One of the downsides of being a confectioner is that Bon-Bon is busy every holiday and she has almost no time to do her own celebrating.
Lyra wants to help her marefriend - costumes, decorating, parties.
If only Lyra's common sense could match her enthusiasm.
A Breezie story written for TheJackOfTales for Jinglemas 2021!
Featured in Equestria Daily's 12 More Awesome Lyra and BonBon Fanfics To Read on 6/6/2022!
Thank you so very much for the story. I had a lot of fun reading it and it sounded as though you had a lot of fun writing it.
Hopefully sometime soon with more writing under my belt, I can make you a story about as good as this one (Gotta say, what I wrote for Jinglemas probably wasn't the finest effort).
Merry Christmas!
To be fair it really does.
And there's no such thing as too ship-y
Earth pony blasphemy!
Lyra is hinting that she wants a dog, Bon Bon. You may think that it would serve as a magnet to pull some of her overenthusiasm away from you, but in reality, it would only add to the amount of gusto that you have to endure.
Bori the pink-nosed reindeer / Had a very shiny nose / Although she never used it / 'Cause her set of antlers glows...
As far as I'm concerned, if you're writing Lyra and Bon Bon and they aren't enamored with each other, then you're not really writing Lyra and Bon Bon.
Those two...
Writing for them is the best fun...!!!
I would have added Pinkie was looking for a special way to apologize; ever since the Ponk implied Lyra was some kind of a rare and unique rock...and BonBon ended up having to push her down the road...
Good, that only in the ears...
Yeah, this is a really nice character piece and a lot of the phrasing here is really good.
Especially the description of the spy costume.