cool treasure!”
“Well this thing is meant for Somnambula, don’t forget, Stormy,” Chip said, pointing to the letter in Somnambula’s hoof.
“What makes you think he cares about the treasure, Chip?” Pumpkin whispered into Chip’s ear as she pointed out how Stormy had hearts floating out of his eyes again.
“Eh, you make a valid point.”
“Well guys, we did have some more things left to do today,” Spike said, taking out an itinerary and unfolding it. “Next up we were going to go see the royal gardens and then we head back to the inn for the night, but…eh, tomorrow might work out if we get up early enough in the morning.”
“This note also has a map that leads to a secluded area in the mountains,” Somnambula said, showing the note to Spike. “It isn’t too far from here and it’s not dangerous. I can wait to go there tomorrow if you would all like to come with me.”
“Well, I mean I don’t mind going if you kids wanna go,” Mrs. Cake said.
“I think it sounds like a cool idea, Mom,” Pound said with the rest of the kids nodding in agreement.
“Cup’s right,” said Applejack. “We could just add that to our itinerary and check it out. We might find somethin’ pretty special!”
“Alright then, how’s eight o’clock tomorrow morning sound to you guys?” Spike said, taking out a quill to write on the itinerary.
“Yeah, let’s do it!” Pumpkin said as the rest of the kids cheered.
“YES!” Stormy said, pumping his hoof in to the air.
“Hey Storm, what’s with the hat?” Pound asked.
“It’s called looking awesome, Pound! By the way, how do I look Somnambula?”
“Hehe, it becomes you, little Storm Streak.” Somnambula giggled as she patted him on the head.
“She…she complimented and touched me…”
Stormy lowered himself to the ground slowly as Somnambula walked away with the urn and the paper, back to her house in the village.
“Well Stormy, I hope your suggestion will lead us all to a really cool treasure tomorrow,” Flurry told him.
“Forget the treasure,” Stormy said, still gazing at Somnambula as she walked away.
“Come on, we best get him to the inn before he follows her,” Pound teased, trying to lead Stormy in the other direction, while his face was still love-struck.
“What do you think this thing is that’s waiting for Somnambula?” asked Pumpkin.
“I dunno, but I’ll bet it’s worth looking into,” Flurry replied.
Time for an adventure with Somnambula herself, starting off strong with a mysterious invitation from an equally mysterious source. This is gonna be interesting, especially since we don't just have Flurry and her new friends, but their mothers along for the ride as well. It's nice to see Mrs. Cake get a chance to come along, though I wonder how she'll cope if this turns into the kind of harrowing adventure it always ends up as when any of the Mane 6 or those connected with them are involved.
Also, looks like Stormy's caught what Spike caught when he fell in love with Rarity. Can't blame him: Somnambula is quite a pretty pony. I just hope the little guy doesn't do anything too stupid to try and impress her.
On another note, the title brings not only Moses and his contentions with Pharaoh to mind, but the Plagues song from Prince of Egypt ('Thus saith the Lord'). Such an epic song.
Stormy hadn’t spoken a single word for he was too busy staring at Somnambula. He had never seen a mare so beautiful as her. Not even thinking about how grown up she was compared to him, he was already smitten. His eyes and mouth had been wide open the entire time the others were talking, but he finally blinked them and revealed heart-shaped irises, while tiny pink hearts started floating out of his head.
“Wow…guys, she’s…she’s sooooo pretty,” said the enamored little colt.
Oh no lol I kind of figured that would happen the innocent young Crush
“Hehehe. You’re too late, Dash. All it takes is one look and he’s sold,” Spike told Rainbow Dash.
“Yeah, you would know, Mister Rarity’s-Number-One-Fanboy.” Applejack teased as she poked his belly.
Oh yeah we all remember how much you had a crush on Rarity when you're very young lol
Ok as I said before this is a pretty interesting starts and after that event with cozy glow everybody need some break and it look like they're going to the southern equestrian where's Somnambula lives and it looks like it's Just flurry heart and her friends Rainbow dash Applejack spike and mrs cake on a little vacation once they got there they met up with Somnambula and oh boy stormy has a little crush on her just like good times with Spike but anyway it looks like she found a note and apparently it was from a thousand years ago and whatever who that was wanted to give it to her to find it so it looks like they're going on a treasure hunt I wonder how this will go guess we'll find out next time
Alright, the start of another adventure, and we get an appearance from the Element of Hope, Somnambula, herself! This seems like an interesting quest. I don't know what lies at the end of this "treasure hunt", but if it is someone from Somnambula's past the first guess I would have is probably Prince Hisan.
Also, just like how Spike did with Rarity, Storm has love at first sight with Somnambula. Also just like Spike and Rarity, she is way out of the poor kid's league, but I bet his antics of trying to impress her will be entertaining, and hopefully will at least earn him her friendship.
Even the characters see the similarities to Spike and Stormy's crushes, even Spike himself!
Somnambula's sexy and she knows it. You know what they say when ya got it.
Oh boy. If Stormy is lucky, maybe Somnambula will give him a friendly kiss on the cheek like Rarity did for Spike.
If there won't be any "Prince of Egypt" shout-outs here *looks at the title* - I'll be a little bit disappointed. Still, I liked what you did with Cozy in last episode, so I hope this will be nice, too.
I would think Somnambula would have a husband by now or… unless had one back over thousand years ago
Can’t wait for chapter 2!
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I'd like to think she wouldn't leave her husband behind like that, especially if they had kids, so I'm guessing she's single, though I always thought her and Flash Magnus should get together. For now, putting Stormy in Spike's place in the show like he was with Rarity I thought would be awfully cute. :3
This is an awsome start of an adventure.
A pretty good start to this tale, also seems Stormy got bitten by the love bug that bit Spike all those years ago!
The riddle they found sounds interesting, wonder who could be behind it though?
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I agree with Flash since I thought the same. I do love the whole spike rarity thing you got here so it’s a lot of fun and can’t wait for more funny moments
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You and me both. That's one of my personal favorite couples. That actually does make me wonder a bit, if it doesn't conflict with any ideas you currently have, what if one future story has something like Flash Magnus and Somnambula are revealed to now be a couple together, or plan to get married soon, and Storm Streak needs to deal with the heartbreak of his first crush being with someone else.
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Lol, i had thought about that actually. XD
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Wow, I guess great minds think alike. Now I'm hoping you make that a story in the future. But, first things first.
A great start to this new episode of Flurry Heart's Story.
I like the idea of Flurry and her friends and their mothers (except Flurry's, but Cadence's absence is more than understandable given her job) and Spike going on a vacation, and the location they chose is an interesting one too. Also, I won't claim to have been the member of this site who read the most fics, but this is the first time I remember reading about Mrs. Cake going on a trip or an adventure of any kind, so I give you extra points for originality from that alone!
Seeing Somnambula is nice too. As I said elsewhere, she's one of my favorite Pillars and I wish we could have seen more of her, and this is doing a great job of showing more of her so far.
That said, Stormy certainly seems to be the one who's happiest at her presence. XD His sudden burst of puppy love is unexpected, but believable, and you're doing a good job of portraying it as endearing. I like Somnambula's reaction to it also. She takes it with humor and is not 'dismissively rude', which I feel is both true to her character and nice. As long as she doesn't lead him on or use it to feed her ego (neither of which I think she will do) I don't think there will be reasons to complain.
I like how everyone else handles the matter also. They rib Stormy about it, but they don't mock him, and that's nice to see. Also, kudos to Spike for being able to joke about his own feelings for Rarity. It shows he's moved on and can look back with both a recognition of the issue and not be weighed down by it.
Still... back on 'reasons to complain'... maybe 'complain' isn't the right word (although the mothers might complain soon that their vacation got ruined), but given the contents of that message, 'concern' certainly is, because any old friend of Somnambula who didn't go into limbo with her is likely to be lying about either being old, a friend, or both, unless there is some form of stronger magic at play. But we've seen at least two variations of magic that can leave ponies suspended in time (King Sombra's curse on the Crystal Empire and the Pillars' time in Limbo) so a third one isn't impossible.
Whatever the answers turns out to be, though, I look forward to reading it!
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Thanks for the feedback! :)
I wanted to still pay attention to the Mane Six in this story as often as I can and when I thought I could have their mothers tag along for this one, I figured it would be the best opportunity to give Mrs. Cake some love cuz she didn't really get enough of it in the official show.
Yeah, it was maddening that we didn't get a lot of her in the show, so I hope this helps!
Hehe, thanks! I was really excited to reveal that Stormy develops a crush on her. When I thought of it, I knew it would be a really silly and cute concept and it seems to work so far with the readers! And yeah, Somnambula doesn't strike me as the type of pony who would be rude about it. She takes it rather well.
The other characters will still tease him about it a bit, but he'll either admit they're right or just ignore them while staring and they roll their eyes. XD
Yeah, it is definitely a question of what will happen next. What they come upon will be revealed in the next chapter, but the answers to what happened will be later on.
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Thank you for the reply. :)
Again, as I said above, I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Aw, sweet lil' Stormy. Sorry for not checking this out sooner, it got caught up in my Read Later list!
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He's so fun to write for! :3
It's ok, there's only one new chapter after this, but hopefully I get Chapter 3 done soon too.
I don't blame Stormy for getting a crush on Somnambula there. However, I think she already has her eyes on a certain pegasus she's known for some time.😉 (Yes, I'm a Somnambula X Flash Magnus fan, and I don't care who knows.)
Well, time to see who this "old friend" of hers is and what they left for her.
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lol, I know how ya feel. :3
Get ready cuz this episode is one wild ride!