After losing a bet with Pinkie Pie, Rarity must bake cookies with her.
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So, in all reality this is a scene that I wrote up while rewriting one of my fics, Sidewinders and Shadows. I thought I would share this little bit with you guys.
Lol, that's a pretty good story. Rarity baking snickerdoodles
I liked how the plot went and I could imagine seeing Rarity's face after taking her first bite out of the snickerdoodle
Nice job
Cookies!!!
Awesome!
So cute! Parity Pie, or RariPie?
Well, that's pretty much the very definition of "short but SWEET".
It certainly succeeded in warming my curmudgeonly old heart!
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A fairly good short piece, but now I'm sad that it's just a short piece. Definitely needs more for readers like me to gnaw on, both before and afterwards. Adding this to my watchlist, so I can check up on the fic that this will hopefully be in.
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The fic it's in was due for rewrite, and this got worked in.
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It would be RariPie if it wasn't friendshipping.
1240625 But then what is it if it's friendshipping?!
Time to review!
1) The idea was great, but I feel like you could have done a little more with it. I understand that you're working on another project right now, so no biggie, but I think there's so much that could go hilariously wrong with Rarity trying to bake Pinkie Pie style.
2) That being said, the story was fun with what you have. It was a nice, easy read, and a fun story.
3) The two mixing/baking paragraphs were a bit long. You might want to break them up.
Other than that, I don't have anything to say.. Good job, and good luck!
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You could always just imagine that it really is shipping. (But it's still friendshipping)
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So much could've gone wrong, but somehow it went mostly right. Although I didn't mention Rarity rolling them.
1240842 RariPie it is! FANART TIME, ERMAHGERD
That was some deep shit, dude. There's some friggin philosophical, David Hume, Space Odyssey shit droppin' in here tonight. My mind was frigging blown, dude.
In all seriousness, it was cute and competently written. I think I might be compelled to read the original fic if I wasn't both very lazy and very busy. Nice job.
You can has review!